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namratha

@NSB7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#841

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Beautiful beautiful

I can't just form words to describe the depth of the emotions I felt reading this

The whole update every single blind of it makes me want to cry out buckets

For not even a second I couldhold back the tears that formed in my eyes

I suggest you to readbTHR GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATTOO series..its your style of writing and I must say u have today made me feel like it was a chapter that moved me as much as the trilogy by that bestseller brilliant author moved me

A great job very well done

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Khuarnav

@Khuarnav

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: namratha.shree
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Beautiful beautiful
I can't just form words to describe the depth of the emotions I felt reading this
The whole update every single blind of it makes me want to cry out buckets
For not even a second I couldhold back the tears that formed in my eyes

I suggest you to readbTHR GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATTOO series..its your style of writing and I must say u have today made me feel like it was a chapter that moved me as much as the trilogy by that bestseller brilliant author moved me

A great job very well done

OMG WAT A COMPLIMENT. THNK U. PLUS NO I HVNT READ THAT EN I WILL GVE IT A CHANCE IF I EVER GT MY HANDS ON IT. THNK YOU AGAIN

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SA1234

@SA1234

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#843

You are the best !

You are the best!

Like i said before , I forget everything else when I read this story and it helps. I.love you for writing this story and for sharing it with us.

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143rhb

@143rhb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#844

First of all thanks for PM

What an update WOW!

I had an doubt abt viday being Raman's informer.

I am love with Raman in your story. how much he loves her yaar.

Romi's conversation with Raman, & Iyer sibling great.

Actually I was wondering abt children when the meeting in Bhall house was on. You gave the to that also.

Ruhi Nautanki no. one.😆

Adi call ishita Mom 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Kids are brilliant. Jo koi nahi kar saka voh bacho ne kar dekha ya.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Idea of Abi & jai to give Raman surprise 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Ishita's nervousness & Raman's reactions was superb. Actually I can imagine the whole things infrot of me.

I'm in Love with your Story .

Thank you sooo much for this wonderful story.

A Big hug 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

PS I hope Ishita has not been raped. Finger Crossed

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#845

omg this was awesome
so emotional
hayeee adi n ru r actually being a cupid

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Sunita

@avni_19

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#846

omggg!!! wt an emotional update!! i was in the verge of crying... i loved all those told by Vidya and how everyone was ready to support each other and help raman mainly...

what the kids did actually surprised me.. people say no mothers wil say NO when their kid requests anything and everything and the same happened here! I totally loved it...

pure bhalla parivar ek saath! Adi-Ruhi, the adorables and the most clever ones.. instead of crooked brains, the kids went outright in their way!

Amazingly written yaarr!! i just feel bad for raman...bechara how much he had gone through.. i just hope everything gets sorted between ishita and raman...

cont soon..looking forward for the next update!

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

am so loving this story...

u really have some great thinking of scenes...

so loved ruhi and adi in the last update...

Mrs iyer is being a mother but Raman is having more rights here...

why he again n again had to tell themthat he cares equally...

in hospital,Mrs Iyer could see his desperation before in hospital but now she is ignoring it all together...

Simmi andToshi finally regretting their deeds...but it will b great if they bring raman ishu n kids more close...

Waiting for further updates...

update soon dear...

hugs

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misavelon789

@misavelon789

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Posted: 10 years ago

#848

😭Felt bad for Raman..adi and Ruhi doing great.hope couple will make it up to each other soon.isn't tarish in jail.if he is there Raman can simply question him..