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I've to read the last few parts 😳 Will edit this by Monday with a long comment for all the parts.
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Some relations, bonds, stories seem so simple on the outside, but deep down there are so many intricacies to be dealt with. And some relations seem so complicated on the outside but are so simple in real. IshRa are a mix of both these situations. Both people who've had a horrible past which has left them scarred and insecure, fearful to love, both in need of healing and hence matching perfectly. But their ghosts of past come in the way. The way you've written this piece penning down not just their growing fondness, their love and their passion but also what stops them or makes them want to wait. Apart from Ishita's injury, them being in a house full of people ready to torment them, their responsibilities as parents and then of course again the ghost of their past.
I love how beautifully and flawlessly you described their rising passion, and their attraction, and desire to be with each other. And just how frank and honest they are with each other..Their playful banter between the moment just to lighten the situation for each other, such a thoughtful insight into the people they are.
Coming to the next part. LOVED RKB 😆 He just knows how to get Ishita to do what he wants. And he can be romantic, the Raavan Kumar that he is and then playful and witty all at the same time. Ishita is always entertained 😆
Beautiful parts. Loved each and every bit of the detail you've written. Like I said I love how through one situation you've explained every part of their relation and their being so beautifully. Their banters, their hesitation, their love, their past etc and through it all you managed to keep their characters the way they are.
Some amazing talent Aani. You should try and put up a blog of your work, would get so many hits and followers.
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