'who r u' updated part 30&31 on pg43&44(completed) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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y no update yaar... very eager to kno wat happensss... update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello friends,sorry for late update,

Here is next part,excuses if any mistakes..

Part 11:

Raman:tum vusse angry nahi hai matlab,agar vo tumse shadi karna chahiye tho tum vuse accept karoongi?

Ishitha:nahi raman,vo kabhi mere jindangi me part nahi bansakthe.that was a blind mistake of me thatday.but this time,it will never happens. meri life sirf aarav keliye.

The room filled with silence for a while.no cry,no angry...

They both are stood like statues.

Ishitha said all her feelings about that unwanted person.Raman got all his answers.

It was a clean sky after a heavy rain.

Suddenly ishitha phone rings.

Ishitha:hello, aarav.

Aarav:hello,mamma,aap friend ko milne gayi thina?

Ishitha:mai vuse bath kar rahi thi.

Ishitha gives mobile to raman.

Aarav:friend aapse,mujse naraz hai kya?

Raman:tumhara friend tumse kabhi naaraz hothi hai kya?

Aarav:friend ,aap abhi tak aayi kyo nahi?i missed you.

Raman:I missed you too.maine nikalne vaali thi,lekin tumhara mamma ne ghar dekhrayi thi,tumne sab kuch tumhara choice arrange kiya na!tumhara mamma sub cheeez criticize kar rahi thi,ye aisa kyo,yaha kyo,...?

Ishitha drags her phone from raman.

Aarav:I know,she is old model.vo sab vunke pasand nahi aathi..

Ishitha:accha?mai ghar aake bathavungi mai kya model hoon!

Aarav:mamma aap?he cuts the phone..

Raman and ishitha both smiles and leaves.

They both in the car.

Ishitha:opens window and watches outside.

Raman:watches her.(st).i know ishitha,ab tak jo kuch huva mai vuse badal nahi karsakthi,lekin ab se mai vadha karoongi,tum aur aarav ko mai kabhi nahi choodungi,tum dono ko mai har kushi doonga..

He stops the car at icecream parlour and brings aaravs favourite one.

Raman drives the car with left hand.ishitha observes him.

Ishitha:kya huva raman,tum left hand se drive kar rahi thi,any problem?

Raman:kuch nahi ishitha,bus right hand thoda pain hai.

Ishitha:tho mai karoongi na!

Raman: no problem,I can.

They reaches home and enters.aarav sees them and pretends he is sleeping.

Raman identifies his acting,and signs to ishitha.

Raman:oh ishitha,aarav so rayithi,maine vuske liya icecream layana...,koi bath nahi,hum dono kaloongi...they both returns.

Aarav:nahi nahi mai soyi nahi..aarav getsup from the bed.

Ishitha:holds his ear,ab bathav mai old model hoon?

Aarav:sorry mamma,looks at raman and winks.

Raman:chodo ishitha,vo tho sach hi keh diyana.?

Ishitha:tum bhi raman..?

Aarav:chodo na mamma,nahi tho aapke gusse se icecream melt hojayegi.

Ishitha angrily leaves from there with icecream.

Raman and aarav smiles with a hi-fi. raman hugs aarav tightly.i am sorry aarav,I am really very very sorry and kisses him.

Aarav:kya huva friend?aap ithne senti kyo?

Raman:kuch nahi aarav,do din se tumne milne se nahi aaya na?i missed you a lot.

Aarav:tho,aap promise karo,mom ne aapse gussa bina ,aap kabhi mujse bath karna bandh nahi karoongi..

Raman:promise aarav, tumhara mamma chahe ya nachahe, mai tumse baath karrahoongi.

Ishitha:ishitha watches them,mai kab aaya tum dono ki beech me?she comes with icecream bowls.

Aarav:tum tho scene starting me se thina?

She gives the bowls to both.raman suddenly drops the bowl.

Ishitha:kya huva raman?

Raman:kuch nahi,maine kaha na, thoda pain hai hand me!

Ishitha:thoda pain?tum ek bowl bhi teekse pakad nahi karsakthi?show me once?

She drags his hand and folds his shirt hand collor.

Raman:I am fine ishitha,vus din accident ki vajah se thodasa wrist pain hai.

Ishitha:ye thodasa hai raman?,your hand turns to green colour.tumne x-ray kiya?kuch fracture?

Raman:ha kiya fracture nahi hai?lekin pain...

Ishitha brings her medical kit and starts folding red banded around his wrist.

Ishitha:tum bhi na raman,koi aise careless hothe hai kya?bacche hai kya?

Raman watches her silently.

