ff-My Life Starting With An Unknown Person updated part72(a) aug28

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sriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: rk654
simply awesome update...👏

thank u 😊

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sriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: sparkingsoul
lovely update...
waiting for next update soon

thank u will update soon😊

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sriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: 9900
Wonderful update 😊
Raman hiding from thoshi and troubling ishu is so cute😳
Loved raman's concern for ishu but feels sad as she really misses her family😭
Feels sad about raman not celebrating his birthday but hope he'll celebrate this year with something like midnight romance 😆
Loved it a lot.
Please continue soon waiting for the next update 😃

thank u for ur lovely comments,i will try to update soon😊

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sriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: janani_divan
I missed part 66..
Amazing update..sriya baby

Ishu going to suprise raman.wow raman birthday.photos and sweaters of raman, what she will do with that?any unique idea to present him.or ishra first night take place?im excited to know..

amma,vandy ,appa,bala are missing ishu,they send all her belongings,this make raman furious ,thank god toshiji dnt know..

day by day raman bold horaha hain.mall scenes are awesome sriya baby.ishu remember her family..papam.
Atlast raman selected sarees and dresses to ishu.

Bcoz of shagun,raman not celebrating his birthday?y he still stick with his past?y he not forget shagun?raman loves ishu right?then y he stick to that day.hope ishu will celebrate ramans birthday and heal his wounds...toshiji may change in ramans birthday..

i want ishu to attend vandy godhbaraie.
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.

thank u dear for ur long comments
and i think so someone said not to bring iyers b;w bhallas,😛
and now someone asking opposite to it😉

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: sarayasriya

thank u dear for ur long comments
and i think so someone said not to bring iyers b;w bhallas,😛
and now someone asking opposite to it😉

when i said,i want ishra to take first step,bcoz ishu always stuck with appa jap and iyers:-D:-D.haa godhbaria toh after ishra consumation and toshiji's realisation ..ha ha ha

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nandinisaha13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#816

sorry for not commenting.😕😕
busy wid studies..
but i have read the updates regularly!!
and as asual its awesum...😛
i love the way u make ishra romance in ur story!!😳😳😳
PS- if raman could bring the genuine smile on ishu's face back.. i mean bring iyers na.. she really misss dem yr 😭😭
continue soonish
thanks fr the pm😊

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sriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#817

hi friends iam back again with one more update,thanks for ur continuous encouragement,i hope u will like this update

