TS ~My Heart Aches As Well~ *completed*

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agneeputra

@agneeputra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow fantastic display of emotions ... hope this happens in the show after the stupid apology drama...ishitas importance to be made an effect and then they will know abt her...its truly of Ishitas pov and its superb

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Amritashetty

@Amritashetty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I have never started crying after reading something so beautifully portrayed. Amazing piece you have written. I wish this was actually shown in the show so that the family realizes what they are doing to ishita. Well done.

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This is the finest OS I've read. Also, it being an OS, it was direct and to the point. Brilliant character sketch. I could clearly imagine Ishita, Raman and Mummyji. I know my comment is too long. However, your work is just too good. Plz write more. God bless!! 👏 Furthermore, us readers deserve a second part!

Edited by umeirah02 - 10 years ago

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sweety_virgo1

@sweety_virgo1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Just loved it 😊 so emotional and heartbreaking 😭
superb OS..beautifully written that i can clearly imagine Raman and Ishita 👏

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

that was perfect...
and i actualy want this to happen in serial...
each and every word is true...
I realy felt bad for ishita...
Selfless Ishita and Selfish Bhallas

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This was fantastic! 👏 Ishit'a emotions were beautifully portrayed. ❤️ Please please write a continuation to this please!

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canine

@canine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

My eyes filled wid tears aft reading
Amazing yar ,seems everything is happening around...

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

aww i'm in tears- so sad. btw that's depression

really well written

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Beautiful OS Sakshi.Feel sorry for Ishu she has to go through all this pain cause of Raman love for Adi. Hope Raman can see how Shagun and Adi had mess up for his family.