Familiar Strangers - OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings

Aani 🤗

First of all, great title genius. Even before I read I was curious, wondering how a stranger can be familliar or how someone familliar can turn to stranger. Honestly, didnt expect an os on Adi.

Like I said, I love this track for Adi in Bhalla house more than anything shown right now.. And this is exactly why.

Adi's turmoil, and him feeling out of place. The confusion, the insecurity and the fear. Him having the blind faithon shagun while unwrapping the gift. Only to get a reality check. while Ishita Raman together ensure that he gets the love by their acts.

Love it, the last line is beautiful. Looking forward to a new day *Brilliant*

Wonderful Aani!

Originally posted by: janu12345

Pankha alert... 😃Another beautiful OS in quick succession...and I am a happy person.. 😛😳I hope you are inspired time and again... 😳

Adi ... one of the most complex and troubled characters in the family.. to get him back on track is a huge task... depending on how they do it will make a beautiful track.. but right now I am keeping my expectations in check!!😊

Awesome take on the upcoming Christmas party...👏Adi wants to be loved.. both by his mother and father...he thinks his mother loves him.. this expectation you can see in every gift he opens...he believes her love is the only truth in his life.. if ever he finds out otherwise the kid would be broken beyond repair..! That his dad loves him as much is a wish the kid has but not an expectation... when his dad does everything that he wanted the kid is going to be in a bigger dilemma... ( I dread the actor's expressions.. but nevertheless.. getting used to it slowly 😃)

The lack of relationship between his mother and father... his estrangement from his dad...the budding romance between his dad and step mother... the unconditional love both his sister and step mother have for him (he has always been told otherwise)... a family who love him unconditionally...at this age its quite a bit for the kid to deal with... you have touched upon all these aspects of the Adi's character... and I am your pankha all over again..😃😛. I wish they show even something close to what you have written... Adi getting back to track has to happen gradually.. and this would be a perfect start...😳

Well if they dont show... I have imagined this scene the way you have written it.. I would just play it in my head again...😛😛😃

PS: Sorry... lammmba ho gaya without realizing! 😃

Originally posted by: Jaaneman98

Awesome!!! Adi's fellings were so well described
The OS was so nice! Thanks for the PM 😊

Originally posted by: Ohgod!

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Originally posted by: momb24

Brilliant 👏

Originally posted by: VENBA

Just awesome...

Loved the way u wrote in Adi's point of view...

Brilliantly written...👏👏

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Love this story, so glad you started wring again!😊

Thanks so much for the PM- very glad I did not miss this.😃

Your story is so sweet, reads very naturally and I love the idea of Adhi as a silent witness. Seems this is the best way for him to find out the truth about it all. Love the way he reflected on his father's relationships... and the last couple of thoughts as well.

Oh and the ISHRA romance- do I even need to tell you how much I love it?

Originally posted by: Rozy77

this was really wonderful dear👏
enjoyed it😃
it was nice to read something positive on aditya..👍🏼

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Hey! 🤗
Amazing!!xxx❤️
I loved how you did it in Adi's POV😃 Truely
Nicely written!👏 Comparing his life style to theirs. Than how he felt; his emotions.
The depth you went into with portraying him before unwrapping the gifts than after unwrapping them. The laptop scene aww poor Adi he thought it was from his mother😭 but wasn't and that romance scene of Ishita n Raman😆 Loved it!!❤️
I could connect with Adi in every line...how he was feeling😳...
Fab!!😃 Everyone has made some good valid points that i don't need to say anymore.⭐️
Your such a fab writer!!!👍🏼
Enjoyed reading it!😉
@Thanks for the PM😃