OS : 'Letter from Raman to Raman' (29th Oct)

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Seriously woman I don't know how you can pen down such beautiful words, write exactly how one can feel or understand situations like this.. You know I've been a silent reader until now because this piece of yours made me want to say what a magnifique writer you are, seriously take a bow!!! I'm an emotional fool who couldn't hold my tears after reading this.

What a brilliant piece of writing!!

Thank you ! It wrote this a few days ago, then edited to add the "new flats" line as the scripted moved on, but i've been afraid to post it because i didn't know if it was representative of Raman at all. cv's are butchering his character and i didn't want to do the same.

Thank you very much for the kind words! Means a lot! 😳

Sorry for making you cry. 🤗 let me hug you to make it all better! Emotional pieces are really not my forte so i'm feeling flattered that i brought emotions to you.

The fact that i made you quit your silent reader status to comment is an honor. Thank you for doing it ! i genuinely appreciate it !

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA
This is beautiful 😭 👏

Thank you dearest ! 😳 🤗

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: nrn1486
I cannot express in words how amazingly written this is..
That letter!! You've put all the pain, the heartbreak, the sorrow in it so beautifully..It brought tears to my eyes.. especially the way Raman ended it..

God, I'll forgive you for what you did to me 6 years ago, if today, you let me have Ishita."

Any girl would melt at those words..
And then that line that Ishita added. Oh my.. ❤️
Brilliant, girl.. seriously brillaint👏

I genuinely appreciate your kind word. I tried to make it emotional but that not really my forte. I'm both glad an sorry for bringing tears to your eyes. 😳😲

I wrote this a week ago i think, and then edited it every night a bit to adjust to the current track. I ended the last line of raman's letter minutes before posting it.

What i kinda love is that to say day he wrote the letter (he wrote it very early in the morning), ishita wrote him that she'll be back by her side, as if god answered his prayer. Faith came back into his life with this.

That line from ishita was inspired from the song "say you love me" by jessie ware. I can't take credit for it.

Thank you again ! Thank you for reading and for commenting !

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: BloodyHypocrite
Beautifully written but i cant feel for rkb character anymore becoz of his rude word toward ishita

RKB character have been butchered by the cv's. his pain touch my heart so i can't do nothing but to root for him but i totally understand what you are saying.

Thank you for coming and commenting even though you can't connect with rkb, i appreciate that !

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shalz_123
RAjji...u wrote an os... yay yay yay... wait let me do a lil dance first...
okk done... now... 'my my' ( my two year old neice taught me this expression)...i just love u.. ( see frnds do say i love u to other frnds when they are overwhelmed...)...

okk back to the os... i m so thankful to you for writing this amazing piece of writing... pata haain.. i so want u to continue this... dil hamesha mange more... 😆...i just love it tooo much... i m going to read it again... ❤️ by the way..u just cant control ur sense of humour, can u girl... in that intense letter... i found a line, where i chuckled ..." if i continue to write, i might have to write on the desk now..." tht was 😳😆

keep them coming...

Shalini 🤗 Hahah loved your dance, may i join in too ? 🥳

Sorry i didn't send pm to anyone about this OS because i didn't felt like it was any good.

i'm all about love declaration ! I love you too ! 🤗❤️

Hahahaha that's sweet but no sequel for now. I had a hard time writing this piece because i'm not really an emotional kind of person. "emotional pieces" doesn't come easy to me. So yeah... no sequel for now. 😆😆

Hahaha humour makes everything better right? 😉 you're awesome for noticing it !

Thank you shalini my darling !!

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Payal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Updated on Pg 2 😳

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: hjfanatic
WOW!

Such an awesome writing on Raman's emotions!!

I got tears when i neared the ending

While reading, i lost myself in it..tht i felt it is real, no, i dont mean serial episode..i felt it is a real life family scene happening infront of my eyes,,so natural..hats off to u..one of the best OSs i have ever read

Wish u cud be one of the writers..u well have a great sense of humour and also now seeing ur emotional side!

