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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

That was a sweet OS. I really hope there is a scene in the show soon where Ishita explains to Mani how good Raman actually is. And the drive in the end was beautiful.

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Hey ruchi

Smashing OS.. beautifully and senstively written whether its the convo between the friends or between the couple

Below lines show their love. You dont need big gestures and shouting from the rooftops to show it.

"I am in Raman's query to Ruhi about her Ishima, I am in his taunts about my poor culinary skills but still gobbles down the entire pakora plate and still asks for more in name of Papaji, I am there holding Ananya when he plays with her, I am there sitting with mummyji when he smiles looking at us and he is there covering me with blanket when it falls down at mid of night."

Next time u write please pm if possible. Wouldnt want to miss a gem from you.

Also am curious..yeh tht kaise aaya..kc ka asar ya lu mein the bulb Aani and I lit😉😆

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sreemoon

@sreemoon

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Simple hai but besst hai 👏

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

such tortures should keep coming😆amazing OS!!..loved it❤️

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Thankyou so much for the pm. This was so very amazing! I loved ishita here! She was so in love in this writeup, the conversation between her and mani was nicely penned, glad that she didn't become too much angry upon him as he is genuinely concerned...coming to ishra LOL i really liked the fun dialogues here, typical ishra! Gay dialogue has become a hit congrats 😆
His concern was well depicted in their room and when he picked her up and took her to the car, the ending was very good. I liked her saying that she wanted to spend time with her husband not her riend, enough to shut him up!
Great one, keep writing! You are really very good!

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

U have an amazing capacity to emote thru ur writing. Every time. It amazes me truly..continue to write such amazing stories.

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

loved the way ishita explained how she is there in raman's queries 👏
that gay line 😆
wonderful os- very sweet

thanks for the pm

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Arooj

@Arooj.M

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

How sweet Raman was in this OS. Beautifully written dear, loved it!

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Awesome OS...
Loved the way Ishu explained her and Raman's relation to him.. I specially loved the part where she explains where she exists in his life.. The gobbling up the pakoras part was too cute.. 😆 😳

"I am a gay and I hate you basking all his attention." - Ohh my days..This literally had me fall off my chair.. 🤣 I am still laughing like an idiot imagining Raman saying this..This has to be the best excuse ever for him to be J of Ishu and Naagmani.. 🤣 Too good yaar..

Loved the OS.. Thanks.. Keep writing more.. 😃

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Juhi

@JUHI.HI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

wow beautiful OS dear..👏.kash shw mein bhi kuch aisa hota

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