Ishitha doing her work and aarav feeds his icecream at another side

Raman:oh madam!mai bacche nahi hoon,aap aise kyo daant rahi thi.aap dono kamal hai,ek tho nonstop daandt dherayithi,aur ek icecream derayithi...what a combination?

Ishitha:bacche ya bado mai aise hi dandootnga,meri margi..

She leaves from there for dinner preparations.Ishitha from kitchen..

Ishitha:raman tumko dinner me kya pasand hai?

Raman:nahi ishitha,mai ab javungi.

Ishitha:tum kaise jasakthe hai,you forgot you have pain?i don't allow you in this position?just stay here this night,kal javungi.this is final.

Raman:no ishitha,I have to leave..

Aarav:friend tum jaanthe nahi,mom salman khan ki sister hai,ek bar commitment karthi,uske baad kudd ko bhi nahi sunthi..

Aarav and raman laughs and they both starts playing video game.

Ishitha:tunme bola nahi,tume kya pasand hai?

Aarav:mamma,muje jo pasand hai,friend ka bhi vahi hai.

Ishitha:accha?aisi tho idli sambar banavungi.

Aarav and raman gets shocked.

Aarav:vo idli nahi hai,deadly hai,mai nahi kavungi,muje aaloo poori chahiye.

Ishitha:tum hi tho kaha na mai salman ka sister hoon!mai vahi karoonga!

Ishitha preapares aarav ka pasand aaloo poori and idli sambar also.they did their dinner and raman slepts with aarav in his room and ishitha in her room.

Today raman sleeps with his own son peacefully waiting for a new beautiful morning...

Next day morning raman leaves before aarav wakes up.

Ishitha drops aarav at his school,because he is some much better now. And she goes to MAWF to meet megha.when she came back to india,she didn't meet megha,because of aarav illness.

Ishitha:hello sharath,how r u?

Sharath:hai ishitha,how is aarav now.?

Ishitha:he is fine now,he starts going to school.btw how is megha now?i want to meet her.

Sharath:raman ne tume bathaya nahi?

Ishitha:kya?kisi bare me?

Sharath: megha US gayi treatment keliye.raman ne megha ki health condition keliye enquiry kiya,and he got details for her treatment,kisi doctor ka! he immediately arrangements kiya megha jane keliye.muje laga tum janthi ho is bar me,mai sochthi thi shayad aarav ki vajah se tum muje contact nahi kar rayi thi ithne dino se..

Ishitha:raman ne muje kuch nahi bathaya.vuska condition kaise hai ab?

Sharad:now she is fine.she is responding with treatment.she has to stay there a month under observation.every three months she has to attend doctors for improving treatment.after 4 or 5 cycles she will be fine for ever.

Ishitha:thank god,I wish she will be fine.

Sharath:thank god nahi,thanks to raman.hum sab ne hopes choddiya,par raman ki vajah se ye sab kuch huva.

Ishitha:you are right sharath.

She leaves from there and went to her clinic.she thinks about raman,how he cares about aarav,sirf aarav ko nahi,sab ka dyan kartha hai.she calls to him to say thanks.

Raman:hello aarav mamma,good morning.

Ishitha:thanks raman.

Raman:thanks kyon?tumhare idli sambar kane keliye!

Ishitha:tumne muje bathaya kyo nahi megha ki bare me?

Raman:tho vuske bare me tum thanks kehrayi thi,vaise maine kya kiya,vo mera duty hai.maine bolna chahthi hoon,lekin tumne pehle bathi nahi kiya,aur baad me aarav hai vaha,isiliye nahi bathaya.

Ishitha:phir bhi,thankyou so much raman,your are great.

Raman:ye sab taarif kyo?vo mera angle haina!lekin aarav ko bathav math,vo muje maroongi.vuski girls ko mai line mar rayithi..

Ishitha:vaise idli sambar kane keliye bhi thanks..

They both laughs and cuts the call.

Raman(st):mai tum dono ka smile keliye kuch bhi karsaktha hoon ishitha..

How is it friends.

Next part will be soon,

thankyou all...if u like it or not,comments boolna math..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
awesuummm!! im loving thisss!
cont soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Awesome..
Loved it !!
Continue sooon naaa...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
nice update
awww so sweet family moments
salman ki Behan 😆
BT still fill Raman have to tell her truth asap
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
need anothr update today...bcoz u didnt give update yestrday...
i think nw raman's nightware vl stop...
loving raman nd aarav's bond imprvmnt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
awww... chooo cute... i jus hope wen ishu knos dat raman is aarav's dad... she accepts him whole heartedly... am enjoying dis... cont soon... eagerly waiting for the nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Very good one. Sweet n small.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Naughty Aaravs dialogues are good. Loving this family bond. I hope Raman will do something to get Ishu in his life.Nice update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Nice update 👍🏼
continue soon

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