~*IshRa TS: The Ultimatum*~ UPDT pt2 pg8 Dec 1

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Mina I'm so glad you decided to write a second part to this. It was exactly how I had imagined, the confusion and how Raman reacted is something I wanted for him to show so that they can start their lives fresh.

I really hope you continue this story and that too very soon.

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Great take on that awful situation of CVs!

-Sona

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Res!!! Minamma will be back!! ❤️

UNRES after an eternity!😉

Minamma!! Loved it!! This is so IshRa! Loved Raman panicking and Ishita being calm about the whole thing. Raman's monologues were too good. 😆 No MUs here both admit to their wanting to be together with each other!❤️

Love reading this Mina Di! As always this time too you amazed me with how you manage to get into the skin of a fictional character!! Awesome!! And if you get the inspiration plz do continue this story! Or else please write more on Ishra!

Hugs to you Di!🤗

Edited by Diahh - 11 years ago

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

What a terrific piece- Lovely! 👏👏👏👏

Please do seriously consider another part😉

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

oh boy oh boy you updated!!! ok seeing there was an update, i had ear to ear smile. and it remained while reading the update! and now my cheeks are hurting!
awesome update- i was wondering about the morning after the os. the only thing that struck me odd was i didn't read raman to be drunk enough to forget details the next morning. but then i have only seen people getting drunk and acting stupid (reallly stupid :D) but never the after effects so...
you can't show a possibility like that and not follow up - that's not nice ;P
and if possible, pls pm me (for stories on both forums)

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Ahh what a lovely continuation of part 1..
A mourning of realization it was.! LOL...I was grinning ear to ear imagining a blushing and embarrassed Raman when she pulled out the kiss..Poor thing..😆
Would love it of you continued this one..Its gonna be interesting to see what he does to satisfy his wife! 😉 Also the naughty side in him..😆

Amazing update! :)

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Minaa!! I don't know if I have commented on this part already but here goes: I'm so honoured to be mentioned in the AN, thank you! Absolutely loved this part - was the perfect mix of assuaging our feminist guilt and also very hot too. Loved that you showed how hot communication can be, wish the CVs got that message too Really loved this bit: "You're looking forward to...that taste?"

She gasped and smacked his shoulder with a quick slap. "Besharam kahin ka!"

hahaha I LOLed hardcore. I think this second part is necessary and good to sort out their relationship and I'm so glad you wrote it. Extremely well written as usual. Thank you!

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

*blushes*

Our Puttar is insecure and biwi is her normal Jhansi ki Rani

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Di unresed after an eternity!😉😉❤️

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Diahh
Di unresed after an eternity!😉😉❤️

Haha tera budday aur mera tawfa. Thank you!!! Loved your feedback heehee. Really want to write more on IshRa if only the ideas would come...!! <3 you chotu :)