MY DREAM TRACK FF.UNDEAD(part 23added)28/01/2015 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb updates
i think their is connection btwn both ishitha's
cont.soon
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Originally posted by: arunabhi

Read the next parts together..
I am just loving this story of yours..
Ruhi is just way too cute and adorable as always !!!!
Their flash back is just emotional.. Just shows the love they had for each other.. That came as a surprise as in his marriage with dead Ishitha also started of a contract ! interesting. Just waiting to see how that changed in to love slowly..
Now Ruhi , The cupid again. She loves her dad, that's why she made sure Ishitha gets in to her house and now she is working on their marriage.
Would love to see both Ishitha and Raman's reaction to this decision ..
Loving the pace of your updates..
Will update my FF also ..
Thanks a lot

thanks for reading
Their marriage started in contract.
But this ishra's marriage will not be one exactly.
It would be unexpected adn not planned from any side.Just to pair mey khulladi for Shagun and Subbu.
No they will not get to know her plan.
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Originally posted by: ishraBest_2014

wow thanks for updates. I love it, please continue your good work 😊

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ya flashback is nice/... gud work... plz update soon

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Originally posted by: agneeputra

wow emotional and heart touching flash back ... great going

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part 9

Scene starts with Ishita thinking about Raman in her room.Same time Ruhi comes there carrying her teddy bear.

Ruhi "Ishima main yahan so sakthee hun naa."

Ishita "Tummhey kaun rokhega aa jaon."

Ruhi "Mujhye neend nahen aa rahen thee tho main yahan aagayen."

Ishita "Tho tum papa key pass nahen gayee."

Ruhi "Papa hummesha akeley sothey hain."

Ishita "Kyon?"

Ruhi "Patha nahen?Who jyaada baath nahen karthey hain."

Ishita just wonders what is that man.

Ishita "Theek hain tum yahen so jaon."

Ruhi then keeps her teddy bear beside her and sleeps hugging Ishita.

Ruhi "Ishima aapkey papa kyaa karthey hain."

Ishita "retd principal hain."

Ruhi "Aapka gahr kidhar hain."

Ishita "Kyon?"

Ruhi "Bass waisey pooch rahen thee."

Ishita "Mayur Vihar mey."

Ruhi "Main wahan aa sakthee hun kyaa?"

Ishita "kyon ?"

Ruhi "Nahen aasakthee kyaa.Main yahan akeley bore ho rahen hun yahan merey saath khelney koi nahen hain."

Ishita "Theek hain papa sey poochkar kal ley jaongee."

Ruhi "Naheeen.Papa sey poochengey tho who nahen bhejengey.Hum chupkey jaana hoga."

Ishita "Theek hain hum Mihir uncle ko convince karkey jaayengey.Tum abh so jaon."

They slip to sleep cuddling each other.

Raman who was awake goes to see Ruhi but not finding her there he understood Ruhi might be with Ishita.

Raman checks in Ishita's room and finds Ruhi and Ishita sleeping together.

He smiles seeing them but his eyes have tears in his eyes.

Then he remembers .

Raman coming late night to home and he goes and checks in his rooma nd finds Ishita sleeping with Ruhi and Ruhi is just months old.Raman just looks at them smiling.

Ishita "Raman kabh thak ghoorthey rahogey?"

Raman "Tum soyee nahen?"

Ishita "Neend kasiey aayege aapkey yeh hasse dekhey bhina."

Raman "Tho wait kar rahen thee?"

Ishita "Han pehley aap ready hokey aayiyen main khaana ready karthee hun."

Raman leaves and Ishita arrange dinner for him.

Ishita "Raman aap bahuth jyaada kaam kar rahen hain.Aapko hmmarey liyen time hee naehn rahan."

Serving him food.

Raman "Tumney khaana khaaya?"

Ishita "Han khalee.Mummyji ney jabardasthee khilaaya."

Raman "Accha kiyya.Tumhey apnaa khaana ka khyaal rakhnaa hoga.Ruhi ko sab vitamins or protiens tumsey hee milengey."

Raman "Nahen tho zidd karthee rehthee merey aaney thak khaana na khaakhye."

Ishita"Mujhey bhee Ruhi ki fikar hain.Aapko bhee khaana time pey khaana hain."

Raman "Theek hain.Khaarahan hun naa."

Ishita "Raman kabh thak aisa rahega.Kitney din sey aapko gyaarah bhajey sey pehley dekha bhee naehn.Hummesha late aathey hon."

Raman "Ishita yaar kaam hain.Just for few days.Usskey baad hummesha tumdonon key saath rahoonga."

Ishita "Ek mahiney sey yaheen bolrahen hainKabh thak.I am missing you aur Ruhi key saath bhee aapko time spend karnaa hain."

Raman "Bass ek projetc hain usskey baad hummara company new level mey hoga.Yeh honey do.I swear."

Ishita "Theek hain.Aap aakar so jayiyne fir subaha jaldee chaley jaayengey."