And yes, u didnt lose ur humour side..''His heart is trying to jump out of his rib-cage as he takes the papers in his hand.'' even here, she wrote her lines with red lip-liner..it gives both humourous and emotional feeling..as red implies heart

Nice quote..very true..opening our heart and reviving it makes us feel better and also solves the pblms

Wish this to be hpn but i also wish Ishita to write a diary abt wat is hpning around her, she shud seriously start writing atleast from nxt year..so tht we viewers can understand wat is going in her mind

Hoping to see ''a letter from Ishita to Ishita''..from u

Atleast, now keeping others pbms at a side, Ishita has to take a deep breath and think upon y Raman is behaving like this?

''He didn't utter a word on our frndship when he knew b4 hand..then y now?

Is there any mistake from my side?

Yes, involving in all others matters..somewhere i forgot tht iam someone's wife..and i lost to be a mother..i didnt fulfill my relations as wife and mother which r most imp. for me than any other

Yes, it is my mistake..knowing how much misery Raman faced in the past, i took to enjoy his jealousness..it went over the peak

Iam now married, it is true tht Mani is a gud frnd of mine..but i shud have understood the limits

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I have to say sorry to Raman...''

Hope u come up like this in another post!!

Once again, i say, it is awesome experience reading this letter from Raman with full of emotions..sry..from u.. u r one of the most creative and talented ppl i observed Raji..

BTW..i feel i didnt come across ur daily captions since 2 days..though it is more serious, u always have ur own way to make them funny..i, who dont even smile for jokes..burst out reading and seeing ur captions..do continue them

Aww thank you ! Sorry, didn't want to make anyone cry. But i'm glad i made you feel something ! 😳

You are too kind ! I was imagining raman sitting at a little desk while writing this in the middle of the night so i know what you mean. It ends up feeling more like reality than fiction at times !

Hahah i should change my major and go into media and tv course, then i'll write a show, and i'll dedicate it to you ! 😃

More seriously, i feel like there are such awesome writers on this forum and the YHM writers are not even as good ! 🤢

humor makes everything better, glad you noticed the little colorful touch 😉

I love this author, he is such a genuine human being, his books are amazing , there are open windows to our own souls.

Nice idea ! ishita should indeed start a diary !

No plans on writing a "letter from ishu to ishu" yet but lovely idea, if i do so, i'll pm you! Nice analysis over ishita's character, i wish she would reflect like you've written, it'd be good to see!

Thank you so much for the kind words, i genuinely appreciate them !

Aww i didn't know you read my reviews too ! Do leave me a comment when you do read them !😃

Much love and thanks again for the reply ! 😳😳

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: usaonly
Wonderful letter Rajji after read this can feel what Raman is going through but the best part is Ishu just need only Raman to say he love her straight to her face WOW👏👏. We still have to wait and watch don't know for how long everything will fall in place. Now all the villian marching back to their life again.Thanks for this post hope you writng something more like this.❤️

thank you darling ! Ishita is being distant from raman because she thinks he is rude and he doesn't love her when in fact he is being rude because he LOVES HER. so all raman needs to do is 1) to let her know that he loves her and 2) to explain it all to her, calmly like he did in his letter.

Hope the MU gets cleared soon i don't like it being dragged again and again !

Thank you for the kind words darling ! Emotional stuff is not my forte so i'm not sure i can write something else in that style but if i do i'll let you know !

(didn't send pm for this one because i didn't feel it was good)

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awww this was too beautiful n emotional
Raman's every emotions r penned perfectly
n d last part omg that was great
serial main ye hone se raha
so Thanx :)

Thank you ! 😳 I had a hard time putting myself in raman's shoes because i'm so different from him that i can't really know what he is thinking. I write the letter a bit rough and cold to match his manly grumpy side.

aww thank you, you're so sweet ! I write this because i felt like YHM lacks mature discussion right now.