Curves and Edges - IshRa OS - Page 9

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Hey Aani

Wonderful OS...

I was easily able to imagine the whole scene unfolding in front of me. It was that descriptively written 👏

I read this twice, because some lines just touched the right nerves emotionally!

I like the way you described the anguish she went through, and a reminder of the similar anguish he went through with the accident prank and the hospital scenes!

The line I kept reading multiple times was this one... ""It was always meant to be yours; you just had to accept it.""

I would happily watch this scene if they showed it exactly the way you described it in the OS!😊

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Wow...that was a superb os..!! No one can had written it so brilliantly as u did..!!

That was really awsumm...u describe each and every emotion so nicely..!! each and every feeling was clearly visible in ur work..!!

Ishita and Raman's convo...then the way Ishita showed all her anger n him...how much hurt she was...and raman said sorry...they sought ut all their differences and issues..!! u showed everything so well..!! the teaser we get yesterday...u did a right justice with it..!! It fits to the situation perfectly..!! All the feelings ...emotions..pain...anger...hurt...can easily be depicted from it..!

Loved each and every bit of it...!! Wonderfully written..!! Good job..!!

And thanx fr pm..!! do pm me for all ur works..:)

take care

Originally posted by: whitelily

Great os 👏

Originally posted by: siddhantmaurya

Aani, the One Shot is beautiful, just sublime!!! Thank you so much for writing it. In fact thank u for all ur OSs!!

Loved the line u used in the beginning, the one by Castle!! I'm a big Castle fan too 😊

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was Just Awesome OS.😊

Raman and Ishita conversation was so nicely explained.😊

The whole OS was so beautifully written.😊

PriyaCherry.

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Such OSes are a relief to what we get from the show...Beautifully written meaningful conversation

loved it!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written one-shot...👏

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awww such a awesome os its not gone b happen in show BT hoping something like this to show in d serial

Originally posted by: arshi33

Lovely as always...😃

Love all your work...

This was fab too...👏👏

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Beautifully written! I think we viewers will be able to witness such heart warming conversations between Ishita and Raman only through your OSs. The show gives us no scope for these; we only get to see half baked tracks and haphazard climaxes to those tracks.

So what we all should do is, watch the scenes and then come to the forum to read your OS on that story line, for closure😆

Good job, dear. Loved the OS😊