NIGHTMARE - OS ON RAMAN - Page 5

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Brilliant

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Beautiful, sad, revealing and haunting. Wonderful job!👏

Thank you for your short but amazing comment 😊

Originally posted by: luvsagar

Bhanu

Brilliant

Kitne emotions / khayal bechara Raman ke maan mein...You have penned them down .beautifully..kya memory hai!

It surprises me that the poor guy is still sane...no wonder itna jaldi aab ghussa hojata hai..anger ek tarah ki outlet hai na?

Bechara is living in a nightmare which hopefully he will soon come out of only to see the sunshine and rainbows..and with that Ishu's everlasting support to see him through future hopefully less intense grey days!

Again sheer brilliance!

Nina

Nina 🤗

So glad to find you in my thread ... 😊

Raman is indeed living a nightmare. Something which is so difficult to come out and there is no middle ground for it given his complex situation.

Originally posted by: Ohgod!

WOAH!!! Bhanu! Bangalore traffic ki jai!! 😉

And please! What an amazing memory do u have!! Think u hardly got any dialogue wrong!!! 😲

I could feel the tension/confusion/pain/emotion of Raman in his nightmare by the time i reached the end!! Poor guy!! Must be one hell of a storm inside him! 😭

So so well visualised!! As I read, the scenes came and went in a flash! 😳

Keep 'em coming 😊

Bhu 🤗

LOL ... Bangalore traffic ki jai bilkul nahi re ... roz aisa hua to pareshaan ho jaungi ... I will end up becoming an abstract entity altogether ... 😛

As I told Paru. if you closely notice, all the scenes are either of the Kya scene which I have seen on repeat 😳, Adi ka rant was fresh from the episode a day before ... do not remember them now 😛 and the Sirf Ruhi ke Liye ... well ... vo to mera fav scene of the series hai ... anytime and everytime watch ... 😳

Thank you for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: exploringmyself

amazing!

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Wow.

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Veeann

Res

V ... 🤗
First of all, take care girl ... take ur own time to update once u r back to your abode.

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

awww B this was so emotional and intense B...

Brilliantly written and brings forth Raman's inner most fear and insecurity!

yeah as u said quite different from ur previous work.

Its poignant and beautiful at that!

So Bangalore traffic makes u write such pieces, is it?? 😆

you have put together all those awesome dialogs B...loved the different route you took here...

As Raman felt relieved, I too am relieved...thank God, it was just a nightmare

TV 🤗

OS Jeanie likes my work 😳 ... I wrote a similar thing couple of months ago ... but this one took abstraction to another level ... 😳

Hope the nightmare in the series is over too ... soon

Originally posted by: cool_aparna

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unres

woah woah this was so different and really impactful...each and every line reminding of so many instances...could actually feel the pressure on Raman...nice job...and ya thnx to d traffic jam😆

Thank you for your comment Aparna 😊

Hahaha ... yeah thanks to the traffic jam 😊

Originally posted by: Autumn.

Raman ki life ki kahani ..uski dream ki zubani..

Thank you Dear 😊