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#791

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lovely update
naughty raman...he is teasing ishita 😛
loved his care towards her
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Originally posted by: rufana10
lovely update
naughty raman...he is teasing ishita 😛
loved his care towards her
update it soon 😳
thanks for pm

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updating

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Originally posted by: rufana10
lovely update
naughty raman...he is teasing ishita 😛
loved his care towards her
update it soon 😳
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hi friends,updated next part,do ur precious comments and likes
part-67

driver stopping at the city mall turns back to inform raman "saab city mall aagaya"
ishu:looks at raman suspiciously
raman:to cover up he wisphers to ishitha "kya madrasan thumhari liya aaya shopping mall me saadi karidh karne keliye,look at ur dress once
ishu:meri dress ko kya hogaya kithna cute hi
raman:but i want u to dress up in ur tamilian saree for our first night
ishu:frowning at him she speaks,"tamilian saree?"isa bhi ek saree hotha hi kya raman
raman:ruffles his hair for not getting the name of the saree,trying hard to get remind the name of the saree he
speaks,vahi hi madrasan thum madrasis pehnengi na har function me,thum bhi humara shaadi me pehenliya na voh saree,kya hi naam
?
ishu:chuckling at his antics voh saree ka naam kanchivaram hi
raman:getting the name of the saree he jumps in his seat turning towards ishitha,vahi saree madrasan voh saree keliye yaha aaya
ishu:looks at front,seeing driver got out from the car,and daadi who was concentrating only to get out from the car,
she immediately grabs ramans hand stopping him from getting down from the car
pulling his face towards her,she places a very loving kiss on his cheek,"aap bahuth sweet,cute hu"
raman:smiles shyly ruffling his hair for her lovely action
daadi:clears her throat who looked back to ask them to get down fast resulted in ending up seeing their affection towards each other
they turns away their faces smiling to themselves for being caught by daadi
all get downs from their cars,while ishitha gets feared because of the angry stare she was getting from her MIL
ishitha takes her steps back clutching raman's sleeve tightly
raman:observing the fear in her eyes because of his mother he feels very horrible at himself
he holds her hand assuring with his eyes,while she smiles at him with tear brimming eyes
romi:runs to them chirpingly as travelling with his mother was really torturing,she changed alot after his bhabi's suicide attempt,she always showing anger at them
"he whispers in his daadi's ear,"daadi jaldhi se maa ko andhar lekar javo"
daadi:understanding his words asks mrs.bhalla to get into the mall fast
while raman,ishu and romi are at outside
romi:arey bhabi u too came to buy clothes na,bhai didnt allowed me to sit with u in the car,we would have nice chattering if we are
together
ishu:thumhara bhai hi naa voh bahuth kadus hi,isiliye aisa karengi
raman:hogaya thumhara aur thumhara bhabhi ka drama aur kuch baki hi chalo
by saying he walks first followed by them
romi:bhabi u r also buying dresses
ishu:what romi we didnt came here for me?
romi:what bhabi,we came here because maa wants to buy a saree for the bride who was marrying tomorrow
ishu:hoo i dont know sorry
romi:koyi baath nahi hi bhabi,bhai brought u here forcefully that means he is going to shower u with many gifts
ishu:smiles shyly saying her famous word kuch bhi
romi:ha bhabi kuch sharmali bhai ke liye rakdho,he speaks teasingly
raman:smiles listening to their talks
ishu(st):raman u r playing games with me,pagal kardiya thum mujje
toshi:with sales girl,"show me new designery sarees"
raman:daadi,wont u buy anything?
daadi"with a smiling face,mujje sirf thumhara kushi chahiye raman
raman:smiles looking at his daadi
toshi:raman thumko yaha kya kaam hi ladies section me,jaavo gents section me kuch shirts lelo romi ke saath
raman:maa i dont want to buy anything
toshi:then also it wont be good u staying in the ladies section go with romi
raman:with disatisfied face he agrees to his mother,
before leaving he speaks to daadi,"daadi ishitha will also buy sarees,if she wont u make her to select the sarees
daadi and ishu smiles at his concern
...
ishitha:she was in so confused state to select even one saree,
toshi:oyy thum ko kithan time chahiye ek ganta hogaya ek saree bhi nahi kareed kiya thum,jaldhi karo
daadi:toshi u go and see some dresses for urself,by assigning task to mrs.bhalla to make her busy she moves to ishitha
"kya ishita what happened dont u like anything in this shop
ishu:daadi mujje help karona selection me
daadi:laughing at her request,"beta my taste was old,select urself
raman(st):did ishitha buyed anything or not,yeh mamma bhi na kuch bhi bolengi
ishu(st):ayyo i was unable to select anyone saree,if mummiji comes back she will definitely scolds me for my incapability to select
even one saree
ishu(soul):please ishitha check ur face once in that mirror
ishu:in an angry tone "why u came again,i said u dont ever come then why u came?"
and what happened to my face it is very good,by saying she looks into the mirror
ishu(soul):budhu iam not saying u r not looking good,but iam saying did u anytime did shopping on ur own
ishu:she goes into thoughts
...
fb:
vandu:amma yeh saree kithna pretty hi naa mujje bahuth accha laga,i will take this
amma:take it vandu,it is really good,pink color will suit to u
ishu:looks at them with a jealousy looks
...
vandu:my shopping was completed
amma:mine was also completed
vandu:then we will move
amma:udhar dekho thumhara pyari behan voh still confusion me hi,
both moves towards her
vandu:ishu how many times i have to say select fast,4hrs completed u still didnt buy a single dress,see we shopped almost everything
yeh kya hi ishu?
ishu:why r u pissing on me,i wont buy anything we will go,by saying she starts walking towards the exit
vandu:yeh gussa tho kabhi kam na hojayengi
ishu:looks back angrily listening to their comments
amma:why r u looking angrily at ur akka,what wrong she spoken,did u anytime tried to buy anything on ur own,always confusion
kaisi ladki ho thum,saab vishwa ki vachan se huva,bahuth laad diya thumko
ishu:pointing her finger at her amma,"dont scold appa,i wont keep quiet if u speak something wrong about my appa,he is world's best appa"
it was her birthday tomorrow not mine,so i wont buy anything,now come with me or else u have to take taxi to come home
amma:dekho vandu yeh ladki dekho kithna attitude dikh rahi hu vandu,she cant select a single dress but she is warning us
appa:calls ishitha standing inside the shop
ishu:listening to appa's voice,she runs towards him hugging happily,dekho appa,they r scolding me
appa:kissing on her forehead,chalo ghar chalengi
ishu:nods happily
...they reaches to their mansion
amma:while walking into the house she starts her ranting on appa "dekho vishwa thumhara pyari beti kya kiya phir se"
vishwa:what madhavi cant u walk silently
ishu:who was walking with her father hugging him chuckles at her father words
amma:dekho kaisa hass rahi hu yeh buddhu
ishu:appa do whatever but make her to shut her mouth
appa:voh kya hi na beta thumhara maa ek dumbo hi
amma:vishwa bahuth hogaya unka pampering do whatever u want tomorrow is vandu's birthday but she didnt selected atleast one dress
what iam for u go and start ur chattering with ur beti
she angrily moves inside the house only to see the sofas filled with lots of packets
vandu:yeh saab kya hi maa
ishu:looks at the packets frowningly
appa:yeh meri choti beti keliye unka appa karidh karke aaya
ishu:she runs to the packets opening all those packets,she speaks to appa "wow appa kithna pretty hi yeh saari dresses mi best appa,amma learn something from appa
now i have new dress for akka's birthday
...
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a lone tear escapes from her eyes remembering her father,"appa i miss u,u r the best appa,but today who will save me from mummiji's scoldings
mrs.bhalla:oyy abhi thak nahi huva kya thumhara selection raath bar yaha hi baitne ka iradha hi kya
ishu:mummiji voh mujje hmm,she speaks random words while crushing the saree which she was holding not understanding what to say
mrs.bhalla:rehne dho thumse nahi hogaya mi thumko dikhavungi thum select karo by saying she moves other end where daadi was standing
ishu:smiles at mrs.bhalla's concern
(st):mummiji bath tho yeh hi mujje select karna nahi aathi,aab mi kya karu murgan
daadi:who was standing at the back of mrs.bhalla,looks at ishitha who was seeing the sarees showing by mrs.bhalla in a shock,
raman was standing at the back of ishitha hiding behind her not to be identified by mrs.bhalla who was busy in selecting the sarees for her bahu
daadi:laughs seeing him hiding from his mother like a thief,while he winks at daadi,as the other 2 ladies were busy in selecting sarees
daadi diverts mrs.bhalla view to a saree which daadi holded meanwhile raman wraps his one hand around ishu's waist and the other closing her mouth from shouting
she gets shocked by the sudden turn of events and starts struggling to come out of the unknown man's arms
raman:madrasan jyada budhiman jaisa math behavae karo
listening to his voice she looks back to see the raman who was holding her,seeing raman hiding from his mother to stay with her she controls her laugh while he winks at her
mrs.bhalla:nahi mummiji yeh saree accha nahi hi,by saying she turns to ishitha
ishitha immediately turns towards mrs.bhalla's side,holding a saree infront of her to hide raman from his mother
while raman hides at the back of ishitha
mrs.bhalla:"oyy what do u want to buy that saree" mrs.bhalla speaks pointing to the saree which ishu is holding to protect raman
ishu:ha mummiju acchi hi naa yeh saree
mrs.bhalla:voh saree bilkul accha nahi hi,mi dhikavungi thum select karo
ishu:nods her head
ishu:slightly turning her head back towards raman she speaks "raman jaldi chalo yaha se mummiji dekungi thumko isitharah chupak kar,aaj yeh shop ka roof hud jaayengi
raman:holding her waist kuch nahi hoga madrasan,sirf thumhare liye miney shop pura kaali kar diya sirf thum,mi, mamma aur daadi
ishu:raman aap please haath nikalo yaha se
raman:gripping tightly his hand on her waist he speaks huskily "kaha se madrasan"
ishu:please raman mummiji dekengi tho bahuth gussa hojayengi
raman:ho tho nahi dekhengi tho thumko teek hi naa
ishu:rammaaan
raman:madrasan ithna pyar se mujje math bulavo
mrs.bhalla:oyy ishitha dekho yaha kaha hi thumhara dimak
ishu:immediately looks at mrs.bhalla
mrs.bhalla:yeh saree teek hi naa
raman:looks at the saree he doesnt likes that
ishu:was about to say yes
raman tightens his grip on her waist making her numb without letting a word out
mrs.bhalla:kya yeh achha hi aur nahi
raman:whispers in her ear "saree is not good madrasan,say no"
ishu:nods her head negatively as she was completely in his spell
raman:aabse mi muh se nahi bathaungi thumko
ishu:the only word she can utter is "haa"
mrs.bhalla:taking out another saree "ishitha yeh saree kaisa hi"
raman makes a pattern y on her back indicating her the saree is good
ishu:simply nods her head in positive way
mrs.bhalla:yeh bagawan mujje bacha diya yeh ladki kam se kam ek saree thi select kiya
raman:chuckles at his mothers remarks
while ishu pinches on his hand which was wrapped around her waist
raman:instantly withdraws his hand from her feeling pain,"kya madrasan maarne ka iradha hi kya"
ishu:raman aap aisa karthi rahithi tho mujje mujje
raman:kya ho rahi hu madrasan
ishu:raman mi jaavunge aap yaha isa karengi tho
raman:tho ghar me teek hu naa
ishu:she looks at him with her pouting lips
mrs.bhalla:oyy koun hi thumhara peeche kyou baar baar vaha kya dekh rahi hu
ishu:kuch nahi mummiji
mrs.bhalla:mujse nahi hoga thumhara shopping mi jaakar raman ko bulavungi,voh hi teek hi thumhare liye
by saying she walks to mens section
raman:hey bagawan,yeh maa bhi naa by saying he immediately rushes to mens section
leaving a pouting ishu and laughing daadi
...
in the mens section:
mrs.bhalla:romi bhai kaha hi
romi:who was completely engrossed in shopping looks at his mother
mrs.bhalla:bewakoof kaha hi thumhara bhai
romi:ha maa yaha hi naa bhai by saying he looks their surroundings
mrs.bhalla:where ur mind was,u even doesnt know he was not here
romi:voh mujse bada hi,bacha nahi hi raastha bulne keliye
raman:maa iam here by saying he makes their attention towards him
mrs.bhalla:kaha gaya thum
raman:kya maa kuch kaam hi kya,mi phone aaya tho baahar gaya
mrs.bhalla:dekho thumhara shopping katham hi nahi ho rahi hu,thum mere saath aakar unka help karo
raman:thum hi naa maa
mrs.bhalla:thumhari biwi meri baath sunengi kya
abhi thak ek saree select kiya,aur mujjse nahi hoga
raman:acting innocently chalo mi jaldhi se karungi unka shopping
...
raman selects many sarees and dresses for ishitha,after paying the bill everyone starts walking out
his gaze turns towards a saree which was in another shop
...
others reaches the car only to see raman missing
ishu:daadi raman kaha gaya?she asks in a tensed tone
daadi:abhi thak hamara peeche aaya na abhi kaha gaya,yeh raman bhi naa kuch bina bolkar gayab ho rahi hu
...
raman in the shop:yeh saree kal deliver karo
salesman:teeke sir
...
mrs.bhalla:romi jaakar dekhar avvoo
raman:kisiko dekna jaa rahi romi
ishu:raman why u left without informing us,
raman:phone aagaya tho baathkar aa rahi hu ishitha
...
everyone leaves to the mansion
...
at night after dinner
in daadi's room:
raman walks into her room,placing his head on her lap he closes his eyes
daadi:twists his ear
raman:he gets up instantly shouting at his daadi,"kya daadi maarne ka iradha hi kya"
daadi:thumko sharam nahi hi raman,will u sneak into the shop like a thief being the MD of many companies
raman:who was there in the shop we 4members a sales girl and the owner na?
