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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Ankita..that was soo emotional yet awesome..loved it..perfect story on republic day..

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: VENBA
Just awesome yaar..
You have written it so beautifully and emotionally..👏👏
Just loved it..
You always amaze us by your writing...👏👏

thnks a lot yrr

am glad u found it worth reading n commenting

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shavi2311
hi ankita...

its very heart touching nd emotnal...

i cant stop myself frm imagining it..

loved ishra meeting and looked themselves in each others eyes...

ishu got ready fr raman...in his fav nighty...thts so lovely...

ruhi's dialouges was very cute...

esply wen ishu said ruhi proudly saying tht her father fights for india...thts was epic...

i never tought raman become emotnal... u exprsed it very well... hw a father mising his precious monts with the child...

romi's wrong timing nd ishra kitchen romnce was apt...

i vl b waitng fr one rain...this compltly stole my heart...

i literally had tears wen raman is mising fr 3 days...

great work yar...

thnks a lot for liking shavi

such long comments are least i expect that too from such a story...still you liked it..aww🤗

thnks for the wonderful review

those small moments which I wanted to show...you have felt the...wat morecan I ask foR

i think that makes my story worthy

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: usaonly
Hi Ankita really very thoughtful writing. i can connect to your story and the emotion you had put in. I have my nephew who had go to the war out of the country so every time we heard the news about the bomb or the attack we can only pray for his safety and come back home soon. You are very well portray emotional for Raman 's family what they are go through and waiting for him to come home safety. Love little moment Ishra spend their precious time together and they never know when they part for the war they will come back to see each other or not. Happy for Ishu to have 2nd baby but sad for both too cause Ishu have to Takecare of herself during pregnant without the husband by her side.For those army people duty come first. So salute to them all. And thank you Ankita for your hard work and you have to go through so many problem just to write the story for all of us.❤️🤗

awww...you could connect to it

now this one line made my writing worth...am so glad i was able to execute this idea

yeah...i know..for army men..their duty is frst

they miss so many precious moments of their life

and not just they...their families also suffer

still they are their for their country first

am glad u liked the small scenes and emotions i displayed ..though I cant even imagine to the extent they face

thnks for liking and for awesum review jum🤗