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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Hayaa.m

Just supper awesome.

Can u write another part as well. I want to see IshRA, Toshi jee's guilt especially. Please if u plan to write another part do pm me.

i dont knw bt if i vl write i vl pm u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
It's so good that u've brought this issue to the fore! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Indie2121

It's so good that u've brought this issue to the fore! 👏

thanks...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Aww...that was wonderful one shavi
loved itt
i so so want to c such scene on the show
beautiful os
romi said watever is true

P.S. i askef u on other post also but u didnt c perhaps
i wanted to confirm u r d same one on insta naa
we never had a talk or introduction...thats y asking
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Aww...that was wonderful one shavi

loved itt
i so so want to c such scene on the show
beautiful os
romi said watever is true

P.S. i askef u on other post also but u didnt c perhaps
i wanted to confirm u r d same one on insta naa
we never had a talk or introduction...thats y asking


thank u...
yea i didnt see the post...
iam the same buddy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
nyc story...😊😊😊 i think u should continue this...its really a vry nyce story ...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: nadira26islam

nyc story...😊😊😊 i think u should continue this...its really a vry nyce story ...😃

thank u so mch... bt seeing on loction updte... i hate mys elf thinking abt shw...its highly imposs nw to write som thing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Mashallah dear..its amazing OS.I really hope v could c diz scenes in d show..plz continue fr another part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AishaSate

Mashallah dear..its amazing OS.I really hope v could c diz scenes in d show..plz continue fr another part...

thank u so mch dear... bt lost myself aftr seeing onloction... not in a state of writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Hello guys here goes the part-2...

I really hop it meet ur expctations...

IAM DEDICATING THIS UPDATE TO ANGEL 13... who first asked to write another part of it...

Romi takes ruhi...nd makes her sit front nd he protectively sat behind her nd keeps his arms on handle with most care nt troubling his chuchi(roohi)... the care he taken is visible to everyone as he delibrtly made all to see him nd ruhi...

Ruhi nd romi reaches ice cream parlour nd orders her fav ice cream...she doesn't complete her ice cream nd looks very sad...to vch romi asks her reason to vch she says ice cream taste is nt good... to vch romi understands she is lying bt he makes eat with his hand nd tickles to get laugh on her face... she laughs bt nt whole heartdly... romi finds out issue nd says ruhi to select other flavors so tht we can njy eating in home with all... she brightly smiles nd selects black current, strawberry nd butter scotch nd says to him to tak her home... he feeds her the remaining cup nd takes choco chips too nd leaves towards home...

Ishu Is sobbing continuously nd raman took her In side embrace to calm her bt she is not in position to stop crying or to get calm...

Shagun who is standing broke the silence by saying see hw romi spoke to adi as he doesn't belong to this house... hw can he even say to adi lik this...doesn't he hw adi gets affectd aftr hearing it...

Raman compltly looses his control nd shouts on shagun saying... shut ur bloody mouth... I knw ur selfish bt I never expctd tht u vl steep this low... by hearing romi's accusations I tought u vl talk abt ruhi bt no u r ready in poisiong adi... well done shagun... u made it again...this tym adi raises his voice on raman saying don't even dare to utter a word against my mom... to vch Mr.bhalla says be in ur limits aditya... dnt dare to speak to raman in this tone... may b raman keep calm bt I vl not... I was playing with u nd giving compny to u so that u can feel u r in ur home bt u never respctd us nd with this behaviour I lost hop on u...u never change... romi is correct we really neglectd ruhi by thinking hw to mak u happy bt u never desrvd it... with that he moves to toshiji...

