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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: lourel24

Superb.You know what few days ago I have dreamed of romi n Mihir taking ishu side n leaving bhalla house.Though leaving part was not visualized in ur story but Mihir n romi part was done n I lovd it.I loved romi's reply to it bits.pm me plz


ha ha ha everybody of r sailing in the same boat now a days...thanks for liking dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Rianshi

nice.. plz update soon..!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Loved this part..
Awesome..👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: VENBA

Loved this part..

Awesome..👏👏


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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Hi guys...this part contains both ishu and ruhi pain...i have prepared a ground for ishu burst in the next part...he we go...not a proof read
Part 2

Ishita was in her clinic and she was getting continuous calls from raman but she was not at all in mood to even shout or scold him...so she just did what she can do and thats ignored his calls...here raman knew that she is not take calls now and she ll not talk to him if he calls on land line as she did the same the other day also...

"Raman aap humesha aise nahi kar sakte...pehle mean baatein bolo aur phir maafi mango...aap aise kaise soch sakte hai ki mein bacho ko nahi samhal sakti...is baar mein chup nahi rahungi raman..."

At evening ishu returned home and she was welcomed by ruhi...ruhi came running to her and hugged her...in all this drama at home ruhi and ishita were the solace for eachother...

"Ishima aap itne late kaise...i was missing u...mujhe aaj Chinese khana hai..aap banaoge na..."...ishu was about to answer that shagun said...

" ruhi beta ishita to abhi thak ke aayi hai na main bana deti hoon...ishita tum relax karo"...

"mereliye noodles ishima hi banayegi...agar aap banana chahte ho to aap adi bhayya ke liye bana sakte ho...ishima aap fresh ho jayiye meine aap ke cold coffee banayi hai wo peen eke baad aap aur mein noodles banayenge...maine apna homework bhi finish kar liya...taki aapke sath time spend karun..."

"Aww mera bacha...aaj eri beti ne meri liye cold coffee banayi hai...thik hai mein fresh hoke aati hoon...aap tab tak romi chachu ke saath khelo phir ru aur ishima milke banayenge ok..."

"Bhabi mujhe bhi aaj noodles khana hai...bohut din hogaye..." said romi...

"Bhabi mujhe bhi" there came simmi,rinki and mihir's voice at once...

"thik hai aaj sab noodles khayenge...humari ruhi ka fav haina..."

"Mujhe Italian khana hai...aur vo bhi meri mom banyengi aur koi nahi...jaise ruhi aapke haath nahi kahna chahti vaise hi mein inke haath ka nahi kha sakta..." Said adi...

Shagun was caught in her own words now as she have to cook for adi which she have stopped long back and she hates to that...

Ishu was silent as she don't want to create any scen in front of ruhi...romi gave look at toshiji but she was least bothered by adi behaviour which irked him more...

"Bhabi aap fresh hoke aao...mein aur ruhi aapka cold coffee ready karte hai"...

Ishu smiling said.."Okay..."

Ishu left to her room to freshen up...leaving shagun and adi in a shock as she was least effected by their word...instead of answering adi back she just gave a silent treatment and left...actually this is wat ishu wants to happen...unless and until ishu will stop reacting to adi's words he will not stop mocking her its reverse psychology...if she stops reacting to him and his rude words he will have some time to think about his deeds and then some enlightenment will defo happen..this is wat she wants...just to give adi his space to think about it...yes she was hurt by his rude words but at the end of the day it were all shagun words which were coming from his mouth thats it...the only person whom she has to show her place was shagun and she will do it for sure...and today she have done it with her silence...

After freshening up ishu went to the kitchen and had the cold coffee prepared by ruhi and then they started preparing noodles for everyone...and on the other hand shagun was cooking pasta for her brat...she just falled on her words to which she was making the food for adi...everybody gathered for dinner...ruhi, romi,rinki, simmi,mihir and sharvu were excited for noodles..and here shagun was so excited to serve the pasta prepared by her as its raman's fav also...

"arey wah aaj itaian aur Chinese ek saath wow...ruhi,papa aur ishima ka fav..." ishu was not paying any attention to raman...

"haan papa..."

"to aaj papa aapka aur ishima ka fav khayenge..."

"arey raman tumhe to Chinese pasand nahi hai na..." said shagun so that he will eat pasta made by her but to her surpise raman was all set to pacify his JKR...

"Shagun pasand na pasand waqt ke hisaab se badalti hai aur meri bhi badly hai aura b mujhe Chinese pasand hai..." raman was polite at the same time he showed shagun her place once again...whatever she does she will be an outsider for her...

Everybody started eating and here raman was really wanna talk to ishita so he was trying to ask her to come to the room but ishita was not giving any heed to raman bcoz even the lecture to shagun dint help him to earn some brownie points...

