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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings

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Sorry for letting ur update page with a res *holding ears* 😳 Hectic schedule of uni. No time to breathe and baam, assignments, estimate and drawings 😭
Next time I will just comment right away or shall not res until am sure I can 🤔 😆

Back to business 😆


"Her body existed only where he touched her. The rest of her was smoke."
Arundhati Roy, The God of Small Things


I read the book, watched an adaptation, but, I don't remember this line. But after the update, this quote stayed with me. I don't know how to put it in words , but it's like your words breathe. The reader actually feels 'em while reading. You got such a way with them 😳 And anything which makes a clear visual and emotional image in my mind, remains memorable for me.

I held pride when she expressed herself honestly.. I was in awe.. when she voices her feelings, the reality of their wedding. They are real. This is the Ishita I've been watching since the beginning. The Ishita who got feelings and is human. ;) I so yay'd when she kissed him as he drew back. This is the girl who was dancing to seductive lines in front of her husband. She's a mystery and I like mysteries. 😆

May I dare to say this had an intensity as much as the emotional aspect, it was like I was savoring every moment of it. The heavy atmosphere feel when Raman puts his hand on her knee. Phew. ☺️ The gentleness and care Raman had. I'm so sure the update was short but all the moments there made every second feel like too long. Cause it was so touching and too beautiful with the realisations.

She 's been taunted too often by the very same husband while he also admired her and made his obvious remarks of his wishes. She faced so many hardships in the matter of love and acceptance, for someone to finally hold on to her, and take care of her instead of the otherwise. And here it's her husband who she came to love and respect. And it's obvious he was as much fearing her reaction as anticipating it. It's not surprising to read any bit of this update. So beautiful to show how she, in fact both waited for a moment like this.


But this Aani "She didn't want to titillate, she wanted to belong" reminds me of why I love her already. Masterstroke!!

Unconditional love come in all forms. From a wife slash lover to a parent, only Ishita can think how she disappointed Ruhi by not winning. But then she matters to Raman and Ruhi.

From the point where she says it's okay Raman to the kiss, it felt like am right there witnessing a couple's intimate moment when I shouldn't be. I saw each and every expression of theirs in my mind's eye.

Yaar no matter how many times I tell you, it won't do justice to how great a writer you are. No, no fangirling alert 😆 Genuinely you rock.

I just realised my fingers are numb so I assume I wrote too much. Sorry bhawnaon main beh gayi. Update ka asar 😉 😆

Now shameless reminder time: Update soon
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Lia 🤗

first of all no need to be sorry 😊

Honestly I have read the book like years ago and forgot the quote too but this one was in my 'quote-bank' ...yes I have a document with quotes thats threating to cross 150 pages soon ☺️😆 and this one just seemed right when I looked for one that would go with the chapter


Next I didnt even know there is a adaptation based on the book - is it a movie or a tv show?

@bold - ☺️ thank you, I try to read authors who can make me feel like I am right there with the characters and so try to do the same when I write, it means a lot to me to know my readers can visualize what I am creating 😃

@red - YES! Ishita is no ice maiden, a woman who can do that dance knows what she is doing...she has that confidence in her which makes her know she can seduce her husband should she want to do that...the only reason she has held back is, she is too afraid to make the first move...she has been rejected as a woman in her past because of her inability to conceive...she will completely come out of her shell only when she is wooed as a woman, made to feel like a desirable one😳

@blue - thanks again Lia 😊 they have tiptoed around this obvious attraction that always existed but now that has manifested into love...so yeah this is a big moment for both of them...this is the point of no return and the breaking of a barrier that can never come up again - I hope I am making sense 😆 so this is BIG...so thank you for finding it intense because I wanted it to have that quiet yet combustive sizzle 😳

@purple - isnt this what every woman wants? Someone to belong to...no woman wants to exist merely to titillate unless and until she is too selfish and self-absorbed

@green - that is so her I couldnt help but write it

@orange - Victory 🥳😆 that was the idea...to write something so intimate 😳

thanks once again Lia for this beautiful comment and for being so kind with your words and praise 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings

Shades of Scarlet. 😳 ☺️ Aani I must say it was another level of beautiful update from you.. 🤗

The conversation they have 😆 I love love that banter there, it felt too intimate, like they know each other too well, but are still trying to discover more of each other. It was amusing 😳