part-68

daadi:after getting ready looks at raman who was still sleeping cuddling to the pillow with folded legs touching his stomach
"abhi bhi meri raman mujje bacha jaise hi lag rahi hu"
meri sona hi thum raman,i will thanks the God for 1000times bringing ishitha into ur life,she is turning this rock raman to my old loving and caring raman
raman:wakes up lazily stretching his hands,feeling no weight on him he searches for ishu waving his hand on the bed
(st):kya aaj yeh madrasan ithna subah uut gayi
he starts calling her still closing his eyes thinking he was in their room "madrasan kaha chaligaya madrasan mujje kyoun nahi utaya thum abhi thak,how did u escaped from my arms madrasan jaldhi aavo nahi tho mi yaha aisa hi sojayengi
daadi:slaps on his cheek to get him out from his day dreams
raman:opens his eyes with shock for getting a slap in the morning that too from ishitha
he shouts opening his eyes "pagal hogaya kya madrasan thum mujje maraa"
daadi:ankhe kol karke dheko bewakoof thum kaha hi
raman:listening to daadi's words he looks at the room and then at daadi,"daadi mi yaha thumhara room me kaise?"
lekin thum mujje maara kyou mi bacha nahi hu abhi bi thum maarne keliye he speaks feeling disappointed
daadi:u r speaking without acknowledging where u are,kya hogaya thumko
raman:tho maarengi kya thum?
daadi:nahi tho kya?kya bol rahi hu thum madrasan bahon
raman:smiling cheekly kya daadu aisa nahi romance kiya kya thumse jaalan ho rahi hu kya thumhara pothi me
daadi:twisting his ear naatak bahuth ho rahi hu raman aajkal thumko
raman:naatak nahi daadi pyaar hogaya mujje mera pathni se
daadi:jaavo jaldi thumhara pathni ke paas,nahi tho bagawan ko patha chalna aur kya kya sunna padega mujko,chalo jaldhi yaha se
raman:kissing daadi on her cheek,"bye darling go to ur dreams with ur husband"
daadi:smiles at his naughtiness
...
in ishra room
she was still sleeping hugging ramans photo her long hair covering half of her face,a sweet smile lingering on her lips
raman entering into the room mutters into himself,"dekho kaisa soogaya mujje vaha daadi ke paas chodkar,pagal madrasan
she might have felt happy as i wont be disturbing being with her,kaisa aurath hi thum madrasan pathi ka dil nahi samaj kar rahi hu
sitting beside her softly places her strings of hair at the back of her ear,while she tilts towards other side being disturbed
raman:dekho iska attitude saath baje horahi hu lekin abhi thak so rahi hu,mi nahi hi naa madrasan thumhara paas kal raath thumko disturb karne keliye phir kyou sorahi hu abhi tak
with an irritated face he removes the quilt from her to awake her
the next instant a smile lingered on his lips seeing his photo in her hands hugging close to her
patting her hair he kisses on her forehead speaking to her sleeping form "kya madrasan mujje miss kar rahi hu kya,meri photo paas rakh kar soya,ithna miss kar rahi tho kal mujje utaaya kyou??
moving to her side he tries to take away his photo from her,then he feels more grip on his photo
"madrasan chodo yeh photo aur sojavo acchi tharahse"
ishu:wakes up listening to raman's voice,"with a smile she looks at him and speaks "aap utgaaya ithna jaldhi?"
raman:madrasan jaldhi kya time dekho saath baje ho rahi hu
ishu:ayyo amma mi ithna lapharfa kaisa bangaya theen dhin se isa hi dher thak sorahi hu,mummiji saab akela sambal kal rahi hu nashta keliye
raman:making breakfast is not rocket science dont worry maid is their to help her
ishu:phir bhi mi jaldhi fresh up hokar help karengi
raman:hugging her "madrasan ek baath phele poocho aur javo
ishu:looking at his face smilingly asks him "kya pochna hi mi aapko"
raman:thum mujje miss kar rahi naa kal raaath
ishu:showing ignorance "aisa koun kaha thumse mi aapko miss kar rahi hu"
raman:taking his photo frame into his hands "nahi tho yeh kya hi madrasan,he shows his photo her raising his eyebrows as if questioning her"
ishu:isiliye miney phele hi kaha tha aap eye test karo diktha nahi kya aapko yeh aapka photo phir mujje kyou pooch rahi hu"
raman:touching her face "kya kahana chahtha hi thum ,mujje thum miss nahi kiya raath,mera bina thum acchi tharah sorahi thi kya kal"
