reminiscing ishra moments... raman helping ishu on pg 53

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#391

Wow! The second part was worth the wait.

Loved the sweetness- the shyness and understanding between them both was refreshing.

Really enjoyed your twist on this incident, thank you so much for sharing.😊

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swaram

@swaram

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#392

That was beautiful, so simple and neat and yet so sensuous. Humour ka sahi chord pakada, all the dialogues, typical Ravan Kumar style! 😉 👏

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#393

wow maanvir, that was too awesome. i seriously hav dont words on ths piece of writing. mujhe nhi pta tha ki deleated part itna zyada beautiful hoga. completely loved it yaar right frm brginning tll end. finally they confessed nd waiting for their special nite. dear u r a fabulous writr nd u should write more romantic writeups. waiting for nxt nd thanx for pm.

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#394

lovely and loved it!

that sweet understanding of each other <3

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swathin

@swathin

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#395

beautiful update dear
wow ...the way they confessed
loved it
song selection was best

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#396

So perfect never thought fracture track can be sicu beautiful loved it to the core evryline was super n dialogues r amazing .Can't say how much I literally loved it. Ramans antics first thn tat greeting scene thn dinner n finally confession grt yaar u r a awesome writer.loved when said tab bhi tumse pyar karta tha aaj bhi karta hu n hamesha karta rahunga .superb se bhi upar