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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: greenie
lovely...

thanks greenie 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: -Anku-
Reserved.

take your time Anku 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: remya1990
At last your are back with an OS Aani...that too with a Bang...
wonderful Aani...brilliant.
the emotional turmoil that both the characters went through was wonderful. The Ishita and the Raman here are just Sonali Jaffur's Aani.
You picked up them with the same quotient of anger,sadness,calmness,jealousy,relief ,possessiveness, insecurities, love and concern.
Brilliant brilliant brilliant work Aani...
Frankly speaking you put an end to the emotional eagerness that we are going through after watching SBS. And am really happy for that.
Thank you for this wonderful OS Aani.

Do you know what you amaze me...its your ability to imbibe the character as a whole and present it. The way you made Ishita to the character,the same way you made Raman too Aani. An absolute work of Negative capability.
Brilliant work is too small to say Aani...

Always stay blessed.

thanks Remya and really I am not half as good as Sonali mam is with them but I try but thank you for this huge compliment ☺️

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -Payal-

I can't tell you how thankful I am that you've found your muse again. Had really missed your stories this past week.

I love this song too. Who wouldn't.

Aani. I have to say, after "A Streetcar...", I was wondering how you'd come back with something remotely as good.

When I read your stories, I find that I linger over and savor every word...I force myself to read slowly so as to make it last as long as possible.

You have a way with words, and your ability to understand & get to the very core of these characters with utmost precision leaves me flummoxed each time.

THANK YOU for this...keep writing.

~P

thanks a lot Payal and this one is so blah but a block does that to you - it makes you write crap but the kindness of you guys amazes me thank you 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: .ProperPatola.
I really don't have much words to describe how beautiful it was, Aani! So perfectly wrote that I could visualise each and every thing. The title as rightly said is very very apt!

You kept the characters intact, love how both of their's past and present was put together to make each other understand where they stand now in this relationship.

I liked this line "They work together in silence restoring things to the places they belong to stealing glances of one another" as They did start to work together to clean the mess in their minds and in their relationship.

thanks Arsh and yep exactly that was the symbolism of the scene - cleaning the room together and working on their issues together so glad you liked the title and found the characters intact - I cant see a very remorseful Raman in my head for wanting his wife' attention nor can I see her having to be sorry for having a male childhood friend

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: aniiee
Omg!! YOU ARE SUCH A GIFTED WRITER!!

thanks Anniee 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: shalz_123
I m so relieved that u r back with an os. I LOVE your stories. Regarding this one..very matured presentation of thr inner turmoil..beautiful is the word for u..
Ps: plz dont go to hibernation again..write soon.. n when u do can u pm me plz...shud I send u a frnd request? Will tht help?

thanks Shalz 😊 and the hibernation wasnt self imposed it was a writers block 😳 accepted your request and will send ya a pm the next time ard 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

Amazingly described
Dear love every bit of
The one shot lovely
N love how both
Comfort each other
Then bracelet scene
Such a superbbb os
Keep writing
Take care!!!!!!

thanks Meenu 😊