OS IshRa (Ishita & Raman)- Till Death do US apart...

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Reserved ... Need time to read this one ... I already know what will happen given the title ... but the brilliant flow was enough to hook me in the first paragraph itself ...

Will read it at peace and then comment.

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Well done Girl! Nicely written...
u hv portrayed every emotion so well...
I wish in tge show too tgey remain together forever

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Ohh my..!! That was so not fair.!! I just ended reading it having big tears in my eyes..!! 😭

All the moments you showed...were simlple but soo beautiful...as if really someone's life is depended on those emotions that exist..! You just left me speechless..!!

Like i can feel the pain the hurt ..love everything...seriously each n every word of this os had shown enormous of emotions which have their own essence...!! 😊

Each and every moment...beginning with their marriage...to their love confession...to their romantic moments...to having Ruhi in their life...to have a perfect family..!! It was soo beautiful..!! I can feel myself imagning each n every moment...as if some movie was running infront of me..!! I was like drowned is your os...!!! 😳😳

And the last part was really heart wrenching for me..!

As i am the one crazy creature who loves and even believes in fairy tales n never ending love stories alot..!! even i wish one for myself too..!! 😆I seriously wished to live this kind of life..!! But last part was really painful...ishita was counting her last breath...😭.And Raman is not ready to let her leave him..!! Awww...that moment bring soo many uncountable tears in my eyes..!!😭 Its very hard on my part to read such stories..!! But still it was beautifully written/...with a perfect ending...that they are still together in their heaven of love..!! 😳

hats off to u for writing such a beautiful os..!! Don't say it bad boring etc...it was really awsumm./...loved it..!! 😊👏👏

I know my comment is lil big..!! 😛I think i should control my emotions n thoughts..😛..but ur os made me crazy n i feel like sharing it..!! sorry if i have bored u..! 😆😆