Adi starts blaming raman by saying see all ur family memebers are accusing me nd u r nt saying a word... u nevr care fr me nor u love... this is mrethan enough fr toshiji nd she shouts on adi by saying Its my mistake to pampr u... I always neglectd family memebers advices to see smile on ur face... nd u didn't even recognise tht... u r ready to defnd ur mother who herself left the house fr ashok because is he is rich nd raman is poor...leaving behind 6 months ruhi to raman... nw she came into our lives by using u bt stil we didn't say a word because we tought giving u secrd environment bt u r lik ur mother... u never see good in ur father bt nly points out him... befre talking to my son see ur self what u hav did with him... u want to change ur surname he obliged to it, u insulted him in ur b'day bt he didn't utter a word, u did accident bt he saved u by facing all our anger, u made false report on ishita bt he never taken reverse action nd nw u dare to accuse my son... I always in favour of u because ur a son bt nw I realise my mistake giving u priorty nly making u taking liberty from us bt never making u see our love towards u...

Toshiji comes to ishita nd says sorry to her... I never tought my love towards adi wil b neglctng ruhi nd I made everyone convince tht adi is happy by seeing our efforts bt never tought wht ruhi vl b going trough... I knw ruhi is mature because u made her upbringing nd the way u tought her made her too strong that she is nt complaining wht we hav done to her...bt don't blame urself fr dis... I nly instrctd every one to mak adi happy bt never tought wht iam doing nd consequnces of dis... see romi took ruhi na...she vl happy u need nt to b guilty...

Ishu fr first tym opens her mouth nd says Im failed as a mother... I made ruhi strong bt I failed to notice her happiness is long gone nd I even ddint made an attempt to mak her understand y adi nd shagun is staying here... I only tought abt adi tht he shld get secrd environment bt I myself forgot hw can ruhi b in dis environment...seeing her biological who left her wen she is 6 mnths nd seeing me nd raman under one roof... my ru became very big that she hide her pain nd changed her nature so that ru's ishima nd papa can concentrate on adi... I didn't do justice to her...iam very bad... hw I failed to understand her turmoil... I always understood ru by a glance at her bt nw I didn't notice her changed behaviour... may b god knws it thts the reason he didn't gave me ability to carry a child...to vch toshiji, simmi nd mr.bhalla comes to her nd says u nevr dare to think lik that... U r a best mother nd u nvr do any thing wrng... because u made ur daughter strng nd indepndnt... Bt ishu is stil acusing herself...mihir nd patak listens whole convo...nd thinks to return bt raman stops them...

raman asks patak did he bring papers...he nods in a yes... nd signs the papers... thn patak asks ishita too sign papers nd gives other to her... raman ques patak abt papers To vch patak says ishita bhabhi has transferd her FD's nd saving into ruhi's name nd gave rights to u...until ruhi becomes elder to handle this... mihir seeing raman knws wht he is abt to ask nd says romi asked me to transfer his savings to ruhi's name nd gave rights to ishita bhabhi... raman signs every thing nd says to everyone that I transfrd half my property in to ruhi's name nd gave rights to ishita... nd other half to family memebers to vch shagun says u cant do it...hw can u give total property to ruhi...as adi is ur son... he asks her to shut ur bloody mouth nd listen wen im talking... I transfrd 10% to u nd with that u can spend entire ur life the way u want nd adi can go to any school or any university... I buyed a new apartment nd fr u nd adi...nw u hav a home nd security so u can taka di nd leave...wen ever u want...

ishita speaks to raman by saying hw can u say adi to move out to vch he says fr me my ruhi is important than all... she always suferd more than anyone...bt she never left my side.. I had ful confidence on my daughter that she is perfct person to handle my business nd she makes sure that my name nd my company to reach new levels... coming to aditya I hav always der fr him bt I cant stand along wid shagun fr him... I don't hav any hatrd towards aditya... im leaving upto him... she can stay with shagun or here bt he must understand one thing that I nd shagun wil nt b together fr any reasn nd u r my wife nd ruhi is my daughter...this is my family... nw its upto him... he can tak his decsn nd I don't even bother if he hates me fr life tym... I cant go on making his illogical wishes true nd cant give him false hopes...if he wants to stay with me he can stay nt he shld acpt u as my wife nd ruhi has more authority nd priorty in my life than any one else.. fr me my daughter is mre than my son... nd she deserves it morethn him... so ruhi is my hier...

