New ff: ~ Daddy Of My Baby? ~/Note(pgno 40) 17/1

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Storyline and characterizations are going to be different from our Beloved YHM. I am planning some considerable no of chapters so that it can be a ff😊.

Baby??? Of course it is Ruhi the obvious then Daddy??? I don't know who the daddy is -okay.. I think I forgot who he is ..I will surely tell u after I get my memory back.

Before going to story- I want to tell you about How my title name is coined.

After toying with the words Daddy, Ruhi , Papa, Baby, Father and daughter I picked up Daddy, Baby.

After thinking a lot about for and of I have chosen of.

After contemplating about ? ! I have decided to choose both. Using ? at start and using ! for last chapter.

So that's how this title name became as Daddy Of my Baby?

It sounds soo cute right! (cute???? really -I am sure you might feel emetic bcoz that's exactly what i felt when i first decided this name.. after repeating it myself several times I felt its OKAY!!!)

Do hate me!😭 for all those syntax & logical errors that I usually do & going to do(I mean spelling & grammatical mistakes) Because I truly deserve your hate for my carelessness 🤢but plz don't hate my story.




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INDEX

Prologue >>> see below

Chapter 1>>> Click here


Chapter 2>>> Click here

Chapter 3>>> Click here

Sneak Peek>> Click here

Chapter 4a>> Click here

Chapter 4b>> Click here

Chapter 5a>> Click here


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~ Daddy Of My Baby?~

prologue:

"Where the hell is this sound coming from?"
Raman mumbled in his sleep, turning in his bed and burying his face in the pillow feeling disturbed.But after realising that the sound is only increasing, he made an attempt to find the source of the disturbance and he realized that it is from his omnipresent blackberry.

He fumbled with his bed sheet to catch his BB still closing his eyes.Who can call him at this early hour he thought. Of course it may be 7am but since it is a sun day.. his day starts at 9am, his friends and closed ones know it very well, so they don't call him at this time.He squinted through a half shut eye to see that he is getting an incoming call... soon realized that its some international number. Not having any idea who it can be he pressed the green button.

"Hello!" he heard an unfamiliar voice which is somewhat familiar to him. "Who...?" he replied lazily trying to getup.He sat up in cross legged position and leaned back against the headboard of his bed .He is rubbing his eyes with the back of his hand when he listened "Ishita, Shagun's sister" from other side. His eyes flicker opened momentarily with this information. He looked around before confirming that it's not any nightmare.

An uninvited memory came into his mind- the phone call which he received four years back, started with the same line Ishita, Shagun's sister. ..It was the same sweet voice which he is hearing now, which had carried the bitter news saying Shagun is no more in this world - making his world shattered.It is the memory that he couldn't get rid of it ,He couldn't live with it either.But he just choose to act like he forgot, that made his life easier to live.

But today? why Ishita is calling him now? After these many years...That means Ishita still has his phone number he thought. she is someone that he only know because -Shagun used to tell him about her all the time.She is someone that he know as his girlfriend's dearest baby sister but never met since she is living abroad.She is someone with whom he had talk only once before, that too over phone , which is the memory that he want to forget forever.

"Raman??" Ishita spoke again not having any response from him, which made him come out of his train of thoughts."Yeah! Hi Ishita.." Why are you calling me? he wanted to ask but "How are you?" he asked instead ,being polite.

"I am coming to India" he heard her saying.This is not an answer that he has ever anticipated being answered.He expected fine as her answer for his simple how are you but he got this reply which is completely irrelevant.
What? when? but why?? all those Wh questions are born in his mind but he remained silent,waiting to listen more from her."I will be there by tomorrow..." she said. Tomorrow that soon... what an early information he is getting.

"I am sorry .. for telling you this late.. but some thing very important came up.. so I took this decision just yesterday..." she said.
"It's Okay!" he replied laconically to get immediate reply from her"I will message you about my flight details.Can you please receive me tomorrow..."
she asked.
"Of course- I will..." he replied, suppressing his confusion.After a minute or two not having any thing else to talk..Ishita said "bye".

"Bye" he replied."Take care.." he quickly added , Its when he realized how much he really mean his word take care for her.

Of course he cares for her.. after all she is Shagun's sister. Anything related to Shagun is important to him...

That's how his early morning surprise/shocking very brief phone call ended, the phone call which reminded him his past,the phone call which is going to change his life drastically...

This end of his phone call is going to be a new beginning in his life...

So how is it?? will you read me more...😊

Edited by Spana_stylo - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Amazing start...Continue soon...



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..continue ...but soon..id feel ishita is bringing a child of shagun..who she feels is raman's.hope i am correct
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Very intrstng...amazng strt..pm me fr nxt...
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Very nice start ... coninue soon...
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Interesting. Continue soon. Pm me pls
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Liked it... plz do continuee😛
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interesting prologue 👍🏼
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Wow
New story
Continue and PM Me if possible

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