SS: My Wounds...last part on pg 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys i m really very sad with the behaviour of bhallas including raman which they have shown to ishu...she dont derserve this type of treatment after giving herself to his familiy that too from raman...so to take my frustration out i m writing a story on it...hope u all like it...
Here we go...Not a proof read...

Ishita was totally broken by raman's words...

"ishima bane ka bohtu showk hai na ...ek bache ko samhal nahi sakti ho tum"

"bacho ko smahalna nahi aata tumhe"

"nahi main apne bte ko leke aaunga"

"mere aur mere bte ke beech koi nahi aa sakta"

Ishu was in their room sitting between the dressing table and the side table and was crying...

"mein jitna tumhe adi ke kareeb lana chahta hoon tum utna door jaati ho"

"tumhe adi ki ma ban na hai ya bas aise hi bol rahi thi"

Ishu cant even digest that it was raman her raman who accused her for the distance between him and his son...

"how could u even say that raman...i have done all this for ur happiness...mein shagun ko is ghar mein jhel rahi hoon bcoz of ur happiness as adi wont stay here without shagun...par shayad mein kitna bhi bkaru kam pad jata hai" ishu dozed off in her sob...thats when raman enterd the room and found her like that...he knows that he has said some mean words in his frustration...but it was late as the words have done the damage...

Next morning ishu woke up and found herself on the floor..."chalo ishita get ready for ur clinic...may be u ll get some peace there" thinking that ishu went to freshen up and was ready to leave and came down and to her surprise she saw shagun and adi in the living and she was happy that adi is back but what she was unknown that some more was coming to her...toshijji came to ishu and asked her to apologise to shagun so that adi will stay at bhalla house and ishu did it again bcoz of her love for raman and ruhi..."shagun i m so..." but shagun is a witch..."no ishita i shud be sorry bcoz i came into ur personal space..."...ishu was silent all the time and told everyone that she is leaving for the clinic...to which toshiji said..."par puttar abhi to lohri ki tayyari baki hai na tu abhi jayegi to..."...but ishu was quick to answer..."mummyji i have done everything regarding that only the wood need to be get to fire...wo romi dekh raha hai..." to which romi said in a serious tone to toshiji.."meine aur bhabi ne sab kar diya hai to aap logo ko chint karne ki zarrorat nahi hai...chaliye bhabi mein aapko clinic chod deta hoon..."..."hmm chalo"...

"par tu kyun...ishita ki car ko kya hua..."raman was quick to ask but only get serious stare from ishu and romi..."bhabi ki car servicing pe hai isiliye"..."haan to mein chod deta hoon na tu office ja romi..." to which romi gave stern reply..."koi zaroorat nahi hai bhai app apne bte ke saath rahiye mein apni bhabi ka khayal rakh sakta hoon...u have fun"ishu kept her hand on romi's shoulder asking him stop it to which romi cud only say..."chaliye bhabi"...both dever bhabi left the place by giving serious glare to raman...

"Bhai mein jaanta hoon aap adi se bohut pyar karte ho lekin adi ke pyar ko phir se pane ke liye jo aap log kar rahe ho na wo bohut galat hai"

"Mihir"

"nahi bahi aaj nahi...appko kya lagta hai ki adi yeh sab khud kar raha hai...pls bhai ruhi tak ko dikh raha hai ki yeh sabshagun ka kara dhara hai to aap logo kyun nahi dikhta..."

"mein jaanta hu mihir yeh sab shagun ki chaal hai...par mein adi ko ek acha environment dena chahta hoon bas..."

"aur aapne is sabke liye bhabi ko hurtkiya...aur wo bhi aise ki shayad romi hi nahi main bhi na rahunga aage agr aap logo ne bhabi ke saath aisa kuch kiya to... aur bhai adi ko wo tabhi mil sakta hai jab shagun us se door ho...mein jaanta hun bhai ki aapko bhi acha nahi laga bhabi ko hurt karke par bhai u don't have any right to question bhabi's mother hood...haan mujhe romi ne sab bataya...i m sorry bhai agar maine kuch zyada bola to...chalta hum bhai...take care..."

Raman was left all alone in the living room to think about his deeds which he has done in last 24 hrs...even he was not happy for all that but whatever it is he has done wrong and he has make it for his JKR...

"i really need to do something..."


Thats it guys will write the next part tomo...pls let me know hows it...i m really fed up of this GKC thing in the show...PMs later

love u all...

Part 2 - Pg 8

Part 3 - Pg 14

Last part - Pg 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional update...
Ishita pain pictured perfectly,, the pain she is going through is really felt bad...
Raman just disgusting fellow, cant he see how much she did for him😡😡...
awwah poor ishita slept while sobbing..., this toshiji cant they see are all of them blind...
well done Romi... - romi's reply to raman was -"koi zaroorat nahi hai bhai app apne bte ke saath rahiye mein apni bhabi ka khayal rakh sakta hoon...u have fun" just awesome...
Mihir-Romi good job👏👏...

well written...
waiting for next update...
continue soon...
Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nice update hope this happens in the show..just love it pls do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow wow wow nice one..hope this happens in the show..pls do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
ishita and romi's bonding,I just loved it
please continue...
if possible please PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for this... so much.

Well done.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshatha19

Emotional update...

Ishita pain pictured perfectly,, the pain she is going through is really felt bad...
Raman just disgusting fellow, cant he see how much she did for him😡😡...
awwah poor ishita slept while sobbing..., this toshiji cant they see are all of them blind...
well done Romi... - romi's reply to raman was -"koi zaroorat nahi hai bhai app apne bte ke saath rahiye mein apni bhabi ka khayal rakh sakta hoon...u have fun" just awesome...
Mihir-Romi good job👏👏...

well written...
waiting for next update...
continue soon...


Thanks akshata...
i m really upset with this GKC crap yaar and was so frustrated that i just penned whatever came to my heart...i cant see that ppl are questioning ishu's mother hood her parenting and that too raman who left his kid to get rid off his pain...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start yar
ishu's pain was clearly visible
romi i loved him in this n mihir too
ishu is having a strong bonding with her devar's

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