ISHRA SS: Woh Lamhe, Woh Baatein Koi Na Jaane Pg 25(last part)

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rutu83

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

loved how raman restrained himself from talking as ishita needed that me-time. lovely update
looking forward to the cute part 😊

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Nice and reflective update.its necessary sometime ur partner gives u ur space n Raman did that.lovd it

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

So beautiful this was Vidya..I loved how he sensed her pain inspite of her trying to hide it so much..and he wanted her to let go of her emotions..so he didnt even stop her from bundling up within her..I loved the way you expressed his deep desire internally to keep her forever happy..And aah..that beautiful song..I love that song..so meaningful and so true..very well written..Waiting for the next update 😃

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FieryLioness

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

amazing Vidya...

just read the both parts...

i loved the second part most...

loved it

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Loved the way you wrote the scene. There was nothing romantic in it yet it was the most romantic in its own unique way. Perhaps say they it true. Love doesn't need words when they can here the most from silence. He didn't say any consoling words to her but his gestures were enough to soothe her of her pain.

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sophee

@sophee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

This was beautiful Vidya 👏

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ALEHA

@ALEHA2011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Brilliant the drive and silence was so soothing no need for words

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Thank you for reminding me of the amazing sing and Safar. I loved your portrayal Ishra's uniqueness, silence usually is uncomfortable but in this case it is the most comforting.

Can't wait for the next part! Thanks for writing and sharing with us!

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VENBA

@VENBA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

The update was fabulous...👏👏

Thanks for the pm...😊😊

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Wow ... Cana I say that I was happy that they did not get romantic ... Ishita needed support not kisses and that is what Raman did

sometimes, a comfortable silence is all that is needed. Sometimes, a soothing presence is all that matters ...

Beautiful update V.

Loved it to the core 🤗