All Of Me, Loves All Of You - IshRa SS | Last Chp - Page 89 - Page 46

Originally posted by: janu12345

Chapter 5

A ziddi injured biwi... I don't envy putthar's job one bit. That they can banter in any situation without making it look weird or forced is one thing very unique about this couple. Love how you have described the banter between them aani!! 😛

Hey Janu 😊🤗 puttar has some task ahead alright...wives when miffed can be stubborn and an injured, miffed wife will be twice as stubborn 😆 and I have seen couples fight sometimes randomly out of nowhere over the most absurd things...so yeah I can see this happening here especially for these two

Just when I thought, wow this is interesting, the chapter was done! What a start to the day!😒

😳 I promise to make good on that

Gabbar.. dark lord... I looked for more apt titles.. just couldn't find one! I know I am late commenting but...This is absolutely slow poison, am quoting swaths again.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I love you guys too 🤗

😆 duly noted but in the end I hope I am forgiven 😳

Chapter 6

Raman is cluless why Mrs.Bhalla can't simply wear his shirt. And Missus is wondering why Raman can't get the simple point.. LOL!

One word for you - MEN 😆

Raman's line cracked me up - "I know you are afraid you won't be able to carry it off as well as I can Ishita...but it's okay. You can wear my shirt I won't judge you... not before I have seen you in this at least."

When he can tease biwi why miss the chance LOL

Loved how Raman sets the ground rules for romance. Very important considering the mad family they are a part of! Putthar's assurance about how no one will tease her, but knowing the family I still doubt it! :D

Call me crazy but..err I believe in rules...especially for certain things 🤣 You need to have clarity about stuff *ahem* 😆 and as for the tease...mums the word

A conversation... do you realize they have talked more in your SS than in any situation in the show where all we wanted them to do is talk... :D Raman's reply seemed so natural.. Some scars run deep, and it takes time and sometimes little more than that to heal! I can't wait for the next chapter Aani, knowing the way you write I am sure I won't be disappointed!😊😛

🤣 I know, guilty as charged...what can I say I am a chatterbox, so that comes across in my writing too ☺️ and thank you so so much for appreciating the turn of events and also having faith in me 🤗

Originally posted by: avni_19

Awesummm updateee! Loved it.. The whole confusion of wearing shirt or not wad supercute!

Raman's last comment was ouch moment. Poor guy! :(

Cont soon... looking forward for the next part! :-D

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Husbands can be so obtuse! and I have several examples in my life where I have passed scowls and eye rolls to my husband behind a guest's back. (that is when I somehow manage to zip my mouth for 10s or less and stop a retort)

Alas!!.. They just dont get it.(that includes the scowl and eye roll too). But Life would have been simple otherwise(and psst.. boring too..😉)

😆 You reminded me of a conversation Swathi...its hazy but I remember being with my granny (nani) and my mum who were discussing my grandpa and dad and well initiated my journey into womenhood with a simple phrase - all men are like that, just the same 🤣

So I loved when he doesn't get Ishita's embarrassment.

But then his concern doesn't pay attention to these (frivolous *eyeroll*) sentiments.

😆 Men will be men right

List of dos and donts.. 👍🏼👍🏼

Biwi really needs to stop doing it. I agree. Maybe concentrate more on the wrestling first😛

glad you approve of the list 😛😆 and Biwi will stop doing things for sure

And behind all the comfort and the assurance that he provides her, He needs it too - as much as her, if not more.

To be singularly cherished and loved for just what he is... and not what he has..

The disappointment and rejection that he has been through still haunts him.

He knows that the pain might have lessened since Ishita came into his life.. but scars do remain.

Yes just because he is a man doesnt mean things have to be any less straining for him...wanting to feel wanted by your partner is a very basic human emotion and when someone is not only rejected but emotionally abused in a relationship, as I believe Raman was with Shagun it has to leave behind scars

I am eager to know how Ishita will handle him😳

And Do I need to say this was beautiful writing? or I am stumped again?

So 🤗🤗 and 👏👏 for it.

P.S Your readers might beat me up - but I think this was a perfect UD and followup. and it ended with the proper note..

Guess, I have to start hunting good wig makers.

thanks for liking this twist Swathi and for all your kind words 🤗 dont worry you wont need a wigmaker 😆

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Thats an amazingly written part Aani

just loved ishita's hesitation..raman's assurance that she will not be teased..and yes he also has made it clear that he is not going to buy ANY Excuses😉

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: shinseen

Superb update..

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Beautiful update...the nok jok about the shirt and his reasons for selecting his shirt was so cute!

his rules, dos and donts were so romantic and such cute blush waala!

the last part really portrayed how much he had gone through...

cont soon!

Originally posted by: remya1990

Wonderful update Aani...
It was so romantic, sensitive and versatile update.
The nok-jok regarding the shirt was so genuine. That type of couple are them.

Sincerely telling Aani, while reading your 5th update and this one till the last part, I was expecting this to be a more romantic piece. But you took into another level. The romance turned to a serious and sensitive topic for them. A wonderful stroke Aani. You are a true writer.
Loved the attitude of Raman, telling her what he feels about what she does and talks. What he wants from her. And it a courageous talk of Raman to tell about his previous marriage. And with that, what I could get is Aani, he trusts her immensely. There is never a tinge of doubt in him about her...am telling this because he was once deceived. Something to be hidden is removed. I loved it.
In total Aani, am eagerly waiting for your next update. 😊

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Cute.

How typical of them! Raman reacted like a guy and she, a woman.😆

But the end was unexpected. I think Ishita should make a rule that they are not supposed to bring up Shagun when they are having a moment.

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

A very light and interesting update. :')

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Her in his shirt, a sight worth waiting. And what I loved was the way he instructed her on their time alone. She does need it. And the last part where he shared his past experience with her was touching, it takes more than just courage to accept his shortcoming and incompetence.