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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Zami amazing update dear. It really lovely moment like complete little family. Raman very protective now thing has change to the better way and understandining point. They enjoy for the picnic and outing was bring them closer and bonding well with Three of them and Ishu can see the other side of Raman that he is caring father and not that bad person.hope next part Sakshi can open up Ishu past for Raman to understand Ishu and can bring their relation to next step wish to see romantic Raman too woo Ishu too. Thank you for beautiful update 🤗🤗

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM
nice post buddy.
who cares if you are late when you give such a beautiful post for compensation.
It was really nice.
Theya r yet to be married but they behave lik marrid .
vry family moment was too good.
Subbu's mom.No one knoiws her name wrote more than 20 storis still her name is a adverb only.
She deserves more from Raman.Raman's anger can do the real mess.
Subbu bhe hotha tho damm aatha,
No doubt they are already in love.
Waiting for next part.

Thanks yaar, came home late and rallied to finish this part. I wanted to explore Ishita's feelings and how she saw Raman, so I thought this outing will let her see his caring side not just the ruthless man who put her in jail.

Subbu's mom, hilarious yaar I tried to get her name but don't remember anyone calling her by it, this encounter was just a start so nothing much happened, Raman does't know who she is or Ishita's past, I'm hopping for another meeting between them after he gets to know who she is. And of course Subbu's mom is curious to know who this new man in Ishita's life is...

well waiting to see what other writers do

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: AngelSREE
Wow wonderful update...

Thanks keep reading and enjoy this ride

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome update dear awww they r family time was so cute u bring subbu's mom bck wow i lpved when ruman insults her hayeee raman's last dialogue im her fiance...wow ...

Thanks yaar glad you like it, Raman is know getting very protective for his family always love Subbu's mom and her unreasonable hate for Ishita

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: sulochana90
wow its just awesome

Thanks a lot keep reading

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: nividances
Aww that was amazing Zami! The way Raman stood up for Ishu and gave it back to Subbu's mom was perfect! Great job!

Glad you enjoyed it they are getting closer to each other without realizing why.

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: rnarayan
Lovely uodate

Thanks 😊 😃 Keep reading

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: usaonly
Zami amazing update dear. It really lovely moment like complete little family. Raman very protective now thing has change to the better way and understandining point. They enjoy for the picnic and outing was bring them closer and bonding well with Three of them and Ishu can see the other side of Raman that he is caring father and not that bad person.hope next part Sakshi can open up Ishu past for Raman to understand Ishu and can bring their relation to next step wish to see romantic Raman too woo Ishu too. Thank you for beautiful update 🤗🤗

Thank you a lot, funny thing I actually thought I wrote the part explaining Ishita's past but apparently it was only in my mind 😆 and in the rush of things totally skipped it,

No problem though, I'm sure the other writers will give it justice

Now Ishita is starting to understand Raman, but they both know nothing about each other's past looking forward to the next development.

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N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Nice one Allez..i always loves it whenever subbus mother gets scolded by raman aur ruhi..

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Sakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#450

I am sorry Ameera for replying so late.
You did a great job. The confrontation was amazingly penned down. It clearly showed Raman's plight and the desperation he had for an apology from her. Loved the part dear...