ishu:looking into his eyes "aapke bina mi ek dhin bhi nahi rah paavungi raman,i love u "aap meri zindagi hi raman,aapke bina mi nahi zipavungi
raman:if ur appa asks u to come with him,he asks intentionally to know where he was in her heart
ishu:hugs him tightly shedding her tears "i will refuse his orders if he ask me to leave u"
raman:hugging her more tightly as if not allowing even air to come between them
ishu:but my appa never asks me to leave u,he is the man of high moral values,if he is such type who asks his daughter to leave her husband
never in the first place he wouldnt have sacrificed his daughter to his friend,i dont know what i should do to make u all believe me my father never breaks any relationships
i doesnt know how to prove my love to u and and ur family,when i was married i accepted u and ur family as mine,because we tied to be united for this life long,the day i leave u is only the day when my life ends
raman:pulling her out of his embrace he looks at her face where tears are flowing continuously
"ishitha never say that i wont leave u that easily,u have to bear my tantrums for more 80years
ishu:smiles through her tears
raman:sorry miney thumko bahuth hurt kiya mera baath se,he hugs her unable to see her tears
ishu:i love u raman,i cant live without u
raman:with tearful eyes,i know,i too love u ishitha
mrs.bhalla:who came to ishra room to give coffee to him listening to their talks she walks back with tearful eyes seeing her honesty towards their family
...
romi from the hall shouts to call raman "bhai aapke liye kuch deliver aaya jaldhi neeche aavo"
ishu listening to romi words comes out from raman's embrace,"raman romi bula rahi hu,aap javoo"
raman:cupping her face he looks at her with love in his eyes
ishu:smiles looking at her "raman kyaa isa kyou dekh rahi hu"
raman:sorry ishita for making u too cry early morning with my words
ishu:u didnt do anything to hurt me,i know its ur insecurity about me,till my last breath i will live with u
raman:ishitha aur ek baar isa bolengi tho
ishu:tho kya karengi raman
raman:hugging her tightly "i will elope with u to an isolated place"
ishu:chuckles at his meaningless words
listening to romi's shouts again they aparts smiling at each other
ishu:if u wont go ur brother will rush into our room
raman:chalo mi jaldhi aavungi thum bhi jaldhi ready hojavo
ishu:ok u go now
...
at the out of mansion
delivery man:aap kal kaha tha na sir yeh saree deliver karne keliye isiliye aaya
raman:taking the packet into his hands,he thanked the delivery man and rushed to hide it in his wardrobe
in their room,he taken out the saree from the packet,and looking at it or imagining his wife in that saree
sensing the door click sound from washroom he immediately hided the saree in the wardrobe before closing it
ishu:raman aap kya kar rahi hu,romi called u na?
raman:why u came back,dont u take bath today he asks winking at her
ishu:kuch bhi raman,towel bool gayi thi isiliye baahar aaya
raman:he walks forward speaking to ishu "i wont mind if u wont take bath,and i wont mind if u want some special breakfast before getting ready
ishu:moving back tensedly "raman aap aisa aage aage kyou aarahi hu"
raman:kya madrasan darr lag rahi hu kya?
ishu:aap koyi booth hi kya mi darr ne keliye
raman:tho mi koun hu madrasan
ishu:looking down shyly she speaks to him "aap raman hu"
raman:aisa nahi hi madrasan mi koun hu thumko
ishu:looks at him who was looking at her teasingly looking back down she speaks shyly "kuch bhi raman"
raman:showing fake sadness "kya madrasan mi thumko kuch nahi hi kya"
ishu:looks at him thinking he was really sad she speaks to him "aisa nahi hi raman"
raman:tho kaisa madrasan thum hi bol rahi na "kuch bhi"
ishu:ayyo isa nahi hi raman,aap meri pathi hu
raman:helding her in between his arms ho madrasan thum bahuth intelligent hu
ishu:looks at him questioningly
raman:will anyone leave her husband in another room and sleeps alone
ishu:smiles at him saying "u went and slept in daadi's lap leaving me alone here in our room
raman:u can wake me know madrasan
ishu:raman mujje late ho rahi hu,mummiji ko gussa aayengi chodo mujje
raman:i will leave u if u kiss me
ishu:chii
raman:kya chii madrasan is iam that bad he asks really worrying
