TS ~My Heart Aches As Well~ *completed*

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Remya

@remya1990

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Wonderful and heart touching update.
Ishita 's dialogues and behaviour was perfect. I don't know whether this would happen in the episode. But this is an inevitable in out hearts.
Thank you for this dear, let in our hearts Ishita do this.

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kuls

@theshushreader

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

hey sakshi..

first take a bow for this marvellous piece of writing..👏👏

heart touching emotional update..

am literally in tears now..😭

the title is soo apt... seeing ishu's state those read this os.. even their heart would ache for sure😭

ishu's pain her insecurities, wat she felt wen raman said those words to her wen there was no mistake of her.. was pictured perfectly..

i do felt bad for raman, as he couldnt see his life in pain..but he really needed this reality check.. infact the whole bhallas needed it..

the best was her silence n i hope the cvs do show her silent with all the members in the house..

the way u have portrayed ishu's pain with each n every word of hers was heart wrenching..

awesome concept..

infact am speechless with this work of yours..👏👏👏

poor ishu she is already in hell pain.. aur yeh nagin shagun..😡😡😡

chot pe namak chidane aagaye.. kameeni kahin ki... i damn soo hate her..

the conversation between ishu-toshiji as well as raman - ishu was out of the world..

i really felt the intensity of her pain.. n my heart went out to ishu in some lines like

"Waqt ne mujhe bata diya hai mummyji ki mai laakho me ek nahi laakho me akeli hoon.. isi waqt ne mujhe meri jagah bhi yaad dila di hai."

"But I am happy being Ishima of Ruhi and I owe you my life for giving me Ruhi isliye i will always respect and love you. But sorry.. I cant be the stone anymore..."

i felt very terrible in these two lines especially

sakshi this is an amazing pieces of writing..👏👏👏

i know this is a os.. one shot..

but i would be really glad if you could continue..

raman has made the damage beyond repairable..

so i would like to see him trying to make up for her..

i would love to see romi simmi rinki n mihir trying to cheer her up

or something like that..

i would be very excited to read..

this is just a request from my side

please do continue..

n if you do continue do pm me..

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Angel

@hasiniangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Amazing

this is what I want ishu to do

If I have written a OS , this is what exactly I would have written

Brilliant!!!!!!

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

That was just so poignant and beautiful Sakshi! Amazing job portraying Ishita's feelings and emotions.

I know this is an OS but could you add another part and tell us what Raman does to make everything perfect again. It's a request from my side. Pretty please.

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Hats off.loved it to its core.
👏 👏 👏
👏 👏 👏

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bluebell11

@bluebell11

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

I was literally in tears reading this!

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barun_mania

@barun_mania

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

really very heart touching,i want this to happen and realize the importance of Ishita

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

awesome heart touching os love it how you show her pain love the silent treatment if she did it in the show it will be good as all of them deserve it you make me cry too good thx for it

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Beautifully projected. entire bhalla family needs reality check.heart breaking dialogue was when ishita said mai lakhon mein ek nahi hu lakhon mein akeli hu.ishita shud maintain this in show otherwise they wil nvr open their eyes. bt it was literally teary to c ishita lik tat diff frm always smiling ishita.plzzz continue this n give it a ending asap ccan't wait at all.this is a amazing piece