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Posted: 10 years ago
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fabulous OS - the danger brings out the true emotions in a person
-Sona
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: namratha.shree

Beautifully written...too good

Originally posted by: jothi_ishra

very touching confession...totally loved it

Originally posted by: Rianshi

awesome n so romantic..!!






Originally posted by: disha93

Fantastic OS!!! Loved it



Originally posted by: swathin

beautifully written loved it


Thanks guys. Thanks for reading and commenting 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparikh

fabulous OS - the danger brings out the true emotions in a person

-Sona


Thank you Sona. I'd love to see a desperate RKB confessing his love after getting a fright. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: maaloo

Superb V !!! 🤗

Loved it.. very beautifully written.. the story has all the emotions.. of angst of tenderness of love.. a complete story.. loved it 👏


Thank you maaloo. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

Vee 🤗

This is amazing! Full of drama, suspense, action, emotions and last but not least Romance. The way you described the riots took me back to the movie Bombay and I could see Ishita with black marks on her face, disheveled running into Raman's arms.

Best part flirty puttar wanting their bedroom to be their private sanctuary. Puttar is so naughty! 😉

Sign for putter-missus bedroom. 🤣


Thanks for the shoutout! 😳


Thanks Doc. Love the bedroom sign 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: usaonly

Beautiful OS Veeann combine with everything all in one love action caring and emotion. We will never know how much the value of the one you love till you nearly lost them. I can feel Raman emotion and worry for Ishu and by the same Ishu also want Raman to be safe during he come and take her so much both love and care for each other and the confession come out nicely no need to set anything special love it. Thank you so much for PM. Eagerly waiting for the new story from you from A prop - thon thread dear. Have a wonderful week ahead dear.😊


Thanks mate. I got swimming pool AND bathtub, so my OS is going to be very wet 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Srishty-

V I'm so glad you decided to write again! FFs, OSs and SSs are all what I rely onto since this Shagun/Adi horrible track started.

Although filmy loved the confession! Raman and Ishita don't need to create situations to make it special (I hope CVs realise that).

Hope to see more writings from you.


Thank you Shristy. Hang in there, it can only get better ( we hope) 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

V! Wow!👏👏👏

This is great... you've made me a fan all over again!

I love the idea... so dramatic and OTT but maybe that's what they need. If they can give us the airport scene then why not something like this right?😛

We did have something similar riot wise in the past.😃

Love the confession, love that she knew he'd come, love the moment he covered her with the jacket, love the moment we wiped her feet.

But I don't think I need to tell you what I loved the most do I ? The conversation about their room being theirs...BLISS!🤣

I wait for that conversation... and the padlocks that accompany it... with bated breath!😆

Thank you so much for writing and sharing and taking our minds off some of our on screen frustrations as your writing always does!😃

PS: Being mentioned in your intro makes me feel like I've been acknowledged by a celebrity... just so you know...😳


Thank you R ( don't know what to call you, sorry 😃)

I know, I took my inspiration from the earlier riot - he was so irritated then, but imagine the angst now that he loves her. He would kill slash and burn to get to her - ufff.

You're the celebrity not me !!!!!!! I feel honoured that you guys read my silly fiction 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

beautiful dear...

u have rightly said...grand gestures doesnt matter...what matters is the love and togetherness...
lovely confession!!!!!!


Thank you Sahiba. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks mate 😃

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