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Aru.Divan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: rnarayan
Lovely SS, continue further<div></div>

Thanks a lot .. Will continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Tulipkhanna
Awesome.

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Aru.Divan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: zola007

read all the chapters !
Awesome !
glad Ishita and Raman are in this together !
Shagun still wants Ashok ?! Such a fool !
thank god everyone believes Miku !
good Raman understands Ishita's turmoil !
even little Ruhi is disturbed with all this !!
Shagun 😡 will she ever change ? Still blaming Ishita for everything
hope between all this mess , Adi will get more closer to his sis and Ishra though , and finally see things as they truly are !
Great work !
thanks for PMs (:

That's really nice , thanks a lot ... She is dumb and as long as she does not messes Ishra's life all of us are happy... I have not tbought about bringing a change in Adi.. So let's see how my stupid head goes while I wrote. Thank you again and you are most welcome :)

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Aru.Divan

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CHAPTER 5

He was pacing in the room upset and was feeling bad to enter this kind of a situation in his marital life. His past and present living together. His two kids one loving his past and the other no matter what will love only his present. Today she even braced herself to spend time with her biological mother for one person, her Ishima. He even wondered if he could love any other child who was not his biological child like the way Ishitha does. She never failed to amaze him and such was her behavior even today. After that small family moment they shared earlier this day and after helping his daughter free from her insecurities, he found her going towards her biological mother just to make her feel at home after a very mentally tiring day for all. She came running in ,her mouth covered with hands to shut her loud sobs. He was startled seeing her and this was the first time he found her uncontrollable. Even on the day she was assaulted, she was silent but today was different.

He came sat next to her , stroked her head and took her in a side hug, she clung on to him tightly and held on to his shirt like her life was dependent on it. She was getting out of control and had to shush her loud else she would remain the same. "Raman she called me mama for the first time and what have I done. I sent her out. I do not deserve her. My Ru was upset today and still I sent her to Shagun. What is wrong with me Raman ? I am the worst mother on earth no wonder I am infertile". Temper rising in his veins, Ishitha he yelled at her loud. "Stop this nonsense. You are the most wonderful women I know on earth and the best mother any child can have. I have always wanted you to be Adi's mother. I am proud of you. He wiped the tears off her face and gave some water to calm her. That was the night their emotions overcame all the awkwardness, both wanted each other for sleep. Without further hesitation they lay themselves on the bed and even without further delay she found her head rested on his chest and he enveloped her with his hands. There was no physical desire but all they wanted was each other together even in sleep. The weather was very rusty in the morning, Shagun was too deep in her sleep to even remember she was with her daughter who was scared of thunder. The little child tiptoed and made her way towards her parents room. She opened to find them hugging and felt happy that they loved each other a lot. May be it was the weather or the door, Raman opened his eyes and found her standing near the door. He did not want to hallucinate her presence, so rubbed his eyes few more times and found her approaching them for real. The next second she threw herself between them and found herself hugged by both her parents. The father daughter shared a beautiful kiss only to be nudged by the lady next to him reminding that she still existed. Both giggled and moved towards her, to continue the lost sleep after some sweet early morning family moments.

Adi was struggling to get ready in his new place. It was his house but he felt like he was staying in a guest house. Ruhi rushed in to her room and kept shouting for her mother. Before she can raise her voice for the third time, Ishitha came running in and who helped her out everything. This was something he could never experience at that tender age. His parents were getting separated and was getting admitted in a boarding school. He glared at her for shouting so loudly in the morning, Jr. Bhalla, budding Jhansi Rani was least bothered. Ishitha did look at Adi but he welcomed her with a very disgusted look and he focused in getting ready with some abuses here and there which clearly indicated his brought up. Both dared not open their mouth knowing the kind of boy he was. Ishitha also got ready in the meantime for her clinic along with Raman who was leaving for office. Shagun chose to remain silent for the morning and to be frank Ishitha felt greatly relieved to start a smooth morning. All she asked was Raman to drop Adi in school but since the boy refused to tag along, Shagun found herself in a cab tagging her son along to school. She just hated these kind of duties but here she was made to do and cursed herself for her luck. Whether it was fate or the timing they chose Shagun and Adi kept bumping in to Raman Ishitha and Ruhi. Adi hated their sight whereas she did not want to mess up any bit and make her stay difficult with the Bhallas. The more they were close the more Shagun's heart burnt.

