OS: His Eyes Don't Lie (Updated Last Part (4) on Pg 8)

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Beautiful OS .. So well written and every line written voices her intentions so well...
The way she was waiting for confession and the way it played out in the end was beautiful..
Khaana kaaliya 😆 and the smack he received .. Just at the right moment .. Too good ..
Towards the end when he mouthed love you too .. Adorable
Great OS .. Do write more
Thanks for this one

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Simply beautiful! Just the title itself speaks volumes. Really enjoyed reading all 4 parts. Keep writing!

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Beautiful ending..
The ending to this one couldn't have been more perfect than this..Nothing was said..not too many words at all, yet their eyes said it all. She read his eyes and he sensed her touch! 😳
It was such a soulful confession. ❤️

It was a pleasure reading this one! Truly amazing work. Please do write more stuff, would love to read more from you. 😃⭐️ Thanks :)

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

It was amazing..you do know how to touch the heart of the readers..it was a YHMian story since the actions and eyes count more than words ..

i pretty much loved the whole story and i must say that you are an excellent writer.. i would love to read more from you..thanx alot for the pm and pls do pm me of your further works..

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-mujna-

@-mujna-

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Thank you all... I am amazed at the response i have got for this OS... wow... thank you all!!! special thanks to all those who gave me tips about PMing as i am a newbie... thnx once again!!!

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sita_rama

@sita_rama

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Awesome os

i loved ishra confession in different manner.

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Awesome update..

The last part was brilliant...👏👏

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Dilshika

@Dilshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Amazing story! Very good work!

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Wonderfully written. And you understood their inner motivations and showed them so very well. 👏 I hope you continue writing.

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agneeputra

@agneeputra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

hi found this os too late read it at one go and its superb...hope they accept in the show that they read each other's eyes and feel for it...superb and congrats👏

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