#1| IshRa : Meherbaan FF | Thread One - Complete. Moved to Thread Two. - Page 54

Love your updates please update soon I eagerly wait for your update.They are very refreshing when compared to the current track

Edited my comment on page 84 kiara darling!

Aww...How cute. Ishra 'complicated creatures' and then the Men in black.

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Its like I'm watching a movie, kiara. And the dance moves are so vivid. You dance well, i gather?

You know what I think, you should skip physics and chemistry and become an author. Its not easy to put your imagination into words and that too in dance. Okay, become a choreographer then? Just satick to writing then.

I couldn't help but wonder what the background dancers were feeling given the sizzling moves of the number. Okay, let me concentrate on the leads.

Aww the hug and the sudden kiss was to die for and not to forget the almost confession, I love it kiara!

And here comes the rescuer. He will make her family apologize an accept haina? Oh I like this version of rkb lecture, all right.

One question though, does the media know Adi is his son too? And is Adi also being followed by his men in black. BTW I like the term, reminds me of bodyguard movie and also 'men in black'

And do I see another love story in making?

P. S 'hey I'm reading.'

Lovely story dear...loving the chemistry ,love,care and comfort between Raman-Ishita.Ruhi is like always a sweetheart ...love the way u described the dance moves and their conversations...i could visualize them talking animatedly and dancing through ur words ..Loving papa-beti team here ...IshRa are too too adorable here...you are such a beautiful writer ...looking forward to read the next part ...

Raman and Ishita dancing Bollywood style. Aww the kiss and hug. I liked Raman's lecture. Papa and beti have plan😈.

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Buttering me up, aren't we?

Pssht I don't dance well. I don't dance at all, correction. I took one step from the choreography we did three month ago ish. The left foot, right foot, bend and jump back straight - thrice- then hands pointing and gandhi baath step one.

Sure, and starve for my daily bread. You beside to writing seriously - be a Mills and Boons author and I shall follow your footsteps. :D

😆 Ask them.

You'll die in the next update. Lol. Contact me from heaven, eh? 😲

I think he'll make the family bow down to him and his family.

Big blooper. I don't know. What makes you think I know? I loved Bodyguard. It's a shame that there's a sequel planned because let's face bollywood sequels suck. Hope they prove me wrong *fingers crossed* and MIB.. #dead

No. I don't think anyone will like Shagun and Abhi here. I could have a spin off. Just saying. This one has too much going on as it is.

P. S. I know, you're that loving wife who reminds her hubby every morning that she lurrvess him.

Originally posted by: aaminah123

And who is doubting my love now?

At least you learned, I usually end up changing the steps or making the ones altogether Haha

Mi&B? You never know I might just publish a book someday 😉

Oh, okay I get the point. Wese the kid Adi is being nowadays he doesn't need a bodyguard. Is the movie that good? I have but seen it in bits and pieces. And now a sequel is in line? I didn't know.

P. S 'course I do!

Originally posted by: Liashna

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliant update...👏