Vulnerability of a marriage - Oct 20th - Page 4

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

@ red : Exactly.! That was another thing I said in some other post. Until today, it was only playful jokes, taunts and a bunch of communication gaps between them. They have never actually discussed the seriousness of their relationship. Even if they have done something for each other, they haven't accepted it. Its always been " Ruhi ke liye " but now that they have realized that it has gone beyond that point, this track will bring in the much needed seriousness in their relationship.

@ bold : WORD.! 😉 Life isn't fair and nothing having worth comes easy..😳

Originally posted by: cocololo123

I have mixed views about this track and sometimes I am confused to what to think about it generally. I decided instead of putting in my input I am going to let the track play out. Now coming todays episode your post just said everything. I love the poetry that you chose because it is exactly Ishra's feelings today and the situation they are in. I know many people may not agree with me or hate me for this but Ishita has put more stakes into the marriage then Raman. I am not saying Raman hasn't done anything for the marriage he has but Ishita has put more into the relationship. This track to me is not about Raman's lack of trust in Ishita is more about his fears and insecurities and now he has to face them. This is the part that confuses me about I should feel about, Is the mani track necessary or not to help Raman's fears or insecurities. I think if the CVs handle the storyline and characterization properly and do not stretch the track then this could be one of the best tracks so far in YHM history because KP and DT are amazing in emotional scene. It is some of their best acting.

Sorry for the long trant! I love your posts they are so poetic and beautiful written. I would really love to read an OS, FF, SS from you if you ever chose to write on. 😊

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

that was my exact reaction ! 😆

Beautiful post doc !! (i read it with "when you say nothing at all" in another tab, it makes it even more perfect!)

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

Doc ...

This is your best writing to date!!! How well you highlighted the state of Ishra love...this line perfectly describes what is needed in their relationship :

"Ishra have found love, now it's time to work on the other aspects of their marriage. " Thanks Gan! Isn't it true they have found love now time to move on and address the other aspects of their marriage.

Communication is the most important part of any relationship, especially theirs given how it started and their past of coming out of broken relationship. Exactly! Given their previous relationships they should understand the importance of communication. They need to TALK! And I mean talk their hearts out without all the drama and lay it out there in the open!

"Raman and Ishita looking at each other with moist eyes full of love, hope, and an urge to take each other in their embrace. A wife so overwhelmed by her husband's selfless act of fasting that she couldn't find words to express her gratitude, love and appreciation for her husband. Love does crazy thing, a lady who is supposed to be an expert at giving lectures was tongue-tied in love! Raman an expert of one-liners, witty jokes and always quick on his feet couldn't come up with anything under the realm of love. Both just staring at each other with amazement saying so much yet so little. That scene between the two reminded me of the song by Ronan Keating, called 'You say it best when you say nothing at all'

It's amazing how you
Can speak right to my heart.
Without saying a word
You can light up the dark.

Try as I may, I could never explain
What I hear when you don't say a thing"

I'm blown away by this paragraph...Remember "magical hue"? ... that's it right there...👏

Thanks girl you make me blush 😳, honestly I just pen down my feelings and thoughts and if you call that 'magical hue' then thanks!!! I am so elated and now have a big ego 😆

and what a perfect ending :

"Raman and Ishita have thousand such desires, many have been fulfilled and many yet remain. If they can lay down the gauntlet and expose their vulnerability to each other then their marriage will be the one to reckon with."

Loved your translation of the ghazal...aah I'm just in such happy mood after reading this...so beautiful!❤️ My favorite ghazal of all times, I love Ghalib and then you add Jagjit singh I am a girl in love! I am so glad you enjoyed it, at 1st I wasn't gonna include it because i figured it's too heavy for a fictional show but I couldn't stop myself. I am glad you enjoyed it!

Only part where I disagree is about the script...I felt some of the scenes were rushed today to bring in drama quicker...like ideally I would have liked a follow up on Raman's exit from KC fast breaking scene...he was so upset...what follwed between that and bedroom scene...did he eat...or who fed him...I wished they lingered on that part. The 'moments' loving person in me was craving for that. And the breakfast scene, Ishita couldnt have been so distracted with a ph call that she would ignore her daughter and Raman...that felt a little out of character for me. Lately Ishita has been doing a few things out of character and it is so unfair of the CVs to ruin her character for TRPs. Forget Raman she would never ever ignore Ruhi but people need drama so this is what we get.

You know I was thinking the same thing instead of focusing on Raman's past all the time can we focus on his present feelings and today had been a good example, to see a man in love with his wife yet so angry at the thought of her and Mani! I wanted to see him eat in anger or go to bed hungry, and I wanted Ishita to witness all of this. Hopefully future episodes will give us those moments!

But your writing...flawless!👏 Haila flawless! Thanks!

Originally posted by: v_ani_patel

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Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

I wrote an essay again lol