ishu:raman first u get ready and let me freshup then i will do whatever u say
raman:sacchi madrasan he speaks excitedly
ishu:smiling shyly ha karungi by saying she runs from him sensing his grip being loosened
raman:rufling his hair "mujje pagal ban diya madrasan thumhara pyar se
...
at breakfast:
daadi:observes mrs.bhalla surveying the breakfast silently without scolding ishitha for anything
raman:after having his breakfast gets up to leave
mr.bhalla:jaa rahi hu raman office?
raman:haa papa bahuth kaam hi,mihir alone maintained office yesterday if i wont go today lots of work will be piled
turning to romi,"chalo romi"
romi:ha bhai chalo
raman:maa daadi mi office jaa rahi hu,by saying he looks at ishitha for whom he was informing indirectly
ishu:smiles at him understanding him
romi:bye bhabhi
ishu:romi u will come na by afternoon
romi:ha bhabi pucca
raman:kya chahiye ishitha thumko,mujje bathavo mi karungi
ishu:aap tho bahuth busy hi naa,yeh meri aur meri devar ki beech hi aap jaavo office me kaam karo,she speaks tauntingly while raman looks at her with a puppy face
daadi:observes mrs.bhalla being silent even if ishu taunting raman
raman:he signals her as if he will look after her later for taunting him
...
appa:panditji when we can do our elder daughter godhbari function
panditji:theen dhin ke baadh bahuth accha hi
appa:teeke hum fn theen dhin ke baadh karengi
after pandit leaving the house
amma:vishwa we will call ishu also
appa:no madhavi i doesnt want to disturb bhalla's family
we are enough for vandu,i can keep my daughter happy
...
in the evening
raman in office:this room went to home in the afternoon he didnt turned up till now,where he took ishitha,this romi is reckless
fellow,and this ishitha went with that bewakoof,kya karengi raman kuch socho,i will call to romi thinking that he calls to romi
romi:ha bhai
raman:arey bewakoof kaha hi thum
romi:bhai mi bhabi ke saath bahar aaya thi naa?
raman:abhi thak thumhara bhabi ka kaam nahi hogaya kya?
romi:bhai hum busy hu baadh me baath karungi by saying he cuts the call
raman:yeh madrasan bhi naa saara duniya keliye time hotha hi lekin mere liye tho bilkul nahi hotha time
kya haalath hi raman thumhara kisi dushman ko bhi nahi hona chahiye isa
madrasan iss raath ko mi thumko chodunga nahi
...
at night 8:00
raman:enters into the mansion after looking for ishitha in the lawn finding her no where at outside he enters into the room
looking at the kitchen he turns to hall seeing mrs.bhalla in the hall he speaks to her "maa ishitha kaha hi"
mrs.bhalla:walking to her room,"she didnt came till now,romi called me before an hour and said that they will be late"
raman:walking to his room "maa ko kya hogaya she is very quiet,aur iss pagal abhi thak kya kar rahi hu baahar,aur eh bewakoof uska escort hey bagawan kuch dimak dedho uss dhononko"
...
at 9:00
daadi:walking to raman's room "how many times i sent the maid to ur room to call u for dinner kyou nahi aarahi hu thum?"
raman:daadi:voh pagal abhi tak nahi aaya kaha gayi tho voh?
daadi:raman romi hi na ishitha ke saath why r u getting tensed
raman:phir bhi daadi i will call to romi,he dials to romi's number
daadi:kya hogaya is he not picking the call?
raman:out of coverage area aa rahi hu
daadi:dial to ishitha's mobile
raman:it is not connecting switch off bol rahi hu
daadi:i think so she has no mobile with her,i saw her 2times dialling from land phone
raman:thum phele kyou nahi bola
daadi:hey bagawan,this is also my mistake
raman:please daadi thum jaavo
daadi:they might be coming u dont worry come down
raman:thum chalo daadi,i will eat after ishitha coming home
daadi leaves understanding he wont budge to her words
...
at 11:00pm
raman:he decides to search for them and informs daadi
daadi:pagal hogaya kya thum,kaha dhundegi thum?romi hi uska saath,thum chup chap se sojavo
raman:nahi daadi,i will search near by areas,by saying he storms out to notice romi's car entering into the mansion
romi:stopping the engine looks back where ishu was sleeping peacefully
raman:rushes to the car and pulls romi out
romi:aah bhai dheere se mujje chot lagengi
raman:slapping him on his arm "kaha gayi thi bewakoof thum phone karke bolne ka dimak nahi hi kya"