Raman leaves from there thinking when she was there he was not there with Ruhi and when he was there she is not there.

Scene starts in morning and Ruhi was eating breakfast.Ruhi is making fuss in eating and not even Ishita could control.But come how Ishita managed to feed her.

Ishita "Kyaa haun tum khaa kyon nahen rahen hon?"

Shagun "Tum tho ussey theek sey jaanthey thak nahen hon.I will tell you."

Shagun turning to Ruhi "You wan't ice cream right."

Ruhi nods yes and Shagun was about to give her but same time Raman comes and she drops it in hurry.

Ruhi "Mujhey ice cream chahiyen."

Ishita "Itney subaha koi ice cream khaathey hain kyaa?"

Ruhi "Mujhey nahen patha mujhey chahiyen bass."

Raman "Ruhi zidd amth karon.Pehley tumhey aadat lissney daala."

Mihir signs her not to tell.

Ruhi "Aapko kyon mujhye ice cream chahiyne."

Raman "Abh tumhey nahen milega."

Ruhi "Theek hain.Main bhee kuch nahen kahoongi.Mujhey ice cream milney thak kuch nahen khaongee."

All gets panicked over her warning but Raman.

Raman "Theek hain.If you are so adamant then we will be too.Abh tumhey ice crema nahen milega."

Raman "Hummesha dhamkee deney sey sab kuch nahen milega.Tum bhee na tumhaari maa jaisa."

Raman "You are not getting it now."

Ruhi is shcoked and thinking what to do.

Ishita was confused.

Ishita "Aap bachee ko samjhaaney key jahgaha aisey kasiey bol rahen hian.Who sach mey nahen khaai tho."

Ruhi "Han main sach mey nahen khaoongi."

Raman "Tum apnaa drama bandh karo ek baar dimaak lagakey socho."

Raman "Ussney abh naastha karlee hain aur next meal would be at noon.Jab jaakey ice cream khillana.Abh usskey liyen tension kyo lena."

All understood the point there and Ruhi smashing her head with her palm as paln failed.

Ruhi "Main baahar jaakey kahongee."

Raman "As you wish ."

Ruhi "Ishima mujhey ley jaayegee."

Raman just looks at Ishita "What ever main jaa rahan hun."

He leaves from there and Mihir gets a call and he assigns some work for Mihika.

Ruhi gives hi-fi to Ishita.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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part 10

Scene starts with Ishita Ruhi and Mihka coming to Mayur Vihar.

Amma "Ishu sab theek hain naa?"

Ishitha "Amma sab theek hain.Main bass aapko millney aaye.Aap kasiey Hon"

Appa "Hum theek hain."

Ishita "Ruhi yeh meri amma hain aur mera appa."

Ruhi "Hi!main Ruhi hun."

Amma "hi beta ." looking confused at Ishita.

Mihika "Ruh tum merey saath chalon hum neechey khelthey hain."

Ruhi "Hum park mey jaayengey."

Mihika "Tumhye kaun rokhega who park tho tumharey papa ka hee hain."

Ruhi "Chalo chaltey hain."

Same time Subbu comes there looking at Ruhi.After Ruhi leaves.

Subbu "Kaun hain who ladkee."

Ishita "Ruhi .Raman Bhalla ka beti."

Subbu "Tho yahan kyo aye?"

Ishita "Bass ussey bahaar ghoomna tha.Tho mujhey yahan laaney key liyen poochi."

Amma "Ussey kasiey patha kee tumhaara alag ghar hain."

Ishita smiles "Amma aap shock hojayengey yeh sunkar."

Appa "Kya huan."

Ishita "Actually Mrs Bhalla bilkul merey jasiey dikhthee thee.Mainey photo mey dekha ek bhee difference nahen hain."

Subbu "Aisey kasiey ho saktha hain."

Ishita "I don't know ,But main sach bol rahen hun."

Ishita "Aur Ruhi ko patha hain kee main usske maa nahen hun."

Amma "Tho tumhey naatak karney kee jaroori kyaa hainn tum waapas gahr aa sakthee hin naa."

Ishita "Amma aap poorey baath tho suniyne."

Ishita "Baath jitna dikhrahan hain utnaa simple nahen hain.Issue ussey bahuth jyaada complicated hain."

Ishita tells everything about Raman's heart condition .

Amma "Kyaa?Who kasiey treatment kyon nahen karwaarahan hain."

Ishita "god knows.But chey saal sey who har pal mauth sey ladthey aa rahen hain."

Ishita "Unka heart beat 100 key ass pass hojayega tho he would be dead."

Subbu "Tho abh thak zindaa kasiey hain.Utnaa kam margin ."

Ishita "Mrs BHalla ney uno bahuth trainnign dee the yeh control karney.Ussey key kaaran who kabhee koi stree na leethey aur friends aur staff bhee help kat=rteh hain sab issue mey."

Appa "Dushman ko bhee aisa life naa dey."

Ishita "Han but ussney yeh life chunliyan hain.Ishita kee mauth key baadh he is like just living for Ruhi.Bass Ruhi key liyen sab kar rahan hain.But how long can he fight death."

Ishita "Mauth ko mutthe mey lekar ghoom rahan hain.Unkey dushman bhee kam nahen hain."

Ishita "Aur ghar mey problem kam nahen hain.Who ladkee Shagun."

Ishita "Who unsey shaadi karnaa chahthee hain aur he is not ready for this and she wont leave dass saal sey peechey padee hain unkeee."

Subbu "Chod do Ishita humey kyaa.We are just their for some purpose.Ussey jyaada tum socho bhee math."

Subbu "Waiey mujhye tumsey kuch kehnaa hain.Amma appa ney humarey shaadi ka date fix karlee ."

Ishita "Utnaa urgent kyon.Tumney kahan promotion aaney thak."

Subbu "Promotion tho miljaayegee.GBut hum jyaada late nahen kar saktey."

Amma "Kabh hain aur humey bathaaya kyon nahen."

Subbu "This month 11th."

Ishita "Sirf ek huftha bachee hain humsaarey arrangements kaisey karengey."

Subbu "Ishu don't forget my name is Subbu main kyaa kar saktha hun tumhey andaaz bhee nahen hain.Sab arrangements ho jayengey."

Ishita was confused.

Subbu "Tum kyaa soch rahen hon."

Ishita "Kee jab thak main issey bahaar aajaogee naa .Ruhi aur Raman sir."

Subbu "You don't take tension about it sab khatham ho jayega."

Ishita"I hope so."

Subbu "Theek hain main chaltha hun mainey saarey arrangements kardoonga."

Same time Ruhi and Mihika comes there.

They get to know about marriage date and then after few minutes they leave to Bhalla house.

Then Subbu was speaking to Ashok on phone.

Subbu "Sir Mujhye Raman Bhalla key baarey mey khuch information patha chala hain.Koi weakness."

Ashok "Are you sure.Humey unkey koi weakness nahen patha ."

Subbu "I am 100% sure sir.It would be helpful for us."

Ashok "Phone mey nahen gahr aakar milon."

Then scene in Ashok's house.

Ashok "Bathaon tum kyaa jaanthey hon."

Subbu "Sir Raman Bhalla has very critical heart."

Ashok "Mathlab"

Subbu "His heart beat should not cross 100 .If it crosses that limit he will die on spot."

Ashok "What?"

Subbu "Han sir .That is reason he wont take any tension or stress even in that conditions."

Subbu "He traines his mind and body to always be under cool."

Ashok "Ussko koi aur weakness hain ."

Subbu "Hain sir usske beta.Usskey liyen who khuch bhee kar saktha hain."

Then Subbu tells everything from Raman buying the park for her to Ishita telling about Shagun.

Ashok "Its very good news.Until now we don't know his weakness but now we know about it and so we can utilize it.'

Ashok "He cant even run.Even running is dangerous for his health."

Ashok "Aur uss Shagun kaun hain.Usskey baarey mey saarey info patha karo."

Subbu "I will do it sir."

Ashok then looking at him understood what he needed.

Ashok "Tumhey promotion jaoor milega.For now you be with me as my assistant."

Subbu "Thankyou sir."

Subbu leaves from there.

Ashok to himself "Wha Raman .Tumhey maarana bhee itnaa mushkil nahen hain aur koi case bhee nahen lagega."

Ashok "Bhalla enterprise without Raman Bhalla.I can handover it."

Ashok smiles imagining this.

Then on Ruhi's room.

Ruhi Mihika and Mihir were thinking.

Ruhi "Abh kyaa karey.Ishima kee shadi honey waaley hain iss huftey mey."

Mihir "Mainey bola naa hum kuch nahen kar paayenge.Abh karey tho kyaa karey."

Mihika "Uss Subbu jaan boochkar kar rahan hain .Ussko doubt aaya hoga kee Akka Raman bhalla ko chun sakthee hain."

Ruhi "Humey kuch karnaa hoga."

Ruhi is crying "Ishima chodkey chakee jayege kyaa?"

Even Mihir and Mihika got worried seeing her and understood how much serious she was about Ishita and Raman's marriage.

Mihir "Rut um ro kyon rahen hon.Abh thak huan nahen naa.Hum kuch raastha nikaalengey."

Mihika "Tum Raman Bhalla key beti hon.Aur Toshi bHalla kee poothe.Tum aar kaisey manogee.Jaroor hum papa aur Ishima ka shaadi karnegey.I promise you."

Mihir "Han we promise you .We will do what ever it takes."




please tell me whether Raman's heart problem is too much.

I know it is not possible.But I just hope I am not over doing it.Please give your opinion on it

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read all missing parts,
write as well as before you write your privise update ,
its diffrent and intersting ,
enjoing the reading alls

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