Ruhi being worried and Ishita Raman mortified at the thought of Ruhi seeing them kissing or Simmi entering the room 😆 Cause they were not really alone at home. Reality touch
👍🏼 😆 But the mention of Adi was awesome. Am dreading next parts Aani, as this was ☺️ ☺️

😆


Lia 🤗

@bold - thanks for saying scarlet and not gray 😉🤣 I wouldnt have been able to take it you saved me 😆

On a serious note though thank you am glad you liked their banter...I couldnt help but pen it down also its so them right and since I am a realist I had to include that Ruhi is worried about Ishita, any daughter would be in her place. Hope you like whats up next 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janu12345

Aaanniii...😛... This is the third or fourth time I reading the update as I set out to comment everytime... and trust me everytime i read it, it leaves the same impact on me...☺️☺️

Sometimes there is such beauty in awkwardness - This quote summarized their first kiss Aani!! Loved the way you described their first kiss...😳😳and how it was cutely interrupted by their worried daughter...Ishita immediately recollecting the prev encounter with Adi was sweet... They shall always be parents first... !! 😛 Raman's comment about the bhalla siblings was spot on, I had a visual of how that would ve played if the door was not locked...😃😆

You have your way with words even in this situation... loved the banter between the two... I had a goofy smile as I finished reading the update...Can't wait to read the next!!😛😳😳

PS: Very sorry about the late comment!


Janu 🤗

Thanks a lot doll for saying those words

The awkwardness was in the kiss and also in Ruhi' interruption right? And as for Bhalla siblings...lets say I identify with their lack of need to filter words 😆

Glad you liked the banter and no need to be sorry 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

loved it!

just reread to write the comment and still gushing over the update 😃😳
so ishra
ugh- we'll never see even a sweet kiss on the show :(


thanks Rutu 😊

@bold - Indian tv sweetheart not happening in this decade on a mainstream channel if its called Star Plus
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swathibalan

WOW Aani.. Simply breathtaking. The way you mixed Physical Intimacy and emotional intimacy...Brilliant
And even the way you wrote the kiss was so magical☺️, even for a moment I did not squirm but could feel the emotion beyond it.
I know you will never make your readers uncomfortable but I had to say that.
It was hot and beautiful at the same time.
The way they desired each other yet the tentativeness, a bit of restraint with which they touched - very natural.
And that's the best part of your writing (nothing Impossible in it😛🤣)


The banter was amazing esp the way you wrote it around her profession and so was his proposal at the end to make up for lost time😳

Amazing..Amazing writing aani.. waiting to know what happens next...
This is a Badge for you from me👏👏. If its possible to love a person more.. then just know that I love you even more..




thanks Swathi 🤗

@bold - for a person with theoretical knowledge 😉🤣 this means a lot so thank you

@red - 🤣🤣🤣 I would never forgive myself if I did the IMPOSSIBLE 🤣🤣🤣

@blue - I am so glad no one is complaining why Ruhi interrupted or they stopped because it would be weird to keep going at it when your child asks for you from outside the door right? 😳

thanks once again Swathi for your kind words
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

It was so haawt.loved it to the core.


thanks Lourel 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Res.

I see what you are doing here. I would love to respond in a much better way but I have to rush back to my books. Thank you for making my break wonderful.



take your time Sneha 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ohgod!



Aani aani aani... I absolutely loved, loved, loved and loved the ease these two slip into after the proximity... shows how far they've come in their relationship... for all the hesitation and apprehension before, the comfort and natural state of being after is just so so beautiful... this is how couples are.. this is how chemistry works.. I can only keep praising u for maintaining reality and weaving in all the emotions so wonderfully aptly...

Muuuaaahhh... love u!



Bhu thank you so much 🤗


I am so happy to know that this was real...because frankly I cant wrap my head around the concept of blushing like teenagers and all...in my head when two people are so attracted to each other they will act on it and when the attraction is justified and even acting upon it isnt wrong why would there be any awkwardness


These two arent teens, they are mature adults - as man and wife they love each other and with love comes also attraction or lust - to me there is nothing to be embarrassed about the fact - its so human so I kept this as REAL as I could so thanks for appreciating it 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravani_2311

Wow... What an update...
Mind blowing...
Loved it...


thanks Shravani 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Raatri

..wonderful and ishralicious update😊


thanks Raatri 😊

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