romi:kya bhai,i told to maa that i and bhabi will be late
raman:kaha tha ye pagal,will she not get down from the car?by saying he peeps into the car
romi:bhabi bahuth tired thi,sorahi hu back seat mey
raman:kaha gayi thum uske saath abhi thak,dont u know that doctor said that she shouldnt be stressed
romi:bhai,we went orphanage bhabi requested me to stay little late how can i refuse her
raman:teeke thum javo
romi(st):sorry bhai aadha sach bola miney,he leaves from there
raman:opens the back door of the car to see ishu slept like a kid covering herself with a quilt "lagtha madam full plan se chali gayi baahar"
removing the quilt from her ,he picks her into his arms while she cocoon herself more into raman by holding his collar tightly
placing her head in the crook of his neck feeling chill while loose hair swinging on her face
raman walks into the room mesmerising at her innocent yet beautiful face
daadi:looks at raman walking with ishu in his arms,she calls raman
but raman moves silently towards upstairs without listening to anyone
daadi:pagal hogaya kya yeh bewakoof ko,he is not all answering me
romi:ur potha is not in this world he is in his wife's world thum kuch bhi bolo voh kuch sunengi hi nahi
romi,daadi,mr.bhalla laughs listening to romi's words
...
placing her on the bed he covers her with quilt,he turns back to move out from the room
ishu:helds his hand stopping him from moving she speaks unconsciously "raman aap aaj bhi mujje akela chodengi,mujje dar lag rahi hu raman,akela soone keilye"
raman:he looks back to see her speaking in sleep "ishitha iam not going anywhere"
sensing her grip loosening on him he rushes to lock the door,coming back he slips into the bed beside her,"caressing her face he talks to her sleeping form as if she is listening to his words"
madrasan where u went without telling me,baar baar mujje dara thi rahithi hu thum,lekin madam orphanage kyou gayi thi aur ithna raath thak kya kiya thum vaha?
ishitha snuggles close to him hiding her face in his chest holding his shirt tightly
raman wrapping his hands around her caressing her hair drifts into peaceful sleep
...
early morning 5:00am:
ishu:slowly getting up from the bed,brushing her teeth rushes to kitchen as rats are running in her stomach because of hunger,seeing the bread in the freeze,taking them out she starts toasting them
taking them into the plate she starts eating only to caught by raman who was staring at her standing beside the stairs,ishu hungs her head down in embarrasment while raman bursts into laugh seeing her way of eating
with a pout she looks at him
raman speaks to her dragging the chair beside her sitting comfortably folding his hands he raises his eyebrows looking at her
as if demanding for an answer from her
ishu:kya dekh rahi hu aap mujje bhook lag rahi hu isiliye kaa rahi hu
raman still keep on looking at her
ishu:"raman dont u want me to eat this bread?" aisa kyou ghoor ghoor kar dekh rahi hu
raman:na isa nahi hi baas koyi chor aakar gapchup se kaa rahi hu isiliye dekh rahi hu
ishitha speaks angrily 'raman mi chor hu?'
raman:nahi tho kya? chor hi aisa chupchap se aapna kaam karengi
ishu:aap kithna kadus hu raman,ek tharaf biwi bhook se mar rahi hu,aap movie dekh rahi hu
raman:walking towards freeze comes back with chocolate cake and venila ice cream,keeping them on the dining table he looks at her
ishu looks at him surprisingly when she was about to grab them he stops her holding her hand
with a pout she looks at him "raman yeh kya hi aap meri haath kyou pakadliye yeh icecream cake mere liye nahi hi kya?
raman:thumhare liye madrasan
ishu:she speaks innocently "tho meri haath chodona raman,mi kaalungi"
raman:phele yeh baath bathavo phir kaavo
ishu:she asks restlessly "kya bolo na raman"
raman:kaha gayi thi thum?
ishu(st):voh aapka surprise i wont tell u,u have to wait till for one more day
raman:madrasan dreams me se baahar aavo aur bathavo kaha gayi thi thum aaj?
ishu:orphanage raman
raman:kyou achanak?
ishu:raman mujje maan aaya isiliye gayi thi please raman mujje kaane dho
raman:nahi
ishu:kyou raman miney answer diya tha na she speaks with a pout on her lips
