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appuss

@appuss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Thank you Aani for this wonderful part on valentine's day😃

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Remya

@remya1990

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Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Wonderful update Aani...
Happy Valentine's day.
Waiting to read more.
It was a heartfelt romantic update. Loved it.
Thank you for this.

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#293

You are one of the few people who make IshRa's kiss feel intimate in the most beautiful way. I love how it flows beautifully, being sensual and still not be over the top. Loved the sweet back and forth that they had after Ruhi interrupted them. Raman is right in the fact that they should make up for lost time now and I love how Ishita agrees to the same while blushing.

P.S. I absolutely loved how Raman and Ishita marked each other as theirs, those are the sweet little things that make your heart flutter.

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Aani you are a BRILLIANT writer! I was speechless for some moments. I read the 4 parts in one go and when it ended I got so disappointed, I wished I had more parts to read.

For 4 parts I was living the story, I felt I was relieshing and breathing every word.

Never stop writing 👏

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Dilshika

@Dilshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Lovely update! U written very well.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#296

The idea is to kill your readers? With such tease and the perfect play!

Update sooner than soon aani, you know I always look forward to your write up a and this one has got me hooked too. I found myself reading this one twice 😳

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#297

What a lovely update... thank you very much for the PM!

The way you described their first kiss... wow... well done.

Love their thinking about the consequences of Ru catching them, that even in that moment their embarrassment and parental responsibility comes first. And that even while discussing this they kept their hold on each other.😊

Their conversation about love bites and the future of this aspect of their relationship was both sweet and mature.. just perfect for where they are in their relationship with physical intimacy now- terrific.

Oh and special note to your chapter title... I don't know how you do it but it certainly adds and another angle of greatness to this chapter.

In conclusion: terrific job, can't wait for the next part & thanks for the PM!😃

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago