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sumiko

@sumiko

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Posted: 11 years ago

For Adi the duffer

Ishita has to suffer

To give his mother glory

Ishita has to say to Shagun sorry

Toshijee's sense of justice

Is neither urban or rustic

Adi must be there for Lohri

And ok for Sarika to be trapped by Romi

Requests ishita to say words of regret

No care for her self respect

She must learn to forget

Can't find Adi-- Ishita to blame

Shout at her she must remain even and same

A scoop of ice cream and cake

An in between call- is all it takes

Raman thinks to bring his Ishu back

And say and do as per the Bhalla track

Don't find fault with Shagun not to hold

And ultimately leave the Bhalla fold

All their love means naught

Because they have been caught

At their most Selfish best

There is no need to recount the rest

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Posted: 11 years ago

In the end I want to add -

N this is how viewer's patience is put to test. 😛

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very well said.

You have a very good hand in poetry👏.

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nb.neha

@nb.neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful :)

So true. Glory of a selfish woman needs to be satisfied. Her inflated ego needs to be satisfied by an innocent lovely girl. The husband has no care for his wife's self respect. All he cares is for his son to be there. And the mother in law has surpassed everyone. Raman again shouted at ishita. He again blamed her. So disappointed with him. Adi adi adi... that's all he knows.

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nb.neha
Wonderful :)
So true. Glory of a selfish woman needs to be satisfied. Her inflated ego needs to be satisfied by an innocent lovely girl. The husband has no care for his wife's self respect. All he cares is for his son to be there. And the mother in law has surpassed everyone. Raman again shouted at ishita. He again blamed her. So disappointed with him. Adi adi adi... that's all he knows.

But, at the end, they will show Raman being guilty and seeking sorry and everyone will go gaga for him. But, he is gone for me from accident track. However much he feels guilty or sorry, some pain can not be relieved by mere apologies. Ishita doesn't apology or feel guilty. I would say it is actually good. Cos, she at least knows that some pain can't be healed by sorry, so it's better not to say sorry and raise the hurtful topic.

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Arooj

@Arooj.M

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice poem. But it's so sad! 😭

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sumiko

@sumiko

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arooj.M
Nice poem. But it's so sad! 😭

I know it is sad but really I felt so bad for Ishu whose maternal instinct is so strong and the Bhallas are only worried about their Adi and ignoring that Ishita loves him too and instead of looking at the situation that way they all accuse her,tell her to keep off,accuse her for being over sweet and jagatmata and then shouting at her and then wanting her to say sorry. Its just awful. They have as if all ganged up against her.

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