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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Love this story, so glad you started wring again!😊

Thanks so much for the PM- very glad I did not miss this.😃

Your story is so sweet, reads very naturally and I love the idea of Adhi as a silent witness. Seems this is the best way for him to find out the truth about it all. Love the way he reflected on his father's relationships... and the last couple of thoughts as well.

Oh and the ISHRA romance- do I even need to tell you how much I love it?

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

I really wanted to read something from adi pov

and i got this one

must say...loved every bit of it

superb os

thnks for pm

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

For the first time I am witnessing the child Adi, Aani. So far not even once have I felt a sympathy towards this character even though I knew he is just a misguided child.

You gave him the much needed human feel. It was nice to read an OS from his point of view.

Lovely work dear.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

this was really wonderful dear👏
enjoyed it😃
it was nice to read something positive on aditya..👍🏼

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Maddy

@THEfanOFheartz

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Hey! 🤗
Amazing!!xxx❤️
I loved how you did it in Adi's POV😃 Truely
Nicely written!👏 Comparing his life style to theirs. Than how he felt; his emotions.
The depth you went into with portraying him before unwrapping the gifts than after unwrapping them. The laptop scene aww poor Adi he thought it was from his mother😭 but wasn't and that romance scene of Ishita n Raman😆 Loved it!!❤️
I could connect with Adi in every line...how he was feeling😳...
Fab!!😃 Everyone has made some good valid points that i don't need to say anymore.⭐️
Your such a fab writer!!!👍🏼
Enjoyed reading it!😉
@Thanks for the PM😃

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: divankidivani
Beautiful!Your stories are just perfect!I really hope this is what happens in the show,it would be one of the best episodes of yhm if it does!Why are you not yhm's CV?!😊...thank you so much!Words can't explain how much I love this OS,and all your other works that I have had the good fortune of reading😊...Thank you!You are a star!⭐️

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: swathibalan
Loved your take on Adi's Confusion Aani..the gift unwrapping scene is beautifully written.. because at the end of the day what the poor kid unwrapped was his fathers love and yearning for him and the truth that Ishita doesnt want to separate the two
You have wonderfully highlighted his confusion and feeling of security which gets instilled when he hears Raman and Ishita speak inclusively about him
After all what does the poor kid want other than being called someones Own..a feeling of being inclusive in a family, feeling unconditionally loved and cared for..
I also loved that the comparison you brought in his mind about IshRa and AshGun.. a clear differentiation on what love is..it is all about giving and the end you gave that he will discuss with Shagun.. whom he thinks has misunderstood just like him. He isnt aware of the complete truth yet!!
Wonderful wonderful take Aani..👏👏..I am waiting to see how they show it in the serial...i know there will be loads of drama with the child getting confused and pulled both ways..

P.S.. Loved it even more cause of HP mention McG!!😉😳.. and Dumbledore's Words.. the most powerful magic is LOVE❤️
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Hey Swathi thanks a lot

I cant help but associate HP with YHM for obvious reasons and also childhood too.

I have no idea what route the show will take in the future as well but would want Adi to reflect upon things especially the difference between the relationship his parents have - with each other and the partners they made thereafter, nothing would gladden me more. For a child nothing is more vital than feeling loved by his/her parents which brings with it a sense of security, but Adi so far hasnt realized or it would be more appropriate to say be disillusioned about what love is - what can highlight the fact more than observing IshRa, a couple genuinely in love with each other and then comparing them with AshGun😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: btalwar
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take your time Bhanu

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
Ekpaheli ..it was an amazing story..loved it..it was juz awesome..i would love to watch such a scene in real in YHM.. The feelings are so beautifully portrayed..it was so nice too that i was able to visualise each n every line u wrote.. Even i could see feelings in the face of our expressionless adi..the convo between ishra was superb..n adi hearing those was so much needed..thus he could know his papa n ishita aunty.. I would love to read a convo between adi n ishra..that would be so apt.. Plss plsss can u make this a two shot atleast..the next morning happenings..i will be really grateful t u if u could do that..nywys its upto u.. Thnx for the pm..n once again it was awesome..

Hi N thanks a lot

Life is keeping me busy these days so dont know when and what I will write next 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: s_kavya
Amazing.. Beautifully written would really love to see something like this in the show... Adi should know his father loves him very much... and so entire Bhalla family... really feel bad for Adi... hopefully soon he will realize that his father and bhalla family there for him loves him very much and of course hope his MU regarding ishita clear...

Awesome OS dear 👏 👏

thanks Kavya

Adi on some level does know his father loves him but what he fails to understand is that his father has always loved him brainwashed by his mom he thinks Raman had perhaps stopped caring for him during the years he was away

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