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_Sapphire_

@_Sapphire_

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Great Os 😊

Edited by CharmGal - 10 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

wow this was awesome
I can feel this nightmare haunting more than him to m
u r brilliant

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautiful, sad, revealing and haunting. Wonderful job!👏

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luvsagar

@luvsagar

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Bhanu

Brilliant

Kitne emotions / khayal bechara Raman ke maan mein...You have penned them down .beautifully..kya memory hai!

It surprises me that the poor guy is still sane...no wonder itna jaldi aab ghussa hojata hai..anger ek tarah ki outlet hai na?

Bechara is living in a nightmare which hopefully he will soon come out of only to see the sunshine and rainbows..and with that Ishu's everlasting support to see him through future hopefully less intense grey days!

Again sheer brilliance!

Nina

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Bhuvana

@Ohgod!

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

WOAH!!! Bhanu! Bangalore traffic ki jai!! 😉

And please! What an amazing memory do u have!! Think u hardly got any dialogue wrong!!! 😲

I could feel the tension/confusion/pain/emotion of Raman in his nightmare by the time i reached the end!! Poor guy!! Must be one hell of a storm inside him! 😭

So so well visualised!! As I read, the scenes came and went in a flash! 😳

Keep 'em coming 😊

Edited by Ohgod! - 10 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awww B this was so emotional and intense B...

Brilliantly written and brings forth Raman's inner most fear and insecurity!

yeah as u said quite different from ur previous work.

Its poignant and beautiful at that!

So Bangalore traffic makes u write such pieces, is it?? 😆

you have put together all those awesome dialogs B...loved the different route you took here...

As Raman felt relieved, I too am relieved...thank God, it was just a nightmare

Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

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unres

woah woah this was so different and really impactful...each and every line reminding of so many instances...could actually feel the pressure on Raman...nice job...and ya thnx to d traffic jam😆

Edited by cool_aparna - 10 years ago

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Autumnn

@Autumnn

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Raman ki life ki kahani ..uski dream ki zubani..

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Very well written.. I really liked how you placed each dialogue in such connected way and the emotion carried out through out the OS is lovely. Do write more ... Thank you for the PM :)

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Thank u Bangalore traffic!!😃

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