ISHRA SS: Khwaab hai tu neend hoon main Pg 68- Completed - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Vi 🤗
Awesome yaara😳

Kitni romantic hone wali hai yeh kahani. Mujhe teri FF padh kar RKB se aur bhi pyaar ho gaya 😃

Jaldi update kardo pleej
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello YHMians, back with a new part...

bohat filmy hai, crazy hai...and errors bhi honge as I havent proof checked...pls excuse them...

I am sorry as this part hasnt turned up so good...wanted to give a longer part with more romance but the episode and the emotional melodrama just make me sulk...mood out basically!...anyways, hope the souls who were tortured like me seeing the episode would get some relief by this...if that happens, then I am happy!

Thanks for all the comments and likes...really means a lot...love u all! 🤗

So here it is...

Part 3:

His entwining his fingers with hers had made her submerge in a dreamy trance for a long moment before she shook up herself out of it. She withdrew her hand in the pretence of wanting water. He smiled and handed over the bottle to her.

It was just a 3 hour flight but Ishita was already yawning owing to a late night and also the early morning wakeup call from Mihika ensuring that she and Raman don't make that an excuse to back away.

As her head staggered to the sides, he gestured that she could rest her head on his shoulders but she refuses the offer as before, "nahi nahi...main teek hoom"

He chuckled at her formality but then his chuckles, his sweet gestures, his smiles were all making her anxious for what to look forward during the trip.

But before long, all her conscious efforts to stay away from his shoulders went down the drain as the drowsiness took over. Soon she was leaning onto the other side first and he couldn't stop himself from moving her head to his side. He made her rest on him comfortably and by the time the plane was preparing for descend, she was cosily snuggling into him, her hands around his upper arm.

Her face so close to his chin did or perhaps undid a lot deep inside him. Her soft hair brushed his cheeks, making him literally inhale in her fragrance which was a mild mixture of jasmine and perhaps coconut oil. He couldn't help a grin as he analysed the reasons for the fragrance and thought that perhaps that's the secret of her long lustrous hair which he absolutely loved but would never acknowledge openly. He thought to himself, "kuch bhi ho, madrasan ki baal hai toh badi khubsoorat". There was a sort of pride in that thought, probably a thought that the beautiful woman resting on his shoulders was his.

He couldn't control his wandering thoughts which were now imagining how it would feel like to have her long hair sprawled across his plush pillow or even better, replacing his pillow. He chided his own thoughts and held her close as she stirred in her sleep.

In her sleep, she had let gone of all conscious efforts and formalities. He, on his side had requested for a blanket from the cabin crew and tucked her beneath the same comfortably realizing that she was feeling cold.

The air hostess was indeed in awe of his love for his wife. She smiled as she gave him the blanket wishing him a happy and romantic honeymoon at Ooty. He merely smiled wondering if they really looked like a honeymoon couple to her. He surprised himself with that thought but then his adamant side woke up and rubbished the thoughts instantly, "Kya soch raha hai beta...apne gode ko lagaam deh...warna madrasan tumhe fisalaake chodegi...time rehte bachle..."

There went Raman Kumar Bhalla who shut out on the reality that he was deeply smitten by his lovely life and was in love. He forced himself to believe that it was all mere physical attraction or a lust whenever he felt an inclination towards her like what he felt now. Each time, his heart skipped a beat due to her impact, his stubborn mind stepped forward and battled the real feelings, suppressing it all totally.

He mentally jotted down that his top priority would be to get Ishita to settle things between MIhika and Mihir. Once done, he would book the next flight back. Otherwise, this proximity and closeness to his wife was sure to play havoc on his self-controls or probably had already started playing with his senses.

Meanwhile Mihika had turned a couple of times to check on them. This sight had indeed been like a dream come true for her. Seeing her smile, Mihir cupped her hands, "maine bola tha na...they just need time for themselves and everything will fall in place"

Mihika nodded with a smile, highly impressed with her husband's plans and replied, "sacch mein, maine yeh sab itni jaldi expect nahi kiya tha...your plan is just brilliant Mihir...ab se buddu nahi bulaavungi..."

She went on to pull his cheeks in appreciation when he replied pulling up his collars proudly, "aaah aah...abi kahaan? This is just the beginning...aage aage dekho hota hai kya"

Mihika looked once more at the seemingly much in love couple behind them and replied, "mujhe nahi lagta ke ab kuch khaas karna padega...I mean just look at them Mihir...they are totally in love...will anyone even say that they aren't newly married or not on honeymoon?"

Mihir was quick to reply, "tum tumaare jiju ko teek se nahi jaante...He is ridiculously tough at times...yeh sab karne ke baadh bhi aisa act karenge jaisa unnse koyi lena dena nahi...uss act aur nakli shell ko thodna itna aasaan nahi"

Hearing Mihir's elaboration about her jiju's nature, she immediately stepped in, "oh oh...tumaari bhabi bhi kuch kam egoistic nahi hai...acche acchon ki band bajaa degi phir bechaare jiju kya cheez hai...akka needs tough therapy too!"

