My First os ever last part updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first os
I am regular reader of awesome writers of IF but never thought of writing but credit goes to YHM and obviously writers of this forum who encouraged me to try myself once. Enough of my blabbering.This os is based on yesterday's precap.
Ishita was just making mihika understand that Raman can't ever be romantic.He is among those who would even love laat maar k.He is so khadoos that he can't ever imagine him to be romantic.Raman was getting irritated with her continuous remark but before he could reply shagun piped up.How could she leave the chance of insulting Ishita(Aree uski ijjat ka sawal hai yaar).
Shagun:Tum galat samajh rahi ho raman ko Ishita.He is the most romantic person I have ever known.I understand tum dono ka relation waisa nahi hain isliye tumhe nahin pata but mere liye to Raman pagal tha and I tell you he would go beyond sometime (she said with an evil smirk).Everyone in the hall started feeling uncomfortable specially Ishita and Raman but shagun went on.Raman mujhe har roj as a prayer at least 10 baar I love U bolta tha.haina raman?
should I continue pleaseee do say.If you liked it please hit like button.Thanks😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey... nice to see you writing 😊 pls do continue
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sure do continue n pm m when u r updating
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nice starting... do continue for sure...
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well done lourel24. sounds superb. please please please continue. awesomeness!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone.That means really a lot.Pehli baar eshaas hua Ki how much my comment used to mean to my writers. would surely update soon.I have completed writing n soon will post it.Again thanks a lot.❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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waitng fr nxt update...pm me...
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Nice teaser..update soon😊
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wow..gud start
pls continue n pls pm me wenever u update...
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Hi!! Welcome to the writing club!! 😊

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