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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Shades of Scarlet. 😳 ☺️ Aani I must say it was another level of beautiful update from you.. 🤗

The conversation they have 😆 I love love that banter there, it felt too intimate, like they know each other too well, but are still trying to discover more of each other. It was amusing 😳

Ruhi being worried and Ishita Raman mortified at the thought of Ruhi seeing them kissing or Simmi entering the room 😆 Cause they were not really alone at home. Reality touch
👍🏼 😆 But the mention of Adi was awesome. Am dreading next parts Aani, as this was ☺️ ☺️

😆

Edited by MidnightMusings - 10 years ago

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janu12345

@janu12345

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Aaanniii...😛... This is the third or fourth time I reading the update as I set out to comment everytime... and trust me everytime i read it, it leaves the same impact on me...☺️☺️

Sometimes there is such beauty in awkwardness - This quote summarized their first kiss Aani!! Loved the way you described their first kiss...😳😳and how it was cutely interrupted by their worried daughter...Ishita immediately recollecting the prev encounter with Adi was sweet... They shall always be parents first... !! 😛 Raman's comment about the bhalla siblings was spot on, I had a visual of how that would ve played if the door was not locked...😃😆

You have your way with words even in this situation... loved the banter between the two... I had a goofy smile as I finished reading the update...Can't wait to read the next!!😛😳😳

PS: Very sorry about the late comment!

Edited by janu12345 - 10 years ago

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#273

loved it!

just reread to write the comment and still gushing over the update 😃😳

so ishra

ugh- we'll never see even a sweet kiss on the show :(

Edited by rutu83 - 10 years ago

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#274

WOW Aani.. Simply breathtaking. The way you mixed Physical Intimacy and emotional intimacy...Brilliant

And even the way you wrote the kiss was so magical☺️, even for a moment I did not squirm but could feel the emotion beyond it.

I know you will never make your readers uncomfortable but I had to say that.

It was hot and beautiful at the same time.

The way they desired each other yet the tentativeness, a bit of restraint with which they touched - very natural.

And that's the best part of your writing (nothing Impossible in it😛🤣)

And even when the couple is lost in each other, they still are parents. The slightest sound from their little one gets priority over any emotion. So I loved the maturity in that thought.

The banter was amazing esp the way you wrote it around her profession and so was his proposal at the end to make up for lost time😳

Amazing..Amazing writing aani.. waiting to know what happens next...

This is a Badge for you from me👏👏. If its possible to love a person more.. then just know that I love you even more..

Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#275

It was so haawt.loved it to the core.

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Res.

I see what you are doing here. I would love to respond in a much better way but I have to rush back to my books. Thank you for making my break wonderful.

Unres.

You took a whole chapter for a kiss? That's unfair but awesome at the same time.😆 I am just praying the next time they are in the mood, IshRa get to complete and not hindered by her periods or something else. *fingers crossed* Please keep writing Aani. Do not take a break because of the tracks not inspiring you. I will also pray that the writers come up with scenes that will be your muse.

Edited by Metamorphmagus - 10 years ago

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Bhuvana

@Ohgod!

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Aani aani aani... I absolutely loved, loved, loved and loved the ease these two slip into after the proximity... shows how far they've come in their relationship... for all the hesitation and apprehension before, the comfort and natural state of being after is just so so beautiful... this is how couples are.. this is how chemistry works.. I can only keep praising u for maintaining reality and weaving in all the emotions so wonderfully aptly...

Muuuaaahhh... love u!