She was about to say more when Mihir snapped her short, "Oh bade aayi jiju ki chamchi!"

"Aur tum bhabi ke chamche..."

They both laughed at their taking sides for Raman and Ishita. When the laughs faded, Mihir voiced, "In short, bohat kuch karna padega to get them there...samjhe sweetheart?"

"samajh gayi mere darling pati dev!"

Mihika suddenly enquired, "accha ek baat bathao...tumne aisa kya kaha jiju se ke woh trip keliye jhatt se maan gaye"

Mihir gave her a naughty sly smile but she urged him more to tell. So he had to narrate it to her. At the end of it, she gave him a pinch on his hand, "CHEEE haan?? Aaj raat aana mere paas, tab bolungi yahi cheee...Oh God, main jiju ko kaise face karungi? No wonder woh kal se mujhe ajeeb se dekh rahe teh! Buddu ram, aur koyi bahaana nahi mila kya? Damn and how will I face akka?"

Mihir chuckled, "trust me, aur koyi bahaana bhai ke saamne nahi chalta...yahi ek tareeqa tha...warna kuch bhi bolta pakda jaatha...bhai bohat smart hai Mihu!"

She snapped him again, "ab akka se iss baare mein lecture sunna padega...aiyoo murugaa...how embarrassing can it get!"

Mihir tapped assuring her, "Yeh socho ke bhai kaise bhabi ko yeh baat kahenge..."

Mihika's eyes twinkled with the same mischievous glint that Mihir had while Mihir continued, "yahi baat se unnke beech woh awkwardness aayega jo dono bohat conveniently ignore karte aa rahe hai..."

Mihika couldn't deny that she was more impressed with this idea of MIhir. What if she had to face some embarrassment, it was going to do good for her akka and jiju!

She looked around and when none was noticing, she gave a quick peck on Mihir's cheeks.

Though not willing, Raman had to wake up Ishita when the announcement for landing came up.

She jerked up the moment she knew where she had been resting muttering a sorry uneasily. She smacked herself mentally for tugging his hand so tightly. She couldn't believe that sleep had this effect on her.

He chuckled at her uneasiness, "its ok...hisaab baraabar...yaad hai na? uss din airport mein..."

She nodded understanding what he meant and silently looked away while he chuckled, "bas yeh extra hogaya"

He pulled up his sleeves and showed the marks of her nails on his upper arms. The reddish brown marks indicated that she had tightly clutched and even dug her nails into his skin whenever there was a turbulence or perhaps whenever she felt a jolt in her sleep.

He rubbed it hastily and smiled at her, "Jhansi ki Rani kya bulaaya, tum toh neend mein bhi wahi..."

His words trailed as her fingers touched his upper arm. Even the feather light touch had the power to stop his taunting mode. She caressed the area in concern, "Sorry Raman...na jaane maine..."

Her concerned voice made him mellow too, "HO madrasan, ab tumaara emotional drama on matth karo...it's alright...main bas mazaag kar raha tha...pehle patha hota toh blazer bhi pehen leta...but its ok...next time yaad rakhunga..."

His impulsive, in the moment words meant that there would be a next time which also meant that he was already expecting her to snuggle cosily against him again.

The sudden realization of what he said hit both of them at the same time and it was evident from their uneasy body language that they both read between those lines.

The jolt due to the landing of the flights saved them from the situation.

Almost an hour later, Raman paced across the airport lobby scolding MIhir for every to and fro turn he took.

"Kahaan hai yaar tumaara driver?? How are we going to Ooty from here?"

Mihir casually replied much to the surprise of both Ishita and Mihika, "relax Bhai...abi aa jaayegi ghaadi...aap chill karo aur yeh chips khao"

Raman wasn't the one to cool down. His head was already boiling hot with the delay, "tumaare chakkar mein apna saara kaam chodke ab yahaan beech sadak pe chips khaavunga, huh?"

Ishita was confused, "Mihir ke chakkar? Somu mama ke..."

Mihika tried to explain before matter go the wrong the direction, "Jiju ka matlab hai ke ghaadi delay hogayi na...right Mihir?"

Mihir was about to nod to that when Raman scowled out as his head was not working in anger, "sirf Mihir hi nahi tumaare bhi..."

Before Raman could blurt it out in the open, they were saved by a buzz in Mihir's phone and Mihir yelled out, "Ghaadi aagayi...chalo..."

Raman smirked, "Oh hello...kahaan chalo??? Haan?? Yahaan pick up"

Mihir and Mihika were already walking over to the parking lot and MIhir called out, "ghaadi badi hai bhai...chalo, yahi pe hai..."

Ishita waited till Raman shook his head totally flared up and then followed him as he walked ahead.

The sight of the tempo traveller which had some travels logo on it totally blew up Raman's fuse. Mihir had made arrangements with a travels who had this 5 day trip of entire Ooty which also included pick up from airport.

