The Beautiful and The Damned - IshRa TS - Part 2 - Page 13

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@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

WOW in capital letters Aani. Very very intense... As much i dont want to, i feel myself saying Bichara Subbu. Dhobi ka kutta !!!

The exchange between Raman and Ishita was something else... I would love for these lines to be used in the show, really. Ishita needs that assurance, along with Raman's love!

Frm phone now, so dont have a quote for u...

This is perhaps the second best thing I have read. The first u know is the OS set after Param fiasco and Raman witnesses Ishita's breakdown. This is a close second I must say...

U do introspection best, even when u wrote Shagun's story.

Excellent Aani!!!

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Interesting how you defined the "making love" part. That entire dialogue of Raman's.

If it wasn't for the melancholic mood of the episode, I would have laughed badly. I mean Subbu called out Ishita's name when he was with his wife? I find it hilarious!🤣

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Thank you for granting my wish, it was sensitive indeed and the way you depicted their emotions and feelings was an absolute treat!

Loved it.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

wow, this was amazing, brilliant and intense👏👏

oh the raman-ishita conversation was too beautiful ❤️. loved everything about it
it would be a dream come true so see them reach this stage in the show

i dont feel bad for subbu at all.
it was understandable he still loved ishita but he was a coward and a total jerk. he could have stayed a friend and been there, in the most difficult phase with her. you dont just leave, breaking all contact with a person you claim to love.
no wife would tolerate a husband calling out to his ex when making love. she's right, he used her.

loved this😃
thanks for this wonderful piece of work😃

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

ress..

omg...subbus pov
something rlly unique n different
was so lovely the way u wrote girl...
some people dont deserve the happiness...
ishra convo awesum...

nd nd the title...apt...perfect..i loved the title of your story yrrr
the beautiful and the damned...wow

thnks 4 pm buddy...amazing story..

Edited by ankitasidana - 10 years ago

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

awesome update aani

loved the way you showed how raman feels about ishu, and the way both of them decided to try other things , very progressive and practical.

liked how you showed comparison of subu s feelings vs raman s feelings and determination and approach to life. one is left with kids and other had left ishu once because of not having own kids in future. what subbu got today? he had said that after few year of marriage, only kids can keep couple together but here also subu failed big time . he expected to get back to ishu but she has moved on with man who has completed her in every means.

superb description of subbus feelings and his regret.

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

wow it was brilliant I just love Raman n ishu's convo the way u penned Raman's emotions was marvellous subbu's feeling n regret was very nicely penned Thanx for pm

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

That was beautifully written. I really liked the way Raman mellowed down the moment Ishita touched him, the way they both held the newborn baby and of course, my favourite was the way Raman spoke to Ishita as she broke down over her infertility. What he said to her was just beautiful and I truly hope their relationship will grow that way in the show as well. You also described the regret that Subbu felt perfectly. I liked that he had a mix emotion of regret and happiness for Ishita.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

awesome 👏

wow it was a treat to read subbu thoughts on losing ishita. The wish to fight for his love at right time is now his guilt which is depressing him and suffocating him. he chose his way long ago and now he is facing the consequences. His life is miserable and its sad and i felt pity for him.Subbo thoughts and feelings were beautifully depicted.

wonderful story