After lunch on a Saturday afternoon, it was just family time. All had gathered in the living room just to have some fun. Ishitha was at her mother's place spending time with her parents and sisters. In her own worries she felt she neglected Mihika. So today was just that one happy time with her family. No disturbance. At the Bhalla's also the scene was different from usual, both Raman and Adi were on the sofa watching some match along with Romi and Mr. Bhalla. Simmi was in her own lost world and Toshi was having some fun by herself. Ruhi was sitting on the arm rest of the sofa with her legs over her father. He was also holding her protectively to prevent her from falling. Shagun found the right moment and sat next to Adi. All failed to notice her presence as they were glued on to the match. After few hours Ishitha entered and went directly to the kitchen for making snacks and tea for all.She set everything on a tray and moved to the place where all were gathered. Her heart fluttered the moment she saw Ruhi Raman and Adi together. Adi was almost cuddling on to Raman not realizing much but she could not take in the scene either. Shagun was also on the same sofa who had a hand on her son which was also touching Raman. He was engrossed too much in to the match to even notice his Ex touches. For a split second she felt like an outsider. She wanted to shout and shoo out her Sautan but remained mum. The Tv was blocked for a couple of minutes Madarasan, Can you not see ? All of us are watching Tv here... Move from here. Shagun's evil smirk made her feel like puking and before she could even rush shagun added more spice to it by talking about the game not even knowing the spelling properly. The person whom she considered everything was not in his senses to realize the depth of the words. There were others who understood her restlessness and tried handling the situation but Raman was completely acting like a duffer, period.

Raman while entering the room noticed that all her clothes were thrown on the bed and floor. The room was shabby, memories of the day when Ishitha knew about Sanjana came in to his mind and laughed shaking his head, in fact he even smacked his head with his hand lightly. Oye Jhansi Ki Rani, What happened today ? With whom am I having affair today ? his smirk was even irritating her and she was in no mood to argue. Not today Raman. Glad you know I am not having any affair then why have you made this room in to a fish market ? I am not in a mood to argue Raman. He was surely testing her patience. She really did not want to fight with him but the way Shagun irritated her was way too much and this man her husband failed to realize any of this. Taking a deep breath in, she arranged all her dresses neatly back in to the wardrobe by then Ruhi had also come in asking her mother hurriedly to leave. Where are you both going at this time ? Papa, both of us are sleeping over at Paati's place. Myself Ishima chithi shravu all of us together. We are going to have fun. Your leaving me alone ? Papa, your a buddhu ! Adi Bhaiyya is alone you can spend time with him and Shagun mama was also saying she was bored. You can all talk together. He felt like smacking himself for being put like this, he couldn't shout at Ruhi. He looked at his wife expectantly, but she paid no attention to any of his signals today. She was angered beyond limits. He has shouted at her in front of Shagun then did not realize her touch on him, not even a word of apology. The night was bad for both. Both had lost sleep they needed each other and he still had no idea about her behavior.

Ishitha had gone in to a shell after the whole scene, even the next day morning being for a Sunday she carried on with her work regularly. All the other noticed and felt like drilling some sense in to Raman but Ishitha had stopped all of them as she felt it was his need to realize these things. Every time he cannot be told was her answer. They all felt she was right and wanted to respect her. He felt something a miss in his madarasan's attitude and the more he went closer, the more she went behind. Shagun was happy about the damage and she was even extra sweet with Ishitha that day, just to irritate and spent more time with her so that she did not get to spend time with Raman. They were back to the couch and bed on Sunday night. After spending another sleepless night both headed towards work. He was determined to get this cleared, he needed her more than ever. In fact it was already 4 days since Shagun had come along with Adi. Raman Kumar Bhalla was a man on a mission today. It was mission Ishitha.

P.S: Not Proofread..

Chapter 6 - Pg 26

Edited by Aru.Divan - 10 years ago

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Akshatha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

i liked interaction b/w ishra...👏

Raman she called me mama for the first time and what have I done. I sent her out. I do not deserve her. My Ru was upset today and still I sent her to Shagun. What is wrong with me Raman ? I am the worst mother on earth no wonder I am infertile. Temper rising in his veins, Ishitha he yelled at her loud. Stop this nonsense. You are the most wonderful women I know on earth and the best mother any child can have. I have always wanted you to be Adi's mother. I am proud of you.

story is getting too interesrting👍🏼 ... not able to wait ti sunday yaar😔

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deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Wow aruna..thats a beautiful update

looking frwd to how raman finally realises ishita's insecurities with shagun around and shows shagun her real place

Edited by _Dipsi_ - 11 years ago

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

damn dis shagun...

i want to kill her...

raman needed 4 days tym to be on mision ishitha...

dumbest person...

updte soon...nd pls yar som 1 insult shagun..

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N.R.Rona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

It was fantastic ..cant wait..pls update soon..dont make us wait till sunday..plsss...loved the way they held onto each other n then the fight tooo...so cute it was..

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kuls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

aaawww... ruhi came back... dat was cute n raman n ishu scene was emotional... arggg raman shouted ishu infront of shagun... now if he doesnt romance with her in front shagun... den i myself will crush him into pie ces... duffer buddhu raam... i support ishu dis time... plss dont give in dat easily ok... mission ishita... am sooo excited... wat fun is der... or romance... sooo excited... plsss continue soon... n UPDATE SOON..