Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: usaonly
Lovely update Zami so excited now both of them are very close but miss it. Chance to see each other because of Ruhi fall down so they miss what a twist. Hope next update will get to see each other or Raman get some news from Ruhi.

Thanks dear.

Since Ruhi lives right next door we should make it a little bit harder.

Hope next writer gives us the meeting scene

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Akshatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: AllezJustine

Thank you so much for your appreciation and happy you liked it.

I wanted them to meet but then I thought I should make it more interesting. Glad it worked

i wish next person at least make them meet...

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: shavi2311
speechless...
touched my heart...
thanks fr pm...
whose next...

Thanks a lot 😊

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SAKIV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

i wish next person at least make them meet...

I don't wish same.

I need little more.

I need insecurities of Ishita coming out now and fear of loosing her.

I wish Sakshi gets chance to write their reunion part

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shivashna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Hey

This seems really interesting and I feel that each writer has done amazingly! The next time you do this kind of challenge, please inform me as I would love to try contribute a bit as well! :)

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh
Great part Zami.
Raman's turmoil and pain was shown excellently.. Ruhi recognised her papa. Felt bad for her. Let's see we make her meet her papa soon.

Waiting for the next part.

Thanks yaar, I so wanted Ruhi to remember her father so it wouldn't be uncomfortable for her when they meet

Waiting for the next update

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM
Awesome part buddy.
It was really perfectly imaginable.
Ruhi just remembers none except his father an her present world Ishima.
Mihika is there.Whole Raman's army ti fight Ishita.

Can't wait for next part.
Ishita would be broken if Ruhi is taken away from her.

Thanks Vikas, your start lead me to this so thank you for a very interesting and different storyline.

Raman was like a mother to Ruhi so its normal that she would remember him.

I'm getting excited..

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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

I don't wish same.
I need little more.
I need insecurities of Ishita coming out now and fear of loosing her.
I wish Sakshi gets chance to write their reunion part

Yah I think it would be interesting to explore Ishita's feelings and reaction.

Ant way kets see what happens

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Akshatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

I don't wish same.
I need little more.
I need insecurities of Ishita coming out now and fear of loosing her.
I wish Sakshi gets chance to write their reunion part

ya but i felt bad for Ruhi ...

will hope sakshi has unique ideas abt her story...