raman:subah thum mujje dhoka diya
ishu:mi raman?mi kya kiya?
raman:socho madrasan kabhi kabi thumhara brain ko saaf kar
ishu:ramannn aap mujje taunt kar rahi hu?
raman:kuch doubt hi kya madrasan
ishu:chodo mujje nahi chahiye aapka icecream ya aapka cake
raman:teeke thumhareliye laaya nahi chahiye tho mi kaalungi with that he takes the cake and icecream towards him,while he was about to take a spoonful of icecream she stops him by holding his hand
"kya madrasan mera haath kyou pakadliya"
ishu:voh mere liye,i wont allow u to eat those
raman:tho javab dedho mujje
ishu:yeh kya hi raman?mujje yaadh nahi hi,aap bolo na
raman:teeke mi boldungi but only if u fulfill ur promise then only i will allow u to eat them
ishu:teeke batha dho
raman:thumne kaha tha na subah mujje kiss karengi fresh hone ke baadh,lekin thum thumhara vachan mitti me daaldiya
so now if u kiss me then i will allow u to eat these,he speaks with a grinn on his face
ishu:opens her mouth widely listening to his words,
raman:madrasan machar andhar jaayengi,jaldhi bolo icecream melt ho rahi hu
ishu:raman aap mujje blackmail kar rahi hu?
raman:think whatever u want
ishu:no i wont, do whatever u want she speaks in same tone of raman
raman:teeke mi kaalungi thumhari bad luck ,by saying he takes the spoonful of icecream again looking at ishu from the corner of his eyes
where ishu is looking at him restlessly
ishu:she speaks atlast "raman nahi ruko"
raman:kya madrasan i want to eat
ishu:nahi mi karungi
raman:looking at her speaks teasingly "kya karungi madrasan?"
ishu:looking down shyly she speaks to him "i will kiss u"
raman:smiles inwardly for his intelligence getting up from the chair "tho karo madrasan wait kyou kar rahi hu,mera permission chahiye kya"
ishu:she gets up from her seat smiling shyly saying "kuch bhi"
raman:jaldhi karo madrasan
ishu moves forward to kiss him while he stops her from kissing
aab kya hi raman?
raman:phele thumhara muhh clean karke aavo,i doesnt want to smell that toasted bread
ishu:looks at him angrily "aap sacchi me raavan kumar hi"
raman:smilingly speaks at her,"phele jaldhi jaavo madrasan dekho thumhara icecream melt ho rahi hu"
ishu comes back after cleaning her mouth,aab teek hi na kiss karne keliye
raman:hmm teeke karo he looks at her teasingly
ishu:moves towards his cheek and again stopped by raman
in a crying tone "aab kya hi raman?should i need to take bath now"
raman:nahi madrasan,u r not feeling,yeh kuch kaam nahi hi,romance hi,feel karke kiss karo
ishu:brings her both hands towards his neck as if to kill him with her bare hands with an angry face
raman:kya madrasan cake nahi chahiye kya,chocolate cake
ishu:brings her hands back "chahiye mujje"
raman:teeke now do as i say
ishu:nods her head as if she has no choice
raman:phele smile karo voh bhi thumhara shy smile
listening to his words she really smiles shyly
raman:now come close to me
she obliges to his words
raman:now wrap ur hands around my waist
ishu:kyaa?
raman:common madrasan jaldhi
she wraps her hands around him smiling shyly
raman:teeke aab kiss karo
she looks at him so closely where their faces are very closer
she pecks his right cheek very lovingly
raman:wrapping his hands around her waist bringing her more closer to him he speaks "left cheek me koun kiss karengi madrasan"
she shakes her head at her impossible husband smiling at him
raman:karona madrasan he speaks in a sweet tone
she pecks his left cheek,his chin,his forehead,eyelids and finally places her lips on his smiling through her eyes while he taking his charge on the kiss,saving their most romantic moment for a lifetime
after seeming at a long time they aparts for breath,ishu unable to look at his naughty eyes hids her face in his chest hugging him
tightly
raman:madrasan kuch sharmali save karo future keliye aab icecream kaavo
ishu:smiling on his chest,mujje nahi chahiye,baahuth sweet milgaya mujje aab
raman:hugging her again he speaks "pucca madrasan,100%"
ishu:still smile lingering on her lips, hiding inside him she speaks shyly "ha pucca"

now iam waiting for u people replies,tell me whether i reached ur expectations or not,whether it good or bad

Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago