NIGHTMARE - OS ON RAMAN - Page 3

Its Brilliant .. Very well written .. Loved it !

Wow bhanu...loved itt

Bhanu 😊

Wow ... Very beautifully you conveyed the inner turmoil of Raman...

Loved it Bhanu 👏 Sorry for the tardiness in reading!

Originally posted by: paru_rox

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I liked the way it all descended on him, the good and the bad. Guess the catalyst was his wife's distress and the disaster-in-making his child is becoming. He is caught in between all this while all the man probably wants is some peace.

B 🤗 ... loved that you wrote again girl. Dunno what you are talking about B, this was good.

PS - Waise am amazed you remember all the dialogues perfectly.

P 🤗

Well ... you know what I was talking about ... felt it is way too abstract ... am actually glad to know that so many people got it and could make sense out of it 😳😆 ... It looked worse to me when I read it again.
Well, about RKB trying to find peace in his life. Dunno about him, but I will surely go mad given the complex scenario this man is always dealing with .

Well .. remembering the dialogues correctly .. notice they are all important scenes ... one was the Kya scene ... which I did see a million times ... Adi scene was played a day before so was fresh in my mind and Sirf Ruhi ke Liye ... vo scene to I cannot even tell u how many times I have played ... 😆😆😆

Baaki, written updates zindabaad ... they helped ... vaise after u wrote, I saw the scenes and had a proud moment to know that I remembered them correctly 😆😆

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

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Lovely OS Bhanu I especially loved how you brought in this effect of a cacophony in this when the various instances of Raman' life are clashing inside his head, suffocating him making him feel claustrophobic even in his sleep thus inducing a nightmare

Aani 🤗

So glad to know that you could make sense out of it. Honestly, I was not too happy with the outcome because felt it has become way too abstract. But, it feels great to know I was able to convey the message across to all the readers properly ... and it makes me feel so better to know that this piece was understood 😳

Thank you for reviewing.

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Wow B!.. Loved how you portrayed his turmoil. A man caught between his past and present.. till it gets resolved the future can only be a night mare. Felt bad for him

Superbly written!!..

Swatz ... Raman is indeed a man who is definitely caught up between his past and present ... a vicious circle for him at the moment and no solace to find.

Glad to know you liked it and understood it

🤗🤗 An extra hug for my soul sister

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

Hello there..

Wow Bhanu what an impressive OS. I was kinda confused in the beginning until I found this a nighmare, Raman's nightmare and I got so involved in the story that I was huffing as I was living it with him. That's how good it was. I felt the pain for him.

Would love to read how this nightmare becomes a dream😳.

Thank you Shristy 😊

Believe me I wrote this while sitting in a bus and the next day when I read it, I also found it way too abstract ... it feels good to know that you could make heads and tails of it albeit later ... this was just an outcome of too much traffic and khali mind 😳