HE is a mess - Page 5

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

C

I noticed it yesterday... and posted it on my Beat. He LOOKS and acts differently for some reason... even if our collective imagination is overdosed on Prozac, and it has nothing to do with anything you feed our fantasies with... SOMETHING ELSE IS WRONG

Tired? Needs a vacation? Has something else going on? his personal life sucking up all his energies?

Its just not the same... he looked and acted fine when he swung the door and promised he wont let her go if she didnt leave quick😳...

Coming back to your story... you bring out the REAL differences in their thoughts and lifestyles with such simple narrative..👏👏

Who knows if this twain will ever meet😭 SO DIFFERENT, it is truly do kinaare of a river... HOW APT😲

BUT ... on the flip side...Such conditions make for a perfect love story...👏👏

Your situations never appear forced, there is an indistinguishable quality to them that makes everything fit together... the mundane conversations, the shoots, their moods...

I will from now wish, some promotion or event should take them to Bhopal, and he should get to see her house..."Hamare Bhopal ke talaab ka paani khatam ho jaata hai" she said during the Holi OLVs... I want him to go to the talaab with her

Hopefully, next Holi... when he can apply "phattedaar rang" on her "jo do chaar din tak na nikle"

Thanks for planting the seed of dream, it has sprouted and seems to have 6 leaves... cant wait to see it bloom... I mean that both literally and metaphorically

Cheers!!

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

your last line doesn't surprise me anymore... it just makes me wonder however high the bar has been raised previously, it's always broken in the new one...

BRAVO!

Originally posted by: Mrs. SIR

after reading this, I am a mess!!!!

i think with everyday now, i hope to receive a pm from you, letting me know you have posted another funfiction 😳😳 please don't stop spoiling us 😆😆

i was busy posting the IshRa pictures in the gallery, my fun thing to do.. cuz then i go through some major drool.. 😆😆 and my pm icon popped.. and my heart was saying YES!, C wrote another funfiction.. at least i had hoped you did and YAY!!!!!😳

you know what.. i need to learn how to make me some kachori...time to go back and watch some on location videos 😆😉

it was so beautiful.. 😳 the stress they are going through, the exhaustion which many have been noticing on their faces... was so nicely expressed... the things they share with one another, like wanting to just get away... they don't share with others.. because its both of them stuck in this journey together... (my heart is happy!! that's all i have to say)..

and it has been an overdose of on location with bits and clips from everyone but him... we will wait for that good day!! but the ending... it just .. im grinning again... you always have the perfect endings... and this, only cuz i sent you the link with that desparation of 'please add this in your funfiction saga.. somehow.. somewhere.. anywhere.. ' and you did and it couldn't have been more perfect.. ❤️

hats off!!! and as usual, keep 'em coming.. 😳

Originally posted by: ybarfa

it is like medicine to me for get over the new track but every time u write i know its fan fiction but i end up imaginig same scene ur writings are just wow . i liked last line.he changed his place for her

Originally posted by: RomComFan

😃Lovely... honestly these are so refreshing and you are sooo good at them!

YAY for you [for writing them] and YAY for us [for being the lucky recipients]!🥳

Cannot wait for the next one...😉

Originally posted by: rose35

Short yet sweet as ever... C...I have to look for more adjectives to describe your creativity... wish the CVs could learn from you... yours are like breath of fresh air.. and the CVs now have become...

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Its awesome...love the casual manner they interact with plain smiles and very simple talk!

Originally posted by: swathibalan

This was cute!.. Simple interactions but still the yearning to talk, to listen to the other's voice

Really this series is a guilty pleasure for me.. 😳.. I am loving it!

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

Loved this one...the most .. I don't knw why though 😳

And I love how they always pick up each other's call on the second ring

Thanks C