romi nd ruhi reaches home but thy stop near front door... everyone sees them coming nd moves to door bt to everyone's suprse ruhi asks romi to say sorry to her ishimaa nd papa... to vch romi says y he shld b sorry... I cant see my ruhi chuhi in sad... I wont say sorry...bt ruhi says my ishima nd papa are worlds best parents .. thy r trying to help adi bhaiyya nd iam making thm comfortable by keping calm... bt nce adi bhaiyya gets fyn my ishima nd papa wil b with me nd nd thy pamper me, tell stories nd tak me to outings... romi says fyn bt nly fr u...he very well knw his family members are hearing to their convo...nd romi says sorry to ruhi fr hurting ur parents to vch she says ur also my parent nd I love u...nd kisses him on his cheek...

ishu took her immediately into her arms nd says sorry fr neglctng bys he wipes ishita's tears nd says my ishimaa nvr neglct me nd she vl compnste this by telling me two two stories... nd allowing me to eat burgrs nd drnk cool drnks... to vch ishu nods in a yes bt she again says sorry to her bt this tym ruhi makes ishra sit together nd she made herself in middle nd asks raman to tie their hands with ishu's saree so that thy vl b move togrthr nd never gets seprtd...

Raman completely breaks down nd says sorry to ruhi fr neglctng her fr 6 yrs nd nevr seen her face prorply nd never kissed her lovingly... to vch ruhi comes bak to her dadima mode nd says in Punjabi phite mu... tu ne mere happy ko ruladiya nd iss keliye punsihmnt milega... nd tells that every shld eat ice cream nw with her... raman smiles bt ruhi says papa u r the my fav person nd no one can tak tht palce... I knw u love a lot nd u always com to check on me wen im in sleep nd u nly move wen u make sure that im fyn... even thse days also u cme to room to chck me nd by seeing my smilng face In sleep u too smiled nd kisd on my for head... to vch raman asks hw do u all these... she playfuly says bcoz im ur dadima...papa I missed ur tym bt nevr felt bad abt u... u r my super hero nd u vl remain lik that nly...

Every one njys ice cream nd romi says sorry to ishra to vch ishu says iam happy to see this side nd no need to b apologetic... bt romi says I knw wht I did nd did it intentionally so that u again take care of ruhi bt shouting on u is nt acceptable bhabhi... to vch she says som tym I too desrve it... each nd every I may nt b correct nd leaves this gve my ice cream... ishu takes choco chips ice cream nd ru asks ur fav is black current na...to vch she says I want to eat ur fav nd v vl eat nly choco chips frm nw... raman says sorry to romi bt romi says bhai u hav right to beat me nd i don't need sorry.. I just want ruhi to b happy wid her ishimaa nd papa...two bro's hug each other nd raman says nw I vl kiss u...to vch romi runs around the house...

All aftr a heavy evening disperse to their rooms... ishraru sleeping nd ru as usual playing wid ishu's hair nd listening stry nd slept by keeping left leg nd left hand on raman... aftr ishu knfrmng ru slept peacefully she goes to raman nd asks him til hw mch u vl ctrl ur tears... due to my state u controlled urself bt u need to tak out ur pain raman...to vch raman hugs ishita nd cries...by saying I took total care of ruhi wen shagun left her...I hav became mother fr ruhi bt seeing one mole on her face I distanced her from me in growing years... I never been a good father fr ruhi nor fr adi... to vch ishu says u r the best... u knws every single thing abt ur children... u never exprsd it bt u always been their fr them nd u vl b... nd daughtrs are always strng nd take care of their parents than son... nd see even our daughter to very strong nd she wil always balnce her ishimaa nd papa...daughters are always precious raman...thy wil play a mother role fr father's thst the reason our daughter understands u very well... by kissing raman... ishra moves to their bed nd sleeps cuddling one another...

P.S: I never want to degrade sons bt this updte needed to keep son low due to character in d show...

P.S.S: extrmly sorry if I hurtd anyone's feelings...I really want ruhi to top priorty in this...

Edited by shavi2311 - 10 years ago

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