HE is a mess - Page 4

Originally posted by: Hsp.canada

I am in awe of your talent, your story telling sounds way to real. Keep up the great work.

Originally posted by: janu12345

I have been a silent reader of your posts... Dunno how you do it... its very unique and leaves me with a smile at the end of it...😛

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

C you did it again😃..These small conversations between him and her are enough to create havoc in my fantasy world😳☺️..You hvae voiced it so perfectly..👏

His messed up state😊..Yes he is a hardworker..He doesn't care about his disheveled appearance⭐️..No matter how tired he is he always manages to give a good shot..😊

His mental stress and mess..Well the press might not be the only reason😉..Or even the over adulation he receives from his fans😊..There are other reasons- just needs to reflect within himself to realize what it might be😃..And you are perfectly rights about the frustrations👍🏼..The origin for the frustrated feeelings- well again.. that's for him to figure out..😉😃

He wants to get away from this monotonous life😊..My interpretation: And that he chooses to do it with her, because she is the only friend who understands what he needs so well..😊

"Bhopal, kabhi lagta hai main Bhopal apne parents ke ghar jake mere maa ki godh mei sarr rakh ke ro lu, just to get away." -My interpretation: She wants to get away from the daily grind and the torment surrounding her about her feelings for him..😊

The last lines in your story are always so simple, yet powerful Colu😃.."Tumhare Bhopal mei kya har galli mei kachori miltey hai? "..Such an adorable and comforting line😳😊..She could regain her lost solace just in his words⭐️..I just love the cute convos you create between them😊..They are short, but have such a deep impact..😳😃

As always you nailed it again👍🏼..This was short but yet so lovely😳.The way you write it is so convincing.😃.Seems like as though you know her and him so well.😊.So beautiful and so subtle☺️..Hats off to that incredible imagination of yours👏..Thanks a ton🤗..

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Yay..Another one!
Back to back..3 of your works..An evening treat for me!! 😆😳

Someone was frustrated on not being able to talk to her eh.? LOL! The way he called her up instantly to just get rid of it was so cute! ❤️ The concern in that braking the car part on hearing her words was so evident. He just couldn't bear it and ended up calling her again and tried to lift her mood. The way they subtly tease each other is just so THEM, you make them more and more real with every new one of yours C! ⭐️

I really adore this unsaid concern they share for each other in your stories. It just makes their bond look so real even though it's hidden and unsaid 😳 It's one of the most prominent and lovable part of your stories!

Lovely one like always C! ❤️ Thank you so much..Will be waiting for the next one! :D

Originally posted by: VasuKaShlicious

I always love off screen ones than the one screen ones more of any couple...
and ur ones makes us feel it so real and happening... love reading about DivAn.. just a scene and a small one from you always makes us smile, blush and grin...

just an amazing writer u are... keep writing them frequently :)

Originally posted by: kt25

@Columbia - You did it again. Very nice. I had a huge smile on my face while reading your whole post. You know how to keep the readers excited and I am one of those who gets excited seeing your posts. I go by Priya and I had already thanked Nisha for introducing me to your thread 😃