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ZaaraBB

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

i just seen teaser...i will be very patient...and great update once again!

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ALEHA

@ALEHA2011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Great update will wait till midnight for the next part

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: -Raz-
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first part was so good...beautifully written.

second part as well...bt u left me hanging ..i was waiting for a GM update...but nevertheless will be waiting still...please updates...i LOVED it

Thanks Raz. Happy to see u here. Yes my next update will b to ur taste😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ankitasidana
Wow OSJ...glad to read one more from your side
i missed your pm though but found this one😳😳
would love to read how you finally make ishra do jism urf dil and ek jaan
apt title and amazing start...ending was superb
waiting for next part
cont soon n do let me know sweety

Dear Anki thank u so much. My apology. Due to time constraint I couldn't pm at all but I am so glad u found this n to see u hear. I will pm u definitely for the next update. 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: nrn1486
Aww.. such a cute take on this scene! Loved how you revisited all those famous IshRa moments.. right from the remote fight to the recent ring scene.. Especially liked the way you wrote Ishita's point of view for each of those moments.
Good one.. update soon😊

Thank u so much for ur amazing feedback. Looking forward to ur readership. It means a lot.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011
Great update will wait till midnight for the next part

Awww that's so sweet. I won't make u wait till midnight😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: usaonly
Miss your post for many days.You are back with awesome OS. Love it hope you continue soon.😊

Yes dear. My muse refused to visit me so I didn't write much. But I am back😃

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

OJu 🤗 ... you are back. Finally ...was going to PM you girl.

Loved this one. Do jism ek jaan indeed. Vandita advising Ishita was such a sweet scene, am glad you did not include Mihika in that one.
Am kinda irritated with the overdose of Mihika (& her stupidity) that we have had recently. Also between Vandita & Mihika, I have always liked Vandita (& Shruti Bapna) more.

And Raman playing Bheege honth tere was too hilarious. Poor guy 😆. Waise I doubt he's gonna kill Mihir the next day ... nahhh, he would be in too good a mood for that 😉

PS - Yaar pls give us a super romantic update with some nice dialogues about their old times n stuff. Also this needs to have a really good morning after scene. Bas.