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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa
V - Awesome...
Fultu filmy style...
Loved the scenarios...the angst ...the bechain...& finally confession...
U should have written the after confession part too...may be a second part to this...😉

Thanks Anu, but I can't write the Suhaag raat yet again. How many new ways can they do it yaar???? 😆

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan
Oh what a lovely read to wake up to ! Perfect confession V . And loved the part where he told her that their bedroom is their sanctuary and not grand central station. .. And thanks for keeping the one that shall not be named out of your OS 😛

Thanks G. It was my special mission to make sure their confession was not precipitated or influenced by the ones who shall not be named. I did name them in his self talk, but just to emphasise his thankfulness for Biwi.

Glad you liked it - you made me promise to write it after all, been though this is not what I was talking about on your thread.

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ankitasen

@ankitasen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Brilliant OS.
It brought me back to good old YHM days when Raman was so anxious for Ishu after a riot broke out in Delhi.

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

It was a lovely and beautiful confession...

Loved your writing...

Thanks for the pm...😊😊

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.TIA.

@.TIA.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

It was beautiful..loved it😛 The confession was just amazing n heart touching 😳

What a relief from balloon heads drama this was. Super.👏

Yeh Humara room hai...grand central station nahin 🤣 🤣 Tht line was sooo typically puttar types. I hope he will soon put no entry boards outside his room. It badly needed now 😆

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Wow...its superb. Wonderful os V di and perfect confession. It cant be more beautiful. Cvs...if you promise to give us such a heartful confession, even we dont ask for dates and trips. That line just touched my heart. Maine itne plans bnaye confess krne ke but the moment I thought I lost you...I couldnt help but say.

Frankly speaking V di..u hav raised my hopes. I srsly wonder now..maybe cvs are prolonging the confession for one such wonderful moment only. I know its hopeless hope but umeed pe to duniya kayam hai. Maybe...galti se cvs kuch acha dikhade.

But I liked this concept...love confession out of fear of losing love. One of the best confessions I hav ever read here. All the emotions beautifully portrayed. And do I need to say you are a good writer..doing good job blah blah. Ofcourse not..cos we know u are good. Thnks for the wonderful confession. Iqrar - Beautiful title.

P.s. Srry for being late. I know it took time...but glad I caught up with this one.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Veeann

Thank you R ( don't know what to call you, sorry 😃) You can call me Anu... or RCF.. or R.. whatever is easier!

I know, I took my inspiration from the earlier riot - he was so irritated then, but imagine the angst now that he loves her. He would kill slash and burn to get to her - ufff. For sure... what an image Romantic Kumar is amazing but RKB is is my favorite avatar...*wipes drool*
Thanks for the image...*sigh*

You're the celebrity not me !!!!!!! I feel honoured that you guys read my silly fiction 😳Oh please... all I do is ramble and take my frustrations out on a thread and then comment on the FFs I turn to for escapism. I don't think you know how many times I've read your works...seriously, I admire your skill so much. Take pride in your work and skill, you are very deserving of all the praise.🤗

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shadeslayer

@shadeslayer

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

That was so freaking cute!!!!! Especially their conversation when she finally wakes up! Adorbs!!! 😊

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Pooja

@Divan.Pooja

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Beautifully written loved their conversations!

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: shalz_123
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aah tht was some filmy proposal...jhinchak style... 😃 superb romantic... i was reading this in a public area...n i had a tough time hiding my blush... 😳

Thank you Shalz 😃

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