~*IshRa TS: The Ultimatum*~ UPDT pt2 pg8 Dec 1

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@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -mina-

youuu what are you doing here!! go un res somewhere else!! 😡

but also hi, love you 😊 ❤️ 🤗

RES-ing is my Haq on your fic!

I love you too ❤️ and I missed you so much!🤗

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rajkona

@rajkona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Read both parts! Such a wonderful story. Please do write up the concluding chapter. Eagerly waiting...

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Loved it mina...plz continue..would love to read what raman does when his wife is not fully satisfied😆.

As for this part...yeah now ur story seems complete after his apology and her clarification😳

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Ohh Minaaa...it is jjust wwooww!! loved itt completelyy!! Romanticc!!! <3

do write moree!!!

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Manmeet

@mrsrakhra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

OMGGG... after suchaaa longgg timeee...😲

but it was sooo lovely... 😃😳... beautifully written..just like part one...

👏 please try and update a little faster this time... 😆

keep up the good work 👍🏼

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Mina I happened to read the first part a couple of days ago and I was totally lost in your world of imagination but then you surprised me with this addition. I'm hooked to this one and honestly hoping that you continue this because you have a way with words even when you write a steamy scene, its sensuous and romantic.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

awesome follow-up⭐️
really enjoyed it😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

I liked that you wrote a morning after scene where Raman was horrified that he might have forced himself on Ishita and his happiness to find out that she wanted this as well was awesome. I'll definitely like that third part you're thinking of writing, take your time but do write it somewhere in the future.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Brilliant! I would love to see his reaction to remembering the details of night, and wondering how he makes it up to Ishida, in full Raman Kumar Bhalla mode!!! Please continue!👏

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columbia

@columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

What the what??!!!!!!

You continued and did not PM me yeh tho Achaa hua that I am the monkey on your head

Ok can I just say I know I shall be in minority and you can kill me for this

But I was more than satisfied and happy with the one shot esp of this is the ending unless you are taking it further and making it into an FF

Your story as a OS had punch, exhilaration, intensity all rolled in one, this second part makes it feel like something is missing - note, I am calling it second part becos now you got to give us part 3,4,5,6,7 etx etx