New ff: ~ Daddy Of My Baby? ~/Note(pgno 40) 17/1

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@Citronella

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

tooo goood yaaar...👏

continue sooon...

thanks 4 d pm😉

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

hey Thanx for d pm this part was nice Raman's emotions r very well penned y ishita is here still a mistry ?? update soon RU n Raman's relation is cute

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swathin

@swathin

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

superb update
curious to kn what ishita is upto

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

wow...suprb update...

loved it cmptly...

rb's feelings...i loved thm...

rb vs ruhi...looks lik tom nd jerry...coming up...

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Interesting update look like Ruhi and Raman have same behavior they will bond well when time past by.What is Ishita motive still look forward for next update.😛

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resh.rose

@resh.rose

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Hey this story is becoming more interesting👏

Thnx for pm

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

K...let me tell you...am confused...its ok...hope your next update clears the doubts...

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

I really liked the update..

Awesome..👏👏

The story is turning to be very interesting...

Waiting for next update...😊😊

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Angel

@hasiniangel

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

I am dying out of curiosity now

who is ruhi?? Whose daughter??

raman-ishita???

plzzz break the ice now

thanks for PM

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

You can say that this is really getting my brain questioning.

You gave such little information on the life history of Ishita...this is actually a suspense for me.

Waiting really badly for the next update. Raman loved at first sight? Well you mentioned earlier that they're a little different from those of the show, and here I can see the difference...to be true I actually like this Raman, but don't want him to lose his RKBness in this story. It just feels so right and Raman's character in the show placed in the situation of this story fit very well.

Raman and Ruhi's small fights are so cute, but looking at the after-effects of their fights it looks like they're damn serious. They fight just like two little siblings, they're conversations are very real, I am actually jelly that I din't come up with those convos.

Raman and Toshi's bonding is recognizable in it's own manner, even though there have been very less stills of their conversations, you can see their bonding visible in their trust, the mention of him sharing everything with his mother no matter what be the subject he will not fail to tell her was just pure gold. Parent-child relations are best like this, when they both trust each other completely, free of doubts, free of hatred.

As for your FF, it's amazing, it's having me just lay in bed staring at the ceiling thinking of scenarios as to what other reason would Ishita have to come to India.

Amazing👏

Please PM me too

Edited by yhmmylife - 10 years ago

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