IshRa ss : Teri Deewani (END)(chapter 7: page 27) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful story ..👏
beautifully written...👍🏼
Awesome..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well

To begin with me, let me tell you something. I usually am dead against anything which involves forced sex, seduction or a doormat Ishita. Not particularly for Ishita but any female for that matter. The entire setup puts me off.

So, I was a bit apprehensive when I started reading it through and was not sure if I will continue.

BUT LEKIN KINTU PARANTU, despite the fact that every chapter had a bit of adult content, not even one line was out of place and no scene was crass.

The entire story was beautiful and though frankly, I guessed the suspense pretty early, yet your style of writing hooked me to the story. I can easily imagine KP and DT enacting this ... reminded me of the (in)famous scene where Raman tries to force himself on Ishita ...

Lovely work. Rushing now to read your other works.

Cheers

Bhanu.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AARMAY1

beautiful story ..👏

beautifully written...👍🏼
Awesome..


thanks 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: btalwar

Well

To begin with me, let me tell you something. I usually am dead against anything which involves forced sex, seduction or a doormat Ishita. Not particularly for Ishita but any female for that matter. The entire setup puts me off.

So, I was a bit apprehensive when I started reading it through and was not sure if I will continue.

BUT LEKIN KINTU PARANTU, despite the fact that every chapter had a bit of adult content, not even one line was out of place and no scene was crass.

The entire story was beautiful and though frankly, I guessed the suspense pretty early, yet your style of writing hooked me to the story. I can easily imagine KP and DT enacting this ... reminded me of the (in)famous scene where Raman tries to force himself on Ishita ...

Lovely work. Rushing now to read your other works.

Cheers

Bhanu.


adult content 😳😳😳😳 i know, now that I look back, I think, how the hell did I write that 😡😡
And I'm not in for sexual harassment too 😭😭
thanks for appreciating it 😳😳😳😳😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dochdoe


adult content 😳 i know, now that I look back, I think, how the hell did I write that 😡😡
And I'm not in for sexual harassment too 😭😭
thanks for appreciating it 😊



Well ... in case u have mistaken me .. I wrote adult content for a purpose .. TBH ... I have read enough crass work in the name of MATURE work ... so I prefer to call any sane work adult content so .. in case you got me wrong ... I paid you a compliment .. just realized it may have come across as a sarcasm though ... apologies for the confusion ... should have clarified beforehand ... 😳😳

And please, do not stop writing anything like this ... writing this brilliantly is an art and trust me forum really needs amazing writers like you ...

Cheers

Bhanu
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: btalwar



Well ... in case u have mistaken me .. I wrote adult content for a purpose .. TBH ... I have read enough crass work in the name of MATURE work ... so I prefer to call any sane work adult content so .. in case you got me wrong ... I paid you a compliment .. just realized it may have come across as a sarcasm though ... apologies for the confusion ... should have clarified beforehand ... 😳😳

And please, do not stop writing anything like this ... writing this brilliantly is an art and trust me forum really needs amazing writers like you ...

Cheers

Bhanu


oh... Definitely not buddy. I guess u didn't see the emocons :) i never took it otherways :D i guess I couldn't put my words in a right way. I actually loved your complement... Never written a story like this, i mostly write rom-coms :) take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok so i have read all of this story in one go n a single word i can think of is "OUTSTANDING".
u r supremely talented n i have to say that this story had such an impact every single line shook me .
HATS OFF TO U
i look forward to some of more superb work from u!
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Posted: 10 years ago
doch.. i read it 3rd time...
its one of my mosttt favourite ss' of IshRa
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Posted: 10 years ago
Again read...
It is beautifully written...
Something About it I liked is their togetherness...
I liked it...
I loved it...

Awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very beautiful story doc.
Don't know how I missed this before.
Totally in love with it.
The way you expressed everything was too good.

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