After witnessing that even raman is eating the food cooked by ishu adi was out of control so he yelled at ruhi that she is disrespecting shagun her real mom and supporting a step mom...this was enough for rkb to raise his voice on adi but soon he was silent when adi said that he always shout at him only as he don't love him...

"Adi aisi baat nahi hai beta papa aap se bohtu pyaar karte hai"

This irked ruhi that even after this raman is pacifying adi so our sherni lost her temper...

"Adi bhayya aapko kuch nahi dikhta...aapko ishima pyar nahi dikhta...aapne humesh ishima ki insult ki hai...aur aaj phir kar rahe ho...aapko kya lagta hai ki aap kuch bhi bologe meri ishima ko aur mein chup rahungi...no way ok...agar aap chahte ho ki mein shagun mamma ki respect karu to aapko bhi meri mamma ishima ki respect karna hoga..."

"Ru...adi bhayya aapse bade hain beta aise baat nahi karte" said ishita...and even toshiji nodded her head agreeing to ishita...

"acha dadi agar adi bhayya mujhse bade hai to ishima bhi adi bhayya se badi hai to unhe bhi ishima se aise baat nahi karna chahiye...wo meri mamma hai aur koi unse aise baat nahi kar sakta"...

Raman was dumbfounded with the sudden turn of events during their peaceful dinner and was amazed the love ishu and ruhi share...

"Ruhi shravu...chalo romi chahu aap dono ko ghumake late hai..."

"Nahi chahu mein kahin nahi jaungi aap aur shravu jao...agar mein gayi to adi bhayya phir se ishima ko pareshan karenge ...chalo ishima"..saying that she just dragged ishu to their bedroom...

Adi left with anger...

"yeh kaisi batein kar rahi ruhi...kay sikha rahi hai ishita use...badtameezi karna..."

"Chup kar shagun...tu to mat hi bol parvarish ke bare me...hume dikh raha hai ki tune adi ko kya sikhaya hai...aur rahi baat ishita ki use se achi maa ruhi ko mil nahi sakti to tu to bol hi mat samjhi..." said simmi...

"mein to bas ruhi ki fikar kar rahi thi bas..."

"uski tumhe fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi shagun..hum hai..."

"Okay"...shagun also left the dining area...

"Mamma aur bhai aap dono kya chup ho...bolo jo ruhi ne kaha sach to hai...ishita kya yeh sab derserve karti hai jo aap log kar rahe ho...haan mein bhi chup thi jab ishita shagun se maafi maang rahi thi lekin aaj ruhi ne meri aankhe khol di...aap log ruhi aur ishta ke saath galat kar...mein maatni hoon adi ko humari zaroorat hai par ishita aur ruhi ko bhi hai..."

"Simmi puttar tu kamre me ja...yeh ghar nahi circus ho gaya hai..jaha ek bach apne bado ko nacha raha hai aur wo naach bhi rahe hai...meri baat ka to kisi par asar hi nahi hota kam se kam ruhi ki samajh aaye to acha hai...chal simmi..." said bhalla ji...

Every body left the dining area leaving toshiji and raman to think about their blind love for adi which is spoiling him more...

In ishra bedroom ishita was consoling the crying ruhi who is frightened by her father's gestures towards adi which may cuase him to choose shagun and adi over ishu and ruhi...yeah she was really afraid about it...

"Ishima agar papa ne shagun mama ko chuna to mein aapke saath hi rahungi...mujhe nahi rehna shagun mamma aur adi bhayya ke saath..."

"Aisa kuch nahi hoga betu...ishima aur papa aapke saath hi rahenge..."

"Nahi ishima adi bhayya keh rahe the ki shagun mamma humari asli mom hai aur papa unhi ko choose karenge..."

"aisa kuch nahi hai..papa appse aur ishima se bohut pyar karte hai wo hume kabhi nahi chodenge bacha..."

"Promise"...

"ruhi promise..."

Ishita hugs ruhi and thinks about everything happened today in the dining table and whatever happened since shagun enterd bhalla house..."no shagun i wont let u to hurt my daughter again...u have hurt me but not my daughter...i need to take a stand for this...u can test my patience evrytime...

This all was witnessed by raman standing at the door...


Thats guys for today...

Hope u all like it...sorry if i dint reach ur expectations...love u all...

Part 3 - Pg 14

Edited by Lata_ishra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Superb update dear..
Waiting eagerly fr next update
Pls continue soon
Edited by Lucky.13 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
superb update👏
this tym i want ishu totake a stand for herself and ruhi not raman and give an earful to raman , bhallas, and tat airhead😡these guys really need a reality check...
cont soon...😊
waiting😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Lovely read.. Loved Ruhi and other Bhalla family members. Hope they knock some sense in Raman and Toshiji
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Suprb...
Ruhi bak on form...
I love her to see lik this...

She is nly protector of ishu...

Raman nd toshi u guys just open ur eyes...

Shagun u r nothing fr raman...


Adi if raman plays his game u wont tolerate betr b in ur limits...

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