Raman was adamant that he wasn't going along with a crowd of over enthusiastic people but then Mihir, Mihika and Ishita took turns and somehow cajoled him into taking that bait. He had to agree because there was no other viable option owing to the peak season rush. Flower show was on in Ooty and every other travels and independent cars were block reserved well in advance.

Sighing in frustration and mentally smacking Mihir for all the mess, he got into the mini bus and the sight was another big surprise for him. It was a group of honeymoon couples and every couple was busy in their own world.

He cursed under his breath, "paanch din paagal madrasan ke saat kam torture tha kya ab itne paagalon ek saath!"

Another surprise for both Raman-Ishita and Mihir-Mihika was when a familiar voice called out, "Ishita akka..."

They turned to the last row and there stood Vibu and his newly wed wife. They had registered married and were literally on elope mode from Delhi which also served as a honeymoon period for them.

Mihika was already mentally planning on how to include the new couple into their plans. She knew that Vibu was an excellent partner in such plans! She grinned thinking about pooja day when they had made akka sit on jiju's lap.

This was going to be fun especially after she noted her jiju's annoyed look seeing the sight of totally insane couples in their lovey dovey worlds.

Mihir made sure that Raman and Ishita sit exactly in the middle row so that even if he wanted to, he can't escape the sensations evoked by seeing the other couples romancing.

As they were led to the row, Ishita brushed past him muttering, "main window seat pe beitungi Raman"

Raman stopped her, "No..."

"What no Raman? Mujhe travel sickness hai...phir yeh matth kehna ke maine warn nahi kiya"

He showed a yuck expression and acted as if he will not sit next to her. He even showed an act where he went to sit near Mihir demanding Mihika to go to Ishita. He told to Ishita, "Ab mauka hai toh woh baat karlena apne behen se"

Ishita probed, "Baat??? Kaunsi baat?"

But Raman didn't wait to explain but went to MIhir who didn't waste a moment to pester him to go back. Raman cursed, "Yeh kis paagalon ke beech phas gaya yaar?"

Mihir was quick to reply, "Aisa matth bolo bhai...aap dekhlena...you are going to enjoy this trip! Sab ke saat hasi khushi kitna maza aayega!"

Raman glared at him as he tided back to his own seat. Mihika had already stepped out of the seat giggling.

Raman tucked in a bottle of water and kept some tissues and cologne in handy for her to use. She smiled at his double shades, on one side he taunts and on the other side, he is so concerned for her.

She kept gazing at him intently while he did all that for her sake. He looked up at her feeling her eyes on him, for a moment he didn't speak up but then shook up and gestured, "KYA?"

She shook her head meaning nothing while he enquired, "Mihika se kuch baat kiya?"

Ishita rolled her eyes wondering what was wrong with him, "haan hum humesha baat karte hai...aap particularly kis cheez ke baare mein pooch rahe ho?"

Raman mumbled under his breath wondering what and how to tell her while she placed her palm on his forehead, "Raman aap teek hai na? kahi climate change ke wajeh se kuch..."

He shrugged her hand off, "Tabiyat nahi dimaag kharaab hua hai..."

A weird sound from the row behind them snapped his words and Raman mindlessly turned around to see the guy kissing his wife's palm continuously.

He turned back to Ishita in annoyance and added, "aisa paagalon ke beech aake main bhi..."

"Paagal nahi hai...They are in love Raman...Just because we don't..."

Her words got struck in her throat while he glanced at her trying to figure out why she left her words incomplete. Or probably he had already found it out

[To be continued]

So how was it? pls do reply...aap sab ke comments se hi mera mood teek hoga...😭

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Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was a superb update..👏👏
Really enjoyed reading it..
It was hilarious...
Waiting for the next part..
Thanks for the pm..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
good update!!!!!!
plz write some super romantic update soon if time permits😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is going to be interesting. .awesome update..is gandhe mani track ne mood hi kharab kar diya hai..these os are the only relief. .Please update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...waitng fr their honey moon romance...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful Vidya. How do u manage to write so ell The jokes were too good. Raman's oneliners, desperation frustratin super hit. Mazz agaya padke
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update !
Indeed reading it , brought up some relief !
Ishita sleeping on his shoulder was so cute !
And he's already planning for some more moments 😆
Could Mihir and Mihirka be more cute than that ?!
Mihir telling the " reason " Raman accepted was damn funny ! 🤣
But both of them are ready to go through embarrassment for their Bhai and Akka !
And here we go ! Another couple in the plan ! 😆
Poor Ishra ! Caught up between all the lovey-dovey couples !
Even in his pissed mode , Raman always cares his JKR 😳
And Ishita still figuring out what she has to talk about with Mihika !
Mihir is right ! It will indeed be damn funny to see how Raman brings up the "famous talk" to Ishita ! 😆😆
Brillant update ! 👏 Very much needed !
Always eager to read more !
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM (:
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Posted: 10 years ago

omg its awesome

too good

love it yet hilarious

curious to know what mihir

said to aman

pls update soon n pm me

take care!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
this is a much needed steer away from the current track and I am so happy! Do continue and if you don't mind do make it an SS and give us more parts! 😃

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