daadi:phir bhi raman thumhara biwi ko dekhne keliye chup chupse aaya bakra kar diya thumhara maa ki?she asks with a disbelief eyes
raman:chuckling at daadi,"u know she makes me to do the most unexpected things,mamma was very stubborn to send me to mens section
i dont know what happened but my heart said that she was unable to select anything,so i ended up doing that
daadi:with a smile makes him to sleep on her lap,patting on his head
after confirming he was in sleep she starts weeping "raman i know why u came here today,still u remembered those bitter days of ur past"
two more days were left for my potha raman's birthday this is the day u left the house for the sake of that woman who cheated u,on ur birthday u came to know the reality of her
from that day u never allowed ur daadi to celebrate ur birthday,really the destiny played a game with u raman,any person will be excitingly welcomes their birthday but ur birthday remembers that womans
betrayel to u,i hope ishitha will sweep out these memories also
...
ishu comes to daadi's room in search of raman
seeing him sleeping on daadi's lap she moves to them
"daadi why raman is sleeping in ur lap,did i do any mistake,phirse raman ko gussa aaya kya mujpar
daadi:aisa kuch nahi hi ishitha baas iss daadi ka yaad bahuth arahi hu meri potha ko isiliye aaya,mujje help karo we will make him to sleep comfortably
ishu places raman's head comfortably on the pillow
daadi:she starts sewing the sweater she left aside after raman coming to her room
ishu:sitting beside sleeping raman she speaks to daadi "daadi u r making sweater but why?
daadi:every year i will make a sweater for my raman
ishu:runs her fingers lovingly on raman's hair,turning to daadi lekin kyou?
daadi:raman born in the mid of winter and rainy season,so i thought of making a sweater for him,now it became a habbit of preparing
a sweater for him every year
ishu:in an anxious tone "daadi kab hi raman ka birthday"
daadi:after 2days ishitha
ishu:wow we will celebrate his birthday in a grand way
raman:he doesnt likes to celebrate his birthday,he was not accepting the sweater prepared by his daadi from 7yrs
ishu:seeing daadi in tears,kya hogaya daadi thum kyou ro rahi hu?
daadi:on this day raman left the house for that woman leaving us
on his birthday he came to know that she was using him but not loving him,he stayed away from us for 7yrs
wiping her tears,dekho raman ka photos bachpan ka photos bi hi,thum dekho mi abhi aathi hu
after daadi leaving the room
ishu with tearful eyes starts watching her husband photos which were from his birth to till 21years
aap ithna cute hi raaman,when u smile the dimples on ur cheeks,it will make me to go mad,aap kyou upset hi raman,mi huna aapki saath
wiping her tears she pecks on his lips for which she gains a smile on raman's resting face
daadi:comes to her room clearing her throat seeing ishu kissing raman,dheku pothi yeh raman ka sweaters from year 1 to till now keep with u
and after sewing this sweater i will give it to u,because raman wont take it
daadi:will u sleep here with raman,should i go to other room
ishu:smiles shyly understanding the inner meaning of daadi
daadi:bolo ishitha
ishu:no daadi,i will sleep in our room,i doesnt want to disturb raman,today iam leaving my husband to his daadi,make use of this
opportunity u wont get this chance always
daadi:aur kya karengi potha mera hi lekin bangaya thumhara gulam
ishu:smiling cheekyly she speaks to daadi 'daadi yeh album mujje chahiye'
daadi:bada pyar aaya pathi mey le javo
ishu:walks into her room handfully with raman sweaters and his album
keeping the album aside she starts looking at the sweaters opening each one
taking the sweater she looks at number 1 on his sweater so it is raman's sweater when he was one year old
looking at the album at his pic when he was one year old wearing the sweater which was made by his daadi "ayyo murgan meri raman kithna cute hi
yeh pink sweater,haa he has dimple at that time also,kissing his photo she checks all the sweaters
(soul)ishu bahuth late hogaya aab sojavo
ishu:lekin mi kise so sakthi raman nahi hi yaha
(soul):hmm sochne ke baath hi,kya karengi
ishu:i will do something but u go now
(soul):teeke mujje koyi shouk nahi hi yaha rahne ka bina raman
ishu:glares at her
(soul):ayyo baag javo ishu nahi tho voh ankhe se hi maarengi
...
ishu:meri mood karab karne keliye aayengi
keeping all the sweaters inside the cupboard she walked to her bead taking his photo into her hands covering herself and him with the quilt,she speaks to the photo
"i miss u raman,i miss u so much,aaj aapke bina sone padega,hmm "raman aapka birthday aarahi hu,kya gift chahiye thumko meri tharaf se,remembering his romance in the shop her cheeks turn into deep red
thum bada budhu raman pura shaam first night first night bola lekin abb jakar,bacha ki tharah jaakar daadi ke paas sogaya
chuckling herself koyi baath nahi hi mr.raavan kumar thumko jho gift chahiye vahi dedungi,kissing his photo cuddling to it she drifts into deep sleep

hope u enjoyed 😛

Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago