Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

speechless...

touched my heart...

thanks fr pm...

whose next...

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Shavi...superb yrr

loved the ishru bonding

and that brday thing ..perfect

so Mr. Bhalla and iyyer know each other

great...waiting to see how it unfolds

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Great part Zami.
Raman's turmoil and pain was shown excellently.. Ruhi recognised her papa. Felt bad for her. Let's see we make her meet her papa soon.

Waiting for the next part.

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Part 3 was superb

awe...loved the way how you have shown mystery unfolding

raman and mr. Bhalla.lets c

If it turns out to be something really dangerous

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Awesome part buddy.

It was really perfectly imaginable.

Ruhi just remembers none except his father an her present world Ishima.

Mihika is there.Whole Raman's army ti fight Ishita.

Can't wait for next part.

Ishita would be broken if Ruhi is taken away from her.

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Omg its perfectly unimaginable nvr expected this in tis part . could imagine all the feelings of raman in this part awesome buddy perfectly hope they meet soon n waiting for ishitas reaction .please update soon nxt member

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DivAnTami

@DivAnTami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

So beautiful . I loved this .

Guys , doing a great job . Keep it up .

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Awww... Plz reunite my lil Ruhi with dear Raman fast... I can't see them craving more... Ishita is good but Ruhi and Raman are suffering due to Bala's selfishness... Bala should be punished for this.

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

I just loved it awww my ruman I so feel bad for them ruhi asking for papa omg this is called a twist awesome update

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Zami

@AllezJustine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Akshatha19
OMG... wat an update!!!!
Raman and lady convo was good...
the best part was AIRPORT one, stunning...
beautifully portrait just loved it..
atleast i thought he will get a glimpse of Ruhi...
but feel of her just mesmerizing ...

interesting twist and turns
amazing writing👏👏👏
the title was just apt ⭐️

thanks dear for the lovely part...