MY DREAM TRACK FF.UNDEAD(part 23added)28/01/2015 - Page 16

res for part 12

All updates r so beautiful.
I love this story so much.
I feel raman's heart problem is 2 much dr.The way u describe it, he can't do anything.Can't think,can't get stress,can't run,can't do any heavy work.
He lives like a really dead man.Don't do it dr.
He may live like a dead man.bt nt like this.no emotions,no caring about others exept ruhi.coz of death of ishu.
Can u change it smwt like this?
"His heart problem is not that much serious.bt smhw it's dangerous 4 his health.2 cure it want a surgery.bt he don't want it coz he didn't want 2 live without his ishu."
If u find this is 2 much i'm really sry.bt this is my opinion.
Waiting 4 nxt updates.Tnx 4 pm.

Originally posted by: RMGT

All updates r so beautiful.
I love this story so much.
I feel raman's heart problem is 2 much dr.The way u describe it, he can't do anything.Can't think,can't get stress,can't run,can't do any heavy work.
He lives like a really dead man.Don't do it dr.
He may live like a dead man.bt nt like this.no emotions,no caring about others exept ruhi.coz of death of ishu.
Can u change it smwt like this?
"His heart problem is not that much serious.bt smhw it's dangerous 4 his health.2 cure it want a surgery.bt he don't want it coz he didn't want 2 live without his ishu."
If u find this is 2 much i'm really sry.bt this is my opinion.
Waiting 4 nxt updates.Tnx 4 pm.

awesome update
this subbu such a crip I just hate him
hope so mimiru will plan something

Originally posted by: RaYaKapoor

Hey Vikas! Read it all together.. Thanks for the PM.. Its a great story.. A different concept altogether.. Im actually curious to know the reason behind UNDEAD and why so many similarities between the two Ishita's.. Memory loss Ho nahi sakta beacise agar aisa hota, the family would know Raman and Ru.. Really eager to read the story ahead.. Continue soon and do PM me.. Waiting.. And j hope its a short story coz I can't take curiosity for long.. I keep thinking about that only..

The story is really very interesting..

nice parts...

Originally posted by: shavi2311

nice parts...

loved the stry turning...

dis ashok nd subbu...😡

as guesd abt subbu leaks all the info of raman...craets prob fr him...

i dnt hav any prob with raman's health bt dnt mak it too emotnal...

cant wait fr nxt...wht ru nd mimi plans...

hw ishra gets married...

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

sorry buddy.But there is no relation between two Ishita's .

Its just destiny for Raman.

Obviously it is not memory loss because Ishita died right infront of Raman.

It wont be short buddy.

But i will be updating two long posts everytime.

I almost posted 50 pages on word now in std font.and story is just styarted.

Then I have to write two love stories in single story three if we count mihir an mihika

undead because of two reasons.

Raman is having such serious situation and can die any moment but he is alive and not dead.He wont die so I have to keep immortal but it din't sound good.

Then Ishra's love story one love ended but other will start so love is not dying here.

Oh.. Thoda zyada hi coincidence hai! I really thought koi connection hoga.. Same name, same looks, almost the same profession.. Lol!
I did notice two posts each time.. And I am thankful for that.. Do update frequently!
And the ligoc for Undead is convincing.. But yeah.. Raman's condition is a bit overdone I feel.. Its too much to bear for so long.. Subtle it down a bit in my opinion.. No stress no running no hard labour.. A normal human has some stress.. How much ever he smiles.. That's just and opinion... The final call